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Elevation
elevation
both feet on top of my playstation
i run thru bars like ay athlete
more of an immortal technique
lyrical born mc, mystical creatura
with godly featuras gifted speacha n teacha
this website is just ay rehearsel
yall niggas is just the commerical
they look at me retarded
really im bravehearted
u cry ay river cuz ya minds in denile
i walk across with all my style
no luck im eternal
pop em like ay kernel
while i chill in back wit ay blunt n ay beer
i laugh at these niggas actin like ay frontier.
if u have ay sixth sense then u can feel
if u understand than yes u us real
if u readin then u know that my heart races
makin wake rappers go back to the basics
school of hard knocks
bad news like fox
getta ladda cuz im way up hear
where myself is the only thing i fear
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Re: Elevation
your bar's just seem like statements
and it felt you were just throwing rhymes together
and not having concept behind your verse
i think you need to work on the exact title of your piece
I see that your new to this site, but after while your
wordplay and pieces should get better
I would give you a 3 out of 10
You should read a bunch of pieces on this site or
any where else, where the writter's have some
accolades. Keep writting is the main key.
I got few pieces of up if you got time to RTF
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Re: Elevation
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