RW WK3: Jack Hallows vs Spree (Jack wins by NS))

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Bars due Friday the 1st

Public voting closes Sunday the 3rd

First person to check in has their choice of side-kick.
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Overall public vote = 1 vote

MV’s vote = 1 vote

Bags vote = 1 vote

This themed round requires that you disrespect your opponent and their ability to be a proper side-kick from the perspective of a tried and true side-kick, an example of which would be:

I spun by sponge bobs house to spray you, bought a fresh box to lay you
Ill make good work putting Pat on his back got a star in the dirt making angels

Posting explanations / references below your bars is strongly recommended.

Rebuttals, late drops & no shows are an instant loss.

(1 x 24hr extension per person for the whole event)

Foggy Nelson (Marvel) vs Cassandra Cain (DC)
@Spree @Jack Hallows

this is what i’m talking about. got my boy Foggy Nelson all day.

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Foggy Nelson, Best Friend & Legal Partner of Matt Murdock, Daredevil aka Devil of Hell’s Kitchen.

vs

Cassandra Cain, aka Orphan aka Robin aka Batgirl. Ex-assassin.

yea you could break my arms, foo. shank my moms? coo. crank my jaw too
but i know the best self defense method of all, boo: Law Fu
in my rap disposition i have convictions to throw your ass into prison
or i’ll have family enforcement escort this Orphaned lass back in the system
so stand n flex w/ ya lil spandex, leather & feather crew, but know that’s all you’ll ever do
cuz a bat wouldn’t Dare flutter into Hell’s Kitchen else get mixed in the Devil’s stew…
i rest my case.

Check

aint gone lie i was on the lookout for this. imo jack might have best verse had humor punch and all

Apologies Jack I’m too busy for this stuff.

i’m going to come to your house and do your chores.

I can write a verse this evening if you want. Up to you and mods

of course brother! i’d have it no other way. but if it’s fire, you’re automatically disqualified lol.

Fire from Jack. The punches are effective but the real mastery of this one is in his characterisation. He didn’t just write against his opponent’s character but also encapsulated his own. That’s not easy to do, shows a real depth of skill. I didn’t know anything about Foggy before reading this but I feel like his voice really came through in the verse, it left me with a strong sense of who Foggy is and what he’s about. Very well done.

Smooth writing Jack, had a "make it look effortless" thing going on and the closer was cool as fuck.

Shame Spree was short on time, if he was a deadbeat dad this would've been a dope battle.