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Rebuttal Option
both competitors must agree to it at time of check-in
format is A, B, B, A (A posts first, B drops next, B posts follow-up, A drops final bar)
You have 24hrs from when battle was set to agree on rebuttal battle
You know the rules, if not, refer to the rule thread.
@EXalted @mv
Rebuttal?
if you see exalted won, trumpets sound and angels salute in formation
cuz itll literally be the END of RB and we about to go through tribulations
@EXalted bar due tonight
this'll be the worst for you. deep in ur heart & hurting as well
ur loss column? a V-0 to Max til it looks like ya fully exerted yourself
Respect to both for dropping.
I've got MV here:
with a (personal opinion) "smoother" bar...
explain?
on Exalted's closing... i do like the punch and the "effort" coment of "fully exerted yourself"...
I just thought the opener (2nd half) phrase of "deep in ur heart & hurting as well"...is kind of a "rhyme-reachy" phrase, crafted in order to fit moreso than to say a sharp/solid phrase.
...If that makes sense.
MV, while admittedly a fairly simple jab for sure, hit hard enough (to me) to overcome the simplicity, AND
just was cleaner, flowed better, and slightly better execution overall.
Exalted, I am nitpicking....not a "bad" bar necessarily, just came up short this week in my judgement.
In close battles, one does have to do just that - pick at the little details.
Thanks,
Looking forward to your next weeks' drops gentlemen. ~
I didn't really get MVs bar. I mean it looks kind of statementish and basic so I may be missing a layer of complexity.. Exalted was OK but a bit forced. looks like he tried to make it happen
got exalted for now
Soooooo i really dont get either, conceptwise ..
MV's bc its just too subtle (if that)
The end of something/trials and tribulations?
If yes, thats way too simple and basic. Found myself looking for anything i mightve missed, bc thats statementish af
Not my taste
Formation/tribulations is also a maaad lazy rhyme
And exalted hasnt sent me a pm explaining his play (my request via chat) so that means 1 of 2 things;
1. he doesnt wanna see me disect any flaws in it n'd rather me not vote (bc i know he saw my chat post since he frequents the forum more than i)
Or 2. its a reach/forced
Either way
Shit battle
Vgt mv
EDIT
I do get it now, thanks to google and a bunch of searches
Vote stands as isQuote:
VO₂ max is the maximum rate of oxygen consumption attainable during physical exertion. The name is derived from three abbreviations: "V̇" for volume, "O₂" for oxygen, and "max" for maximum. A similar measure is VO₂ peak, which is the measurable value from a session of physical exercise, be it incremental or otherwise. Wikipedia
That shit was so out there. If i dropped it, ppl would have it in their signatures by next week (not in a good way) lol
Good attempt but nah
Reach
v/exalted
I literally don't know what either of them are talking about but I feel like exalted bar was dope and I just don't know why lmao. His overall wording was nice, just the punch goes over my head lol. I didn't feel like MV's bar was wack, but it didn't really have much of a punch or any cleverness to it that I can think of. I think if he would have gone for a "trials and tribulations" flip then it would have gone much better.
I didn’t really get either of these to be truthful, MV with trying to tie in Exalted and religion somehow in his line but it got sort of lost in the middle.
Ex I have no idea what you were going for on this one, sorry
Vote - MV I guess
Not a fan of either here. One was pretty straightforward and idk what the other was going for.
Ig MV is the lesser of the two evils
V/MV
Both punches were equally impactful, the separation between the two was MVs being more colourfully written.
Vote MV
Vote ex damn can't believe y'all missing it
Vote ex
Me I think u sayin “end of our being’ if so that’s cool but the v02 max bar was fresher to me
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MV* not me
MVWins