Throw it back , Fuck if its whack

I throw it back in reverse
Thought I'd drop a line & share a verse.
Many words I use to curse
They try to hit me where it hurts.
But my pain was here before the Blow.
Feelings I hope you never know.
They do it all for show
When my times up I'm ready to go.
Til that day I'm here to flow
With Rhythm & Love can you hear it tho?
Aim High towards Heavens skies
Still ask the Lord Just Who am I?
Inside this mind I still reside.
Have fun while your on this ride.
Dont let hate take away your pride.
Even just beginning I hit my stride
Right now is the turning of the tide
No need to keep heat by my side.

A little simplistic for my taste. But with practice and better structure, I can see you fleshing out something with more substance. This seems to be all over the place.

I'm not feeling it
It would have been better if you switch it up
it helps it flow better
Practice makes prefect

Yeah this was a quickie at work I am just trying to get back into it , hate it or love it I'm glad u took the time to put eyes on it and dropping a line