Week 11 - Plot (2-1) vs Justice Grimm (5-5) Grimm wins.

Rules

Due Dates:

Verses are due Friday and will be open until Sunday.
Battles that lack votes may close later.
One sided battles may get closed early.
Extensions are 24 hours



Line Limit:

Minimum of 10, maximum of 16 (unless higher limit agreed upon)
If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first.


Check ins are mandatory. Also, swaying/biting/recycling is a DQ.

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@Plot @Justice Grimm

In.

Check.5

Ya name got me baffled. Shit’s easier to flip than the rest
Plus ur rep shows you’re set up for anything… except for success
Murkin you’s light work, should stay in ya lane cause I snap hoes
We’ll see him on his toes after one bar like cell service on back roads
No need for extensions, brains or brawn I’m 8 divisions north of you shorty
5 flips is light work… 1 hook’ll have ya body doin em for me
This queer tried to dance with the stars? Pleth slaaayed him, barely say that he fought ‘im
Started at the top of the poll, n true to form he slid gracefully to the bottom
Homie I hate ya work… you don’t belong in the league, it’s debasement
So if the voters thinkin J NTU? The offer’s out for an offshore replacement

10 lines/5 bars

Ext

So i read some of your shit, fulla drastic flaws
Aint ever been the thing,
Your fake Grimm, why do you think your fanastic for?
Gettin all wild-west, desperate to impress
fired up in a rage,
But put on a brave face you still wont light up the stage.
I run with a deep clique, this guys just very pale
You never been down with no brothers Grimm,
Any talk of your outfits a fucking fairy tale.
Dropping this basket case, dogs got no chance of victory
This a sick puppy Cesar Milan would put out of its misery.
Case is closed, the Plot just fucked up this nerd
Batter his skull in with the Judges gavel
Justice got served!

Quote:

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Originally Posted by Justice Grimm

Ya name got me baffled. Shit’s easier to flip than the rest
Plus ur rep shows you’re set up for anything… except for success
Light jab.
Murkin you’s light work, should stay in ya lane cause I snap hoes
We’ll see him on his toes after one bar like cell service on back roads
This was solid. Funny imagery.
No need for extensions, brains or brawn I’m 8 divisions north of you shorty
5 flips is light work… 1 hook’ll have ya body doin em for me
Simple, but executed nicely. Solid jab.
This queer tried to dance with the stars? Pleth slaaayed him, barely say that he fought ‘im
Started at the top of the poll, n true to form he slid gracefully to the bottom
Decent jab w/ the personal.
Homie I hate ya work… you don’t belong in the league, it’s debasement
So if the voters thinkin J NTU? The offer’s out for an offshore replacement
Kind of a reach. Im on the fence on this one.
10 lines/5 bars

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Quote:

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Originally Posted by Plot

So i read some of your shit, fulla drastic flaws
Aint ever been the thing,
Your fake Grimm, why do you think your fanastic for?
Pretty solid. I like it.
Gettin all wild-west, desperate to impress
fired up in a rage,
But put on a brave face you still wont light up the stage.
This was pretty creative. Dope.
I run with a deep clique, this guys just very pale
You never been down with no brothers Grimm,
Any talk of your outfits a fucking fairy tale.
Nah this one whiffed hard for me.
Dropping this basket case, dogs got no chance of victory
This a sick puppy Cesar Milan would put out of its misery.
Had to google tbh. Decent jab.
Case is closed, the Plot just fucked up this nerd
Batter his skull in with the Judges gavel
Justice got served!
Simple jab. Funny imagery.

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This was close as fuck. I got Plot taking the first two bars. Grimm taking 3&4. And plot edging the closer. Dope stuff from both.

Vote - Plot

Quote:

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Originally Posted by Justice Grimm

Ya name got me baffled. Shit’s easier to flip than the rest
Plus ur rep shows you’re set up for anything… except for success
Pretty good "meta" nameflip. Very solid wording
Murkin you’s light work, should stay in ya lane cause I snap hoes
We’ll see him on his toes after one bar like cell service on back roads
LMAOOOO I LOVE this. The punch is cool but that wp/flip is one of my favourites I've read in a while. Dope line
No need for extensions, brains or brawn I’m 8 divisions north of you shorty
5 flips is light work… 1 hook’ll have ya body doin em for me
OK concept. Wording helped it along into a pretty decent bar
This queer tried to dance with the stars? Pleth slaaayed him, barely say that he fought ‘im
Started at the top of the poll, n true to form he slid gracefully to the bottom
Same as above but with the added personal it's a bit better
Homie I hate ya work… you don’t belong in the league, it’s debasement
So if the voters thinkin J NTU? The offer’s out for an offshore replacement
Had to google and all I'm getting is Jawaharlal Nehru Technological University??? Sorry if I've missed something but otherwise this is a miss for me

10 lines/5 bars

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Quote:

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Originally Posted by Plot

So i read some of your shit, fulla drastic flaws
Aint ever been the thing,
Your fake Grimm, why do you think your fanastic for?
fantastic four/for concept has been done but with the Grimm nameplay and 'the thing' tie in this was pretty good
Gettin all wild-west, desperate to impress
fired up in a rage,
But put on a brave face you still wont light up the stage.
This is good. A fresh wordplay. Nice
I run with a deep clique, this guys just very pale
You never been down with no brothers Grimm,
Any talk of your outfits a fucking fairy tale.
Nah I don't even post on RB that much and I already know this name flip is very played on him
Dropping this basket case, dogs got no chance of victory
This a sick puppy Cesar Milan would put out of its misery.
OK jab
Case is closed, the Plot just fucked up this nerd
Batter his skull in with the Judges gavel
Justice got served!
With the wording it's pretty good.

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Very close to me. One miss each and the rest was good from both. I'm edging it to Grimm - had my favourite bar and the wording was just a little better throughout. Nothing wrong with Plot's execution but Grimm's was just a bit harsher and smoother. Grimm I don't know if you were trying out a new style/making a conscious effort towards your wording or if it's just coincidence but I thought this was far and away the best verse I've read from you execution wise. Verse was smooth af and fun to read.

V/ Grimm

Grimm

Opener was solid personal / unique nameplay. The imagery of the cell service punch is great, it brought me back to tines of lifted my phone as high as I could to get service, so I'm really digging it. Flips was nice too. Thought the poll dancing was decent. Don't get the closer. 4/5 nice bars

Plot

Solid opener. Didn't understand brave face. Didn't like brothers Grimm. Pretty sure I've done that many years ago and nothing fresh about it. Cesar doesn't euthanize dogs, so its a miss imo even though its worded well. Justice served decent.

Well even though I didn't get brave face if I considered it good likebthe other voters did it still wouldn't be enough to take Grimm this week Grimm had a hard to beat verse this week. Good shit to both though it was a good battle

v/ JG

Ya name got me baffled. Shit’s easier to flip than the rest
Plus ur rep shows you’re set up for anything… except for success
eh, ok
Murkin you’s light work, should stay in ya lane cause I snap hoes
We’ll see him on his toes after one bar like cell service on back roads
aight, not super hard tho
No need for extensions, brains or brawn I’m 8 divisions north of you shorty
5 flips is light work… 1 hook’ll have ya body doin em for me
aight
This queer tried to dance with the stars? Pleth slaaayed him, barely say that he fought ‘im
Started at the top of the poll, n true to form he slid gracefully to the bottom
I feel like it coulda been doper
Homie I hate ya work… you don’t belong in the league, it’s debasement
So if the voters thinkin J NTU? The offer’s out for an offshore replacement
aight

vs

So i read some of your shit, fulla drastic flaws
Aint ever been the thing,
Your fake Grimm, why do you think your fanastic for?
I didn't like this wording wasn't hard enough
Gettin all wild-west, desperate to impress
fired up in a rage,
But put on a brave face you still wont light up the stage.
felt a bit simple
I run with a deep clique, this guys just very pale
You never been down with no brothers Grimm,
Any talk of your outfits a fucking fairy tale.
nah, didn't like it felt played on boy here
Dropping this basket case, dogs got no chance of victory
This a sick puppy Cesar Milan would put out of its misery.
aight
Case is closed, the Plot just fucked up this nerd
Batter his skull in with the Judges gavel
Justice got served!
aight

Man this wasn't super close I think Justice was just more consistent throughout his drop and Plot came kinda simple this week which surprised me cause it feels like a whole different human wrote this verse than the one against me lmao.. so I know you can do better.

Vote Justice

Murkin you’s light work, should stay in ya lane cause I snap hoes
We’ll see him on his toes after one bar like cell service on back roads No need for extensions, brains or brawn I’m 8 divisions north of you shorty
5 flips is light work… 1 hook’ll have ya body doin em for me
This queer tried to dance with the stars? Pleth slaaayed him, barely say that he fought ‘im
Started at the top of the poll, n true to form he slid gracefully to the bottom

Your concepts are dope I just think you need to be more harsher and a bit more wittier and you’re going to be a serious problem


Vs

Gettin all wild-west, desperate to impress
fired up in a rage,
But put on a brave face you still wont light up the stage.


Idk Plot imo you gotta dumb down your bars and execute better man

JG got this with more quotables

JG edged it for me, had cell bar an one more, the poll one.
plot came well, ok but not enough

V Grimm

I got justice grimm here.. i used to like the style plot used here way before but damn tell me if the nowadays audience likes simple executions.. a lot of good concepts there but lacking some sting to it, the lackluster execution took away the impact from it. the cell bar line was bonkers.. props

v. grimm

Justice Grimm wins 6-1.