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you have a very unique flow but in some parts i think some words are rushed maybe say the same thing but take out words. the song is deep and a lot of people can relate to this kind of track. delivery is pretty good. rhymes are deep and strong. i like the hook well worded. dope track man
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really like the beat, lyrics and concept. agreeing with ItsToby, some lines are rushed. kinda wished the vocals themselves were a little louder. thats all i can really say. goodstuff.
damn....i thought they sounded good on these studio monitors...but i forget they enhances vocals...i might still turn them up...good looks...
^ agreed with the vocal audio levels are kinda down, flow is great, high point and some low points. bu the beat is dope, plus the sung chorus is awesome. keep it up! cheers.
I actually like how some of the words are a little rushed, I felt they stayed on point and it flowed well to the beat. The chorus was really nice, a totally different style to what I was expecting so props on that.
Lyrics were great and overall your voice presence was all round good.
Nicely done, hope to hear more soon.
I'm noticin' quite a bit that some parts sound rushed compared to others. It's standin' out pretty bad. I like the hook. Simple. But it works. Maybe it's your style idk. But this seems to stray off beat in parts lol. I think for a slow beat like this you either have to be right dead on. Or completely lazy and off beat. I still listened though because besides that this was on point.
I like the piano in this, makes me want to hear more from the get go. Beat is good overall, I like the singing on this man, real shit right here. Maybe add some more harmonies or something, but the simplicity works for it. I like the flow it's on point, but also like how you switch it up a lot. Lyrically on point, some original stuff for sure. Only thing is maybe improve the vocal quality a bit, but pretty good song here man, props.
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solid track overall here, nice mic presence, lyrics were okay, beat was cool, hook wasnt super catchy but it was aigh, flow was a lil off at times, but nothing too bad, just needed to reword some lines..
