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Check the rules from the last mag or it could cost you votes.
Check in and post early if possible, verses are due Saturday. Pick a topic from the list.
should be a good one. lets do this.
oh geez saturday
i might have to rush a verse leaving for the weekend thats why
i won't be able to drop
but i don't want to be kicked out for one week i couldn't show. i have family reunion on kauai this weekend ace so i won't be here
I know this shit aint none of my business, but damn man... if you knew you wouldn't be able to do this this weekend, and you had the time to get online and post messages and whatnot, why didn't you spend an hour or so and drop soemthing earlier? I mean like as soon as the shit went up... just cause it's DUE saturday, doesn't mean you have to wait till the last minute to drop, ya know what I mean?
Oh well, like i said... none of my business... just sayin...
What happened to the pink sock sage?Quote:
Originally Posted by The Artist.
My Love is...Never Enough
I’ve finger traced the spaces between your face and faint lips
Inlaid is a painted statement of how engrained your shape is
In the vein of a saint’s embrace its, embedded ever so loosely
Within every strand of memory and depths of known beauty
Melodically embodying the thoughts that breathe anomalies
Such as the unconditional prodigy of the love that honors me
Though honestly the thoughts I speak reek of sub saturation
Not a word in this world can mean the love our passion rages
In that the fact remains this, beyond par we shall litter bliss
So known hope that no soul will elope below sin’s bitter kiss
With her grip and God taken imperfections I cherish certainty
For not a single note on this loam shall further peak eternally
Brushed red she blushes, he never knew such words to say
But in the pit of emptiness her complexion screamed today
Fist to fist with lip’s resistance, a fever to fail such feeling
Simpler a task to mask a laugh, than to exhale concealing
Minutes of embarrassment parented the will to slip nerves
As he mirrored fear in beauty and patterned her hip’s curves
With risk worth he twist verves and buried in “I Love You”
So she splintered back the words and returned it was true
A deuce of instruments orchestrated the same soul-harmony
Producing a single sound left harnessing both hard beliefs
Years passed and tears matched, their songs sung through
There will never come a day, that I can’t say I Love You
maybe you could stfu post messages and what not? i didn't make anny messages battles were set up on wed and im leaving on thursday for the ENTIRE weekend which includes labor day jackass. Sorry if i didn't want drop some trash verse and get dismantled. really dude you should stfu and mind your biz cause i don't go into any of your battles talking about how you gave me such a bad readQuote:
Originally Posted by word.smyth
ps Reunion went well lol
Ace of Aces wins and is now (6-1)
The Artist remains signed in and gets a loss (2-2)