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LLL RULES!
verses due thursday 11:59PST
Minimum Lines = 10 Lines
Maximum Lines = 20 Lines
Extension: Up to opponent
3 voting links required LLL champ, FL CHAMP and LLL Contender matches required
2 no shows you out for the fallowing week.
3 no shows you out for season.
@Smog
@Joe Boston
Smoggie sup my dude!
My friend... 10-12... hopefully I'll have it Tuesday or Wednesday
Iight joe I got 12 done
Should be real man and drop first bitch @Smog lol here we go
12 right atcha
One swift righthand,im aiming where the heart be
After the Bella Bond wont save you, theyll find me guilty like Mike Mccarthy
Your chick is Raunchy,ass to mouth for her is a routine
In the bedroom your Bukake,so after my boys might need your assitance to wipe her face clean
Mexican ass never be seen in an American state acting hard, ill rob you and take ur clothes
Survive? You Cantina in a rough location, better call ur family to hide u in one of those
Weve always been foes so if u see me were not shaking fucking hands
One wrong move theyll be searching ur DNA like Kendrick was collecting hairstrands
Tell your daughter i got my commands in position,dont get worried if she ends up missing
She better know her role and keep quiet, cuz ill beat her like Ahman Green if she dont wash the kitchen
Fucking hardhead you dont listen gonna feel the repercussions
If yall think this Manwell after im done better show the death certificate to one of his first cousins
Over a decade n u can't kill mics,plus ur job made ur fam real strife n near broke
So it's understandable why u tackle thieving teenagers.. it's ur only chance to feel like a hero
Take advice n make adjustments, build ya squad only wit champs
Cuz Hows JB gon win a title, surrounded by Boomer, Bart, Tony n Dan
U Can trust these fists'll leave u unconscious, ull just be stiff
N ur only movements'll be bowels.. from gettin the crap knocked outta u like Justine Kish
U talk that gun shit like u poppin an eagle, dawg ur a weasel
I mean the ONLY time joe spittin shots out.. is givin props to ur people
U jot down what u heard n see, but how u live aint in the words u speak, dork
Must be why ur so good at security... cuz all u fuckin do is observe n report
U ain't that dope so quittin is key, n if I here that u phat joe? I'm grittin my teeth
So if anyone says Joey crack.. they just hollerin that ur ass show wen fixin a leak
One swift righthand,im aiming where the heart be
After the Bella Bond wont save you, theyll find me guilty like Mike Mccarthy
no... lol,,, already starting with the "famous names" drops...
Your chick is Raunchy,ass to mouth for her is a routine
In the bedroom your Bukake,so after my boys might need your assitance to wipe her face clean
your second line is too winded to match your first
Mexican ass never be seen in an American state acting hard, ill rob you and take ur clothes
Survive? You Cantina in a rough location, better call ur family to hide u in one of those
cantina & cant in a doesn't go together
Weve always been foes so if u see me were not shaking fucking hands
One wrong move theyll be searching ur DNA like Kendrick was collecting hairstrands
another name drop,,,, not feeling the punch
Tell your daughter i got my commands in position,dont get worried if she ends up missing
She better know her role and keep quiet, cuz ill beat her like Ahman Green if she dont wash the kitchen
another name drop,,,and not a good punch
Fucking hardhead you dont listen gonna feel the repercussions
If yall think this Manwell after im done better show the death certificate to one of his first cousins
no...
you consistently stick to the same formula,...alotta similes & name drops...not to mention you barely used anything relating to him specifically...smog? nature? his pic?..nothing,,,6 bar battle with 3 name drops & 3 similes...I think u need to leave that concept on the shelf for a while & experiment with new approaches...personals/witty shit..
vs
Over a decade n u can't kill mics,plus ur job made ur fam real strife n near broke
So it's understandable why u tackle thieving teenagers.. it's ur only chance to feel like a hero
eh,,,, decent...
Take advice n make adjustments, build ya squad only wit champs
Cuz Hows JB gon win a title, surrounded by Boomer, Bart, Tony n Dan
nice....coulda been worded better but this is a good bar,....
U Can trust these fists'll leave u unconscious, ull just be stiff
N ur only movements'll be bowels.. from gettin the crap knocked outta u like Justine Kish
no...
U talk that gun shit like u poppin an eagle, dawg ur a weasel
I mean the ONLY time joe spittin shots out.. is givin props to ur people
nah.... too simple here...and shots out /shotouts don't gel here...
U jot down what u heard n see, but how u live aint in the words u speak, dork
Must be why ur so good at security... cuz all u fuckin do is observe n report
light here... but effective
U ain't that dope so quittin is key, n if I here that u phat joe? I'm grittin my teeth
So if anyone says Joey crack.. they just hollerin that ur ass show wen fixin a leak
bad closer..
overall, joe came too generic and passive... I think Smogs bars went up & down a lil... really only 2 bars of note in there....
v- Smog....
Quote:
Originally Posted by Joe Boston
v/SmogQuote:
Originally Posted by Smog
Had a better verse. Joe still writing statements that are over worded with a shit ton of useless information and similes, I see lol. Smog actually threw some punches in his verses. Joe just threw a W in the trash. You niggas really need to understand what a punch is before writing a bunch of garbage down, yo. I've read a few verses on here that really contained NO PUNCHES, just a bunch of text going no where. The key is to INSULT your opponent, I've always said this.
Over a decade n u can't kill mics,plus ur job made ur fam real strife n near broke
So it's understandable why u tackle thieving teenagers.. it's ur only chance to feel like a hero
Take advice n make adjustments, build ya squad only wit champs
Cuz Hows JB gon win a title, surrounded by Boomer, Bart, Tony n Dan
vs
nada
weak battle, thought Smog had cool first four bars, dude dropped dope against me kinda fell off i thought.. joe you were all over the place, gotta come with something consistent, and not just the same idea same punch just changing then name ... idk just didn't think u dropped anything quotable here some stuff seemed stretched others seemed statementish, closer was ehhhhhhh but didn't land for me... after the first 4 lines i thought Smog ended it .
vote Smog
Quote:
Originally Posted by Joe Boston
I think Joe overdosed on similes and that really impacted the quality of his verse. He also used a cpl wordplays that were either used or forced. If you're going to flip a used wordplay it has to be done with a unique twist and unfortunately there wasn't any. Smog had a decent showing and won this comfortably.Quote:
Originally Posted by Smog
v-Smog
Weve always been foes so if u see me were not shaking fucking hands
One wrong move theyll be searching ur DNA like Kendrick was collecting hairstrands
Fucking hardhead you dont listen gonna feel the repercussions
If yall think this Manwell after im done better show the death certificate to one of his first cousins
vs
Over a decade n u can't kill mics,plus ur job made ur fam real strife n near broke
So it's understandable why u tackle thieving teenagers.. it's ur only chance to feel like a hero
Take advice n make adjustments, build ya squad only wit champs
Cuz Hows JB gon win a title, surrounded by Boomer, Bart, Tony n Dan
U jot down what u heard n see, but how u live aint in the words u speak, dork
Must be why ur so good at security... cuz all u fuckin do is observe n report
Seen better last week from you guys. Weak battle here - but at least you guys did put in effort. Joe still noticed a few forced wps, but other than that you didn't really bring some dopeness you capable of. Smog, you weren't as inconsistent and threw some ok punches. A lot of misses between the two but Smog had less misses and had better concepts.
v/ Smog
One swift righthand,im aiming where the heart be
After the Bella Bond wont save you, theyll find me guilty like Mike Mccarthy
Fucking hardhead you dont listen gonna feel the repercussions
If yall think this Manwell after im done better show the death certificate to one of his first cousins
Vs.
Take advice n make adjustments, build ya squad only wit champs
Cuz Hows JB gon win a title, surrounded by Boomer, Bart, Tony n Dan
U jot down what u heard n see, but how u live aint in the words u speak, dork
Must be why ur so good at security... cuz all u fuckin do is observe n report
U ain't that dope so quittin is key, n if I here that u phat joe? I'm grittin my teeth
So if anyone says Joey crack.. they just hollerin that ur ass show wen fixin a leak
Wasnt expecting botw here but was expecting alot better than this.
V/smog
Smog wins