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@Art.
@MV
One more time my dude .. 10?
sup sup. im thinking 14.
Yeah that’s fineQuote:
Originally Posted by MV
@MV 16 done!
hit me when u ready my dude
Quote:
Originally Posted by Art.
its by a Miracle you got here so you hating in the worst way
better patch that up in a hurry, he's going to need to be your First Aid
i was supposed to battle Spree, Artificially holding that slot?
the first player vacated and ur in his spot, so due to recent updates im facing a BOT
here is a thought, blick you and it won't register cuz we know you oh so slow
when you really past down like wearing ya brothers clothes and ya chromosomes low
keepin you at arms' length now kill yourself, how many ways i gotta call you a retard
its all perspective, 6ft across isnt is that far across so id rather see you depart
big toast im glad we got to lock horns one time before this bitch croaked
im giving Art his flowers, he might not know he is dead until he reads this R.I.P.oste
chute i get ur bitch get REALLLL high then i fuck her, had her on cloud 9 this summer
every time we link up she gets nuts on her back, I'm not just her skydiving instructor
my blade says u running out of luck if your family aint giving me the bucks
trim the fat so everything left of Artisan Box, then ill deliver the premium cuts
take those same parts at stage them, rearrange them, frame them
to add "Umpf to my punches"
ill have everyone look at this graphic portrayal of Art a statement
ur little buzz is over, ur a fly in my ear, a dumbass too who u gonna scareQuote:
Originally Posted by Baron Mynd
ur like anatomy, fuck a pancreas im scattering ur body parts everywhere
U rat, dont respect the movement, exposed w/ a wire, so expect retribution
champ this? Id say let the conduit, nd just hope he dies from electrocution
your a coward, fuck pickin the mic up, all that stuff that you write sucks
used to think u were a bold soule, til i saw it was just dagel fuckin the site up
I'm driven, ahead of my grind, u? on my dick cause I'm better with rhymes
So get the fuck off my D MV, youll always be known for stretching your lines
a legend? post your links cuz.. beatin me? you must be on big drugs
these mags will leave u laydoubt crying, even louder than that bitch was
u have that same complex, but homie trust the feeling is nonsense
I worried about diluting the HOF, & ur getting killed for stealin its concepts
But..your girlfriends a find, and i know you like to pretend shes a dime,
I'm not saying shes a cow, boy but she does belong on their offensive line
creepy AF, im battling a fake ,I said 10 and wanted to set a mandatory date
but you insisted we lay 14s down, cause ur pedo & a fan of statutory rape
good luck homie.
its by a Miracle you got here so you hating in the worst way
better patch that up in a hurry, he's going to need to be your First Aid
This is played as hell man
i was supposed to battle Spree, Artificially holding that slot?
the first player vacated and ur in his spot, so due to recent updates im facing a BOT
Eh, this coulda been worded way better man. I like the whole bot update concept tho
here is a thought, blick you and it won't register cuz we know you oh so slow
when you really past down like wearing ya brothers clothes and ya chromosomes low
Nah
keepin you at arms' length now kill yourself, how many ways i gotta call you a retard
its all perspective, 6ft across isnt is that far across so id rather see you depart
This was pretty good
big toast im glad we got to lock horns one time before this bitch croaked
im giving Art his flowers, he might not know he is dead until he reads this R.I.P.oste
Again the wording was off, but I liked this concept a lot.. I’ve seen give art his flowers done before tho
chute i get ur bitch get REALLLL high then i fuck her, had her on cloud 9 this summer
every time we link up she gets nuts on her back, I'm not just her skydiving instructor
Decent
my blade says u running out of luck if your family aint giving me the bucks
trim the fat so everything left of Artisan Box, then ill deliver the premium cuts
Artisan is played for art but this was executed well
take those same parts at stage them, rearrange them, frame them
to add "Umpf to my punches"
ill have everyone look at this graphic portrayal of Art a statement
Decent
Vs
ur little buzz is over, ur a fly in my ear, a dumbass too who u gonna scare
ur like anatomy, fuck a pancreas im scattering ur body parts everywhere
Lmfao fire
U rat, dont respect the movement, exposed w/ a wire, so expect retribution
champ this? Id say let the conduit, nd just hope he dies from electrocution
Fire
your a coward, fuck pickin the mic up, all that stuff that you write sucks
used to think u were a bold soule, til i saw it was just dagel fuckin the site up
Haha nice
I'm driven, ahead of my grind, u? on my dick cause I'm better with rhymes
So get the fuck off my D MV, youll always be known for stretching your lines
This was executed nicely but I’ve seen dmv before against him, this was decent tho
a legend? post your links cuz.. beatin me? you must be on big drugs
these mags will leave u laydoubt crying, even louder than that bitch was
Ha, not bad. Shout out lay doubt tho. (U coulda worded this to be harsher)
u have that same complex, but homie trust the feeling is nonsense
I worried about diluting the HOF, & ur getting killed for stealin its concepts
Great wording, this was decent
But..your girlfriends a find, and i know you like to pretend shes a dime,
I'm not saying shes a cow, boy but she does belong on their offensive line
Lmfaoo, nah this a miss for me, funny tho
creepy AF, im battling a fake ,I said 10 and wanted to set a mandatory date
but you insisted we lay 14s down, cause ur pedo & a fan of statutory rape
Lol nice
This was a pretty tight battle, I think arts verse was super fire and it made it not really close. Mv had some decent lines tho I just think some of his concepts and wording were really off. Gotta go with art on this one. Good shit brehs
v/ Art
its by a Miracle you got here so you hating in the worst way
better patch that up in a hurry, he's going to need to be your First Aid
I thought this was clever with the quote
i was supposed to battle Spree, Artificially holding that slot?
the first player vacated and ur in his spot, so due to recent updates im facing a BOT
I'm not sure about this one, chief
here is a thought, blick you and it won't register cuz we know you oh so slow
when you really past down like wearing ya brothers clothes and ya chromosomes low
Kinda wordy
keepin you at arms' length now kill yourself, how many ways i gotta call you a retard
its all perspective, 6ft across isnt is that far across so id rather see you depart
Got wordy again with "isn't is"
big toast im glad we got to lock horns one time before this bitch croaked
im giving Art his flowers, he might not know he is dead until he reads this R.I.P.oste
This would be cool if it wasn't for the R in RIP throwing it off
chute i get ur bitch get REALLLL high then i fuck her, had her on cloud 9 this summer
every time we link up she gets nuts on her back, I'm not just her skydiving instructor
"I get your bitch get" threw off the setup while I'm not just her sky diving instructor could be worded harsher too
my blade says u running out of luck if your family aint giving me the bucks
trim the fat so everything left of Artisan Box, then ill deliver the premium cuts
Liked the concept
take those same parts at stage them, rearrange them, frame them
to add "Umpf to my punches"
ill have everyone look at this graphic portrayal of Art a statement
This ain't it broski
MV, I feel like wording hurt you a lot in this verse. Definitely missed some thing in the editing room. Had some cool concepts that really just needed re worked.
Vs
ur little buzz is over, ur a fly in my ear, a dumbass too who u gonna scare
ur like anatomy, fuck a pancreas im scattering ur body parts everywhere
The setup a bit wordy but the punch was cool
U rat, dont respect the movement, exposed w/ a wire, so expect retribution
champ this? Id say let the conduit, nd just hope he dies from electrocution
Cool
your a coward, fuck pickin the mic up, all that stuff that you write sucks
used to think u were a bold soule, til i saw it was just dagel fuckin the site up
Fuck you
I'm driven, ahead of my grind, u? on my dick cause I'm better with rhymes
So get the fuck off my D MV, youll always be known for stretching your lines
Nice
a legend? post your links cuz.. beatin me? you must be on big drugs
these mags will leave u laydoubt crying, even louder than that bitch was
Nice nameplay
u have that same complex, but homie trust the feeling is nonsense
I worried about diluting the HOF, & ur getting killed for stealin its concepts
Lol
But..your girlfriends a find, and i know you like to pretend shes a dime,
I'm not saying shes a cow, boy but she does belong on their offensive line
Solid
creepy AF, im battling a fake ,I said 10 and wanted to set a mandatory date
but you insisted we lay 14s down, cause ur pedo & a fan of statutory rape
I mean ... You said "I said 10" which is less than 14, so even if you set a mandatory date wouldn't that still make you a pedo too?
Art, besides the wording in that last bar I'd say you did enough to get this win. Pretty consistent verse with some hard hits. Vote Art The Clown
RIGHT lmaoQuote:
Originally Posted by Soule, The Samurai
Anyways….
Mv had the opener, skydive, premium cuts
Everything else either didn’t hit for me or like soule said came off wordy
Some I had to read twice cuz ur choice of words was throwing me off a bit
Art had conduit, laydoubt(so cool wish I could think of something like this lol)
Offense line was iight,, thought bold soule could of been better.. overall pretty consistent verse.. punches thru out
Closer was alright Vote ART
MV
- first aid was good but I thought the bar you quoted was better so takes some impact away. Half pts
- bot was OK
- didn't like past down
- don't like 6ft across
- RIPoste I don't get
- skydiving instructor was meh
- I liked Artisan Box
- didn't like the closer
Vs
Art.
- I liked the anatomy wordplay but thought the punch was weird. Half pts
- digging conduit
- lol @ bold soule
- thought dmv was dope
- didn't like "u must be on big drugs" but the punch was cool. Half pts
- hof read weird to me
- cowboy was funny
- closer was worded well but would've worked better if he said 14 and you just checked. Half pts
I got art taking this comfortably.
v/ Art.
its by a Miracle you got here so you hating in the worst way
better patch that up in a hurry, he's going to need to be your First Aid
I thought you could of swapped the lines out with each other and it would have yielded better results. Not a strong opener, but I liked the personal tone.
i was supposed to battle Spree, Artificially holding that slot?
the first player vacated and ur in his spot, so due to recent updates im facing a BOT
You know what? I actually liked this. Lol.
here is a thought, blick you and it won't register cuz we know you oh so slow
when you really past down like wearing ya brothers clothes and ya chromosomes low
Wasn't feeling this.
keepin you at arms' length now kill yourself, how many ways i gotta call you a retard
its all perspective, 6ft across isnt is that far across so id rather see you depart
Wasn't feeling this.
big toast im glad we got to lock horns one time before this bitch croaked
im giving Art his flowers, he might not know he is dead until he reads this R.I.P.oste
Getting better.
chute i get ur bitch get REALLLL high then i fuck her, had her on cloud 9 this summer
every time we link up she gets nuts on her back, I'm not just her skydiving instructor
This would have been the ideal time to build momentum off your previous bar heading into the closer, but it was somewhat of a miss for me.
my blade says u running out of luck if your family aint giving me the bucks
trim the fat so everything left of Artisan Box, then ill deliver the premium cuts
Didn't like this nameflip variant.
take those same parts at stage them, rearrange them, frame them
to add "Umpf to my punches"
ill have everyone look at this graphic portrayal of Art a statement
This was a nice closer but the "a statement" felt out of place in how you worded the last line. It didn't do the overall bar any justice.
ur little buzz is over, ur a fly in my ear, a dumbass too who u gonna scare
ur like anatomy, fuck a pancreas im scattering ur body parts everywhere
I wasn't big on having to warp my pronunciation of anatomy to make your pronunciation of it work for me. I prefer to have it be more straightforward, but I do it anyways and this wasn't too over the top for me so whatever LOL. I liked the subtle personal.
U rat, dont respect the movement, exposed w/ a wire, so expect retribution
champ this? Id say let the conduit, nd just hope he dies from electrocution
Cool wordplay variant.
your a coward, fuck pickin the mic up, all that stuff that you write sucks
used to think u were a bold soule, til i saw it was just dagel fuckin the site up
Lmao
I'm driven, ahead of my grind, u? on my dick cause I'm better with rhymes
So get the fuck off my D MV, youll always be known for stretching your lines
Dope nameflip.
a legend? post your links cuz.. beatin me? you must be on big drugs
these mags will leave u laydoubt crying, even louder than that bitch was
Lmao. Fire.
u have that same complex, but homie trust the feeling is nonsense
I worried about diluting the HOF, & ur getting killed for stealin its concepts
Dope.
But..your girlfriends a find, and i know you like to pretend shes a dime,
I'm not saying shes a cow, boy but she does belong on their offensive line
Wasn't feeling this.
creepy AF, im battling a fake ,I said 10 and wanted to set a mandatory date
but you insisted we lay 14s down, cause ur pedo & a fan of statutory rape
Decent.
MV wasn't able to get a consistent stretch in his verse where he would follow up with solid punches. Art on the other hand succeeded and managed to do it quite well.
v-Art
5-0 art wins