Re: Lenox - London Transport
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Originally Posted by
Soule
Beat is sick. Wu Tang type ish. I think your flow and delivery is smooth. Gives me Ghostface vibes. I'd like to see you tackle a beat and ride it (no homo). While you do your thing here the beat has a little too much to flow on. It's nice to see you drop a track. This felt more like a key style over a best if that makes sense. Good shit but I'd like to see more.
Yo I appreciate the feedback. I’m actually super new to recording so I’m tryna figure out my style or how to make songs even I’ll keep working tho. Thx
Re: Lenox - London Transport
Definitely have potential. Keep it up bro
Re: Lenox - London Transport
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Originally Posted by
Fresh
I wasn't expecting it to be this good.
The pro's
- rode the beat well for the most part (faltered a couple times but overall pretty good)
- lyrics were cool because they flowed well although i didn't always know what you were talking about
- beat choice suits you
areas of improvement
- need to project your voice more. you're using your head voice but you gotta use your chest voice
- more punchlines (this seemed like a swag n flow piece with flow heavily tipping the scale)
Overall enjoyed it but definitely need to project your voice more
keep at it
Yooooo fressshh. Thank u bro. Thanks for all the feedback too. In regards to the punchlines yea I agree. It’s a song that’s gonna be on my ep that’s all swag and flow really
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I’ll start tryna project my voice more, I feel like if I try to really rap I sound wack. Idk lol
Re: Lenox - London Transport
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Originally Posted by
Wuxia
This actually sounds alot like the current underground hip-hop trend. It's going to take a bit of effort on your part to differentiate yourself from the crowd because there are alot of dudes with similar production and swag/flow. With that said...I loved it. Everything I just pointed out was done so that you realize for yourself not to get lost in the shuffle. The writing is great, the flow is on point. You did sound kind of, I don't know, quiet and reserved on the beat. But I could sense you were comfortable with your material, enough where you definitely put swag into it without it coming off unnatural. 2:30 seconds is a bit short for me, especially with the outro included. Maybe go for 3 minutes at least on each track. That gives me 2 verses and 3 hooks, and I think that would suit you as well. I'm not opposed to just doing a verse with no hook, as long as the length of the track is extended so that the verse doesn't leave you wanting. So yeah, it's dope. Props, man.
Yoooo. Thank you bro. This message really pushes me to keep going. Last few days I haven’t been able to finish this track cuz I’m literally stuck.. I can’t find my flow right now it’s so fucking frustrating
Re: November 2023 - Nominations (Audio)
@Soule
listen to mine and lmk if it deserves a nomination
Re: November 2023 - Nominations (Audio)
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Originally Posted by
Lenox
@
Soule
listen to mine and lmk if it deserves a nomination
The London one? I think it's good but I wanna hear you drop a track incorporating the feedback and advice you were given. I.e. riding the beat and using your chest.
Re: November 2023 - Nominations (Audio)
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Originally Posted by
Soule
The London one? I think it's good but I wanna hear you drop a track incorporating the feedback and advice you were given. I.e. riding the beat and using your chest.
Alright bet
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I thought I rode the beat personally but I agree on using my chest 1000
Re: November 2023 - Nominations (Audio)
It's one of those underground wu tang beats that has a lot going on so even when you're vibing with it it still sounds like a freestyle. I wanna see something with more rhythm personally.
Re: Lenox - London Transport
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Originally Posted by
Art.
ay never knew ya did audio.
This was cool, but sounds like your whispering. are you new to audio ? and are you reading your lyrics as your rapping them? my advice would be try to memorize most of your shit. and have the pad or note as reference. otherwise you almost fall into the trap of just reading and your voice gets stuck in that monotonish place lol
i liked the lyrics though, regardless of punch lines , beat seems like something to just free verse on. I enjoyed it doe keep it up
hit my audio when ya get a chance.
Thank u for the feedback bro I’m new to recording. I’ll take that memorizing part seriously from now on tho thank u. And sure will
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I wasn’t tryna whisper just going with the smooth approach
Re: Lenox - London Transport
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Originally Posted by
Wuxia
You remind me of Napoleon Da Legend. Which is a praiseworthy compliment. You should give him a listen to see what I mean. I thought the track was dope, I strictly listen to underground hip-hop so when I say your music resonated with me you have to understand I'm listening from a different perspective than most mainstream listeners. Lol. You put an EP or Album on Apple Music and I'd definitely cop it because I listen to rappers with your style alot.
Damn thank u bro. I’ll let u know when my ep is finished and on streaming so u can cop it. That would mean a lot for sure
Re: Lenox - London Transport
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Originally Posted by
Smog
Love it actually. Love the soft melody chill vibe. The chill n just flow shit. Dope bruh
Thank u breh
Tryna have my whole ep with this vibe
Re: Mimic - Preaching: Part One
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Originally Posted by
Soule
It's a year old lol. Stop upping old threads
Stop deleting my posts you mod power tripping faggot. I’m giving mimic feedback
Nah fr tho. Stop telling people what the fuck to do and what to post that shit is legit annoying asf
& yea I agree with
@Mimic
shit was dope.
@miracle
drop some feed on my song when u can
Re: Mimic - Preaching: Part One
I'm an admin. It's literally my job. If you don't like it, log off and seek therapy. You're annoying, unstable and unreliable. It's gotten to the point where Spit doesn't even want to be your friend anymore because he's realizing you're a sociopath.
Re: Mimic - Preaching: Part One
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Originally Posted by
Soule
I'm an admin. It's literally my job. If you don't like it, log off and seek therapy. You're annoying, unstable and unreliable. It's gotten to the point where Spit doesn't even want to be your friend anymore because he's realizing you're a sociopath.
@God of War
Tell this mod to stop deleting posts like a power tripping little bitch.
He’s literally always telling people when and when not to post shit. It’s fucking annoying
I’ve been here for years and have NEVER had that problem till this faggot got mod powers. Unfortunately he abuses them from time to time. Pretty sad to see he has no power or say in his real life so he takes it out on the only little control he has. Which is on an Internet forum
Re: Mimic - Preaching: Part One
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Originally Posted by
Lenox
@
God of War
Tell this mod to stop deleting posts like a power tripping little bitch.
He’s literally always telling people when and when not to post shit. It’s fucking annoying
I’ve been here for years and have NEVER had that problem till this faggot got mod powers. Unfortunately he abuses them from time to time. Pretty sad to see he has no power or say in his real life so he takes it out on the only little control he has. Which is on an Internet forum
I'll wait, considering he's told me to calm down every fight you've started.
Re: Mimic - Preaching: Part One
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Originally Posted by
Soule
I'm an admin. It's literally my job. If you don't like it, log off and seek therapy. You're annoying, unstable and unreliable. It's gotten to the point where Spit doesn't even want to be your friend anymore because he's realizing you're a sociopath.
At least tag him when you’re talking shit and making up lies
@$pitacular
He talking shit look at this dude hahah
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Originally Posted by
Soule
I'll wait, considering he's told me to calm down every fight you've started.
How bout you stop being a faggot and stop telling miracle to bump old threads. You look like a total faggot when you do shit like that
Re: Mimic - Preaching: Part One
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Originally Posted by
Lenox
At least tag him when you’re talking shit and making up lies
@
$pitacular
He talking shit look at this dude hahah
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How bout you stop being a faggot and stop telling miracle to bump old threads. You look like a total faggot when you do shit like that
I'll wait for this too. Truth hurts, Mr. Bates.
Re: Mimic - Preaching: Part One
Bro said log off. Lmfao eat my fucking dick. I promise you are not special. GOW knows u act like a faggot with ur mod privileges it’s just facts
Re: Mimic - Preaching: Part One
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Originally Posted by
Soule
I'll wait for this too. Truth hurts, Mr. Bates.
Yea considering I talk to him and know how he feels this is gonna be hilarious when he sees you’re talking shit with no truth behind it. That’s how you get fucked up irl. I’m sure you’re use to that
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Originally Posted by
Soule
And yet here I am.
Not like we have many other options buddy
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You’re mod cuz u r HERE. You’re just a fucking last dead end option