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It took u till 2023 to champ shit. I’ve been killing it for awhile
Emulate on everything……….Especially my fucking style
Ill rush your place n bust that face. prepare for defeat clown
Punches leave him ulterior just flat out crying, there’s no hidden motive for this beatdown
Ur on my shit list. n these fist will ruin ya whole existence
I’m throwing punches that’ll shut your lights off like hiding from jehovah witness
The bitches see a thug like me n get wet. u ain’t slaying none
Ya wife’s quick to effigy like me while u dry hump a paper mache one
You don’t think I’ll trash you? Bitch I’m bringing down the house
If your sleeping on me i probably didn’t get up yet after fucking your spouse
all season been building to this, the peak of hyper tensions im at your chest with a grip
cuz the type of pressure ur bringing Blud comes with a stroke that luck can not fix
down the sites when i aim, hot bullets leave holes in lard ass thats tallow glazed
put yourself in juxtaposition to go from skimming the surface to a shallow grave
beating u this time starts a cycle of you getting slapped from now to infinity
so you are firsthand witnessing the moment that repetition becomes muscle memory
ur kicks lean to the side and u start fires with just friction from thighs
he'll say this match is no-sweat, no shit-all those functions stop when you unalive
tell him to diet, he'll die it will have him feet up, dude'll break like a flintstone
even tho you are no longer a-round they'll still be able to see that you're big boned
MV had some quite weighty concepts (no pun intended) which were smart but didn’t necessarily translate into heavy battle bars this time around. There was a lot going on, perhaps so much that it might’ve actually reduced the impact.
Miracle was cleaner with it. I liked a lot of the wordplay elements. I think it’s a shame that they’re integrated more like scheming rather than double-entendres as the sentences tend to only make sense one way (ie. “Punches leave him all tearier” makes sense but “punches leave him ulterior” doesn’t make sense as a sentence). Obviously that’s fine as a stylistic choice, but not my favourite.
Hard to call this one, but on balance I preferred Miracle’s.
Vote- Miracle.
It took u till 2023 to champ shit. I’ve been killing it for awhile
Emulate on everything……….Especially my fucking style
The bitches see a thug like me n get wet. u ain’t slaying none
Ya wife’s quick to effigy like me while u dry hump a paper mache one
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all season been building to this, the peak of hyper tensions im at your chest with a grip
cuz the type of pressure ur bringing Blud comes with a stroke that luck can not fix
tell him to diet, he'll die it will have him feet up, dude'll break like a flintstone
even tho you are no longer a-round they'll still be able to see that you're big boned
Overall good battle but I think the two bars I quoted from mir went harder than the two I quoted from mvs and mirs non hitters were better
V/mir
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Originally Posted by miracle
Vote - MiracleQuote:
Originally Posted by MV
Cool battle dudes, good workin.
It took u till 2023 to champ shit. I’ve been killing it for awhile
Emulate on everything……….Especially my fucking style
m u late was cool but everything after left more to be desired
Ill rush your place n bust that face. prepare for defeat clown
Punches leave him ulterior just flat out crying, there’s no hidden motive for this beatdown
all teary or...got it but again not a strong close
Ur on my shit list. n these fist will ruin ya whole existence
I’m throwing punches that’ll shut your lights off like hiding from jehovah witness
k.o. material ... dope
The bitches see a thug like me n get wet. u ain’t slaying none
Ya wife’s quick to effigy like me while u dry hump a paper mache one
f a gee ...something about tis didnt click... good w/p though
You don’t think I’ll trash you? Bitch I’m bringing down the house
If your sleeping on me i probably didn’t get up yet after fucking your spouse
not a good closer
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all season been building to this, the peak of hyper tensions im at your chest with a grip
cuz the type of pressure ur bringing Blud comes with a stroke that luck can not fix
gory!!!
down the sites when i aim, hot bullets leave holes in lard ass thats tallow glazed
put yourself in juxtaposition to go from skimming the surface to a shallow grave
lol raw
beating u this time starts a cycle of you getting slapped from now to infinity
so you are firsthand witnessing the moment that repetition becomes muscle memory
lol... i didnt know u had it in you
ur kicks lean to the side and u start fires with just friction from thighs
he'll say this match is no-sweat, no shit-all those functions stop when you unalive
is tis a typo... i think u might "alive"... it's still good . just saying
.. i looked it up... you're good
tell him to diet, he'll die it will have him feet up, dude'll break like a flintstone
even tho you are no longer a-round they'll still be able to see that you're big boned
didnt like the closer.. but the rest is fire
this battle isnt as close as what some of us are making it
v-MV
@Spree get them votes in
3-1 mir