Brother Sheep: End of the World
This "End of the World" shit ain't Nuttin'
by Professor Frost
Quote:
Originally Posted by Brother Sheep's Speech on the day before the Great Velvet Death
This End of the World shit ain't Nuttin'...
(clears throat like Kontext)
Ehem,
Let it be known the souls of humanity have laid to death
Shamed the rest & slain the debt of air, to save the breathe-
Of Earth's atmosphere -- somebody ask heaven's Jesus "is it clear?"
Layers corrupt like a fresh mixed copy of Yeezus was here
Previous beer, weed, codeine, pills like X, use to keep us sane;
Years into the future they had to test troops to reap the same-
Escapism tactics --
When withdrew, made us monkeys do natural back flips,
Like we had reversed time's stream of evolution;
Enslaved, prison acrobatics
It's in our natural habit, to see sin & go grab it,
Till the truth seeps in through forms of static,
That disrupt our brain's airwaves & deconstruct society's stairways
Until we've stitched a blanket of ignorance, fabric by fabric
I watched neighbors have at it at the supermarket, clamoring for baskets
A rich facet, a "BITCH", a "BASTARD", a glitch; havoc
Each snitch & ratchet, traded life's death for death's life
Pain & sickness doesn't make the best wife
So...these people are living in what I see as 'a switched casket'
Ya dig?
When supplies go dry, scarce. & their eyes grow wide, scared
Look at the inner primal instincts they'll bear, you'll know why it's there
Humans use to be apes, evolved to walk -- then ruined, abused the race
These thumbs cruise with haste, & our motives are now infused with lace
Self-destruction is overdue & late, our noose is through the weight
We're just Mother Earth's nuisance, & fate? Is about to excuse our place
So either, fuck religion, embrace God, or choose the proof
Or let your weak mind have politicians go eschew ya views
Either way, we're all going to hell; we were born for sin
Tattered philosophies trickle down into twirls; torn in wind
Let those big wig fuckers hide in bunkers; thinking they mastered fate
Meanwhile...iiiiiiiiiiiii'll be just about to masturbate
The serene silence, sends shocks of calm that can rapture hate
So, that these last moments of survival can be elastic -- wait
I said, these last moments of survival can be elastic -- wait..
At least when the world ends, happiness can be captured -- late
When this lifetime ends, I'll be the one that wins;
Didn't need drugs or false beliefs to finish this plastered race
When the world wages wars; bombs explode & the sky pours
I'll release some knuckle children, smiling on my fractured face
Peace.
Re: Brother Sheep: End of the World
Deep piece, I imagine no one else commented because they were like me... kinda left speechless. I agree totally with your take and challenge back why do you even want to go to place you never knew just a promise of in the end... ya know. If life is what you make it then heaven is too... and if they call it hell so be it.
My favorite part:
So either, fuck religion, embrace God, or choose the proof
Or let your weak mind have politicians go eschew ya views
I WISH I had your mind at your age - you are a force to be reckoned with and I think this entire site should know it.
Re: Brother Sheep: End of the World
Quote:
Originally Posted by
CLA919
Deep piece, I imagine no one else commented because they were like me... kinda left speechless. I agree totally with your take and challenge back why do you even want to go to place you never knew just a promise of in the end... ya know. If life is what you make it then heaven is too... and if they call it hell so be it.
My favorite part:
So either, fuck religion, embrace God, or choose the proof
Or let your weak mind have politicians go eschew ya views
I WISH I had your mind at your age - you are a force to be reckoned with and I think this entire site should know it.
I'm old as fuck, ready to die.
Words of Wisdom.
Thanks for reading babe. I appreciate the time took out to comment on this and share your thoughts on it.
And the speechless thing is universal. I think we all feel a bit intimidated and might put off feeding a piece because of how we felt afterwards. It's natural.
"It's in our natural habit" hahaha
One Love.
Re: Brother Sheep: End of the World
Re: Brother Sheep: End of the World
Professor, first off i wanna thank you for your feed on my piece, you BY FAR leave the best feed across this site, better than anyone else. you should get an award for that lol...but here we goo...
Ehem,
swag
Let it be known the souls of humanity have laid to death
Shamed the rest & slain the debt of air, to save the breathe-
Of Earth's atmosphere -- somebody ask heaven's Jesus "is it clear?"
Layers corrupt like a fresh mixed copy of Yeezus was here
Previous beer, weed, codeine, pills like X, use to keep us sane;
Years into the future they had to test troops to reap the same-
nice way to start it off brotha, loving the multies, rapid fire flow here. bringing some deep shit right off the bat with a serious manner, i dig it.
Escapism tactics --
When withdrew, made us monkeys do natural back flips,
Like we had reversed time's stream of evolution;
Enslaved, prison acrobatics
It's in our natural habit, to see sin & go grab it,
Till the truth seeps in through forms of static,
That disrupt our brain's airwaves & deconstruct society's stairways
Until we've stitched a blanket of ignorance, fabric by fabric
I watched neighbors have at it at the supermarket, clamoring for baskets
A rich facet, a "BITCH", a "BASTARD", a glitch; havoc
Each snitch & ratchet, traded life's death for death's life
Pain & sickness doesn't make the best wife
again, fresh multies and rhyme scheme bro. wording and vocab is on point, u be speaking some real shit too, i like the approach u got going on
So...these people are living in what I see as 'a switched casket'
Ya dig?
When supplies go dry, scarce. & their eyes grow wide, scared
Look at the inner primal instincts they'll bear, you'll know why it's there
Humans use to be apes, evolved to walk -- then ruined, abused the race
These thumbs cruise with haste, & our motives are now infused with hate
Self-destruction is overdue & late, our noose is through the weight
We're just Mother Earth's nuisance, & fate? Is about to excuse our place
wooo, flames pouring with those multies bro, still speaking that real shit. this first verse was dope ked
So either, fuck religion, embrace God, or choose the proof
Or let your weak mind have politicians go eschew ya views
Either way, we're all going to hell; we were born for sin
Tattered philosophies trickle down into twirls; torn in wind
^favorite line of the piecce, fucking genious, every word, alliteration, imagery, flow, everything about it is fucking dopeee
Let those big wig fuckers hide in bunkers; thinking they mastered fate
Meanwhile...iiiiiiiiiiiii'll be just about to masturbate
The serene silence, sends shocks of calm that capture hate
alliteration, love that shittt
So, that these last moments of survival can be elastic -- wait
I said, these last moments of survival can be elastic -- wait..
At least when the world ends, happiness can be captured -- late
When this lifetime ends, I'll be the one that wins;
Didn't need drugs or false beliefs to finish this plastered race
When the world wages wars; bombs explode & the sky pours
I'll release some knuckle children, smiling on my fractured face
like the way u ended it with multies and alternating rhyme scheme bars to really finish off with a different style, but the same approach with the excellent flow and real shit. good shit
overall, multies were dope as fuck. the content was real and i like ur deep approach. i felt the emotion. pretty good imagery. good vocab. loved the flow, so smooth. and the alliteration u slid in some of those lines were great. excellent drop
@Professor Frost
Peace.
