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New kinda sound enjoy,
*mixing and mastering isn't the best cause I'm a newb at it but its not bad
*I need strong critic on flow, and delivery, my lyrics are unique and fit my style so I'm not gonna change them up.
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right im liking the intro haha made me happy hahah !!!!
i think this bangs hard homie real smooth mix is good but i tihnk the odd adlib here n there would bring it more to life!!
lyrics are very well put togeether delivery stays on point throughout
dope drop homie!!!
you said u wanted to hear more well heres a link to our album
http://www.megaupload.com/?d=WA7B0N3W
This is dope lol for'real... dope flow, dope energy... got me imagining blue birds in my head flying around with kids skipping down a path on some Wizard of Oz shit... haha keep dropping!
checkign this....haha yeah some soulful shit on this beat not really my style but lets see....flow ain't too bad, rhymes real basic at times get better as it goes on....maybe throow some dubs or adlibs on verse vocals sound thin
overall pretty chill track man i liked it keep it up
hit me back with feed please
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...78#post8359578
thanks for the feeds guys i was going more towards a chill laid back dreamy vibe haha. and J min thanks for the link
Ok on the flow and delivery on the track.
It matches the beat the only issue is a very basic flow pattern 1 rhyme sylables I would work on adding some complexity but it fits the beat
You are ok on the double timing but not great
refeed
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...28#post8359728
listening... beats very upbeat... some summer time shit... first verse.. flow is nice...simple but it fits, delivery fits the beat...kinda slug on sunshine shit... less is more and what not... lyrics are simple...but it fits the style behind the track... second verse... thomis eddison lines aight...flows better in second verse... cheese for that whine..cheesy...but aight.. all in all simple song... but its got a good vibe to it...
do your thing man
want to hear more stuff
that beat is nice! this track is dope man. i dont even know what could be improved on haha. everything fits so well on this track.
This is a hella cool track. I like your flow/delivery on this track but on a different beat, I don't know if I would. Of course, you would probably switch it up on a different beat, so yeah. Lyrics aren't very complex but it all combines to a sick upbeat track. Keep at it
thanks for the feeds guys really appreciate it
Word. This is a nice happy type sampled beat.
Lyrics are nice.
Sounds like some early 90's ish
Peepin' right now...
First off, definately feeling the hook. welcomes you in to the track imo. next thing, your flow and rhyme is sick homie.definately on point. Mixing isn't bad at all. You have some talent brotha, keep sharing. holla back.
in my opinion u need to work with da flow. it is really relaxed flow)))
but may be it's your style and u don't need to change it.
but for me it's not what i like)
good lick
thanks for the feeds guys, make sure you leave your RTF links so ill feed back
haha yea i like this...shit got me smiling....haha get drunk on a tuesday....chea...thats what im sizzlin....i like your lyrics man...forreal...you deff a noob but you got something too work with...i think your flow was on point...and you have a presence...you just need to do a bit more polishing....but it will all come with practice....good shit...
diggin the beat, mic presence is solid, so is the flow, but both could still be a bit more polished, lyrics a bit basic at times but were cool, overall a solid track homie..