what could i do better.....first rap i ever wrote.

my lifes a struggle.....an i gotta maintain. sometimes resist and refrain from flippin loosing my brain. i done scoped the whole scene and my goals within range. jay luuuv dat paper. and he chasing some 'change''. situations don't change til' i do sumthin bout it. an my relationships strain if i'm not really about it. look here I done been battered many years in this game. plans came plans went but the goal still remained. not make it to the top. but til' my family's secure. so long days long weeks long months i endure. think you can handle it..........sure........jay not puttin ya down. think ya know what stress is ask a soldier on ground.