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@Spree
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Aka massaker
Previously u no showed so ghost writing is known to helpQuote:
Originally Posted by Lay Doubt.
N Its the only chance spree has to beat me beyond a shadow of a doubt
My past rhymes left u shook n scared to rebuttle, I’m never discrete see
Last time mass nowhere to be seen just proves there’s not a planet u can beat me
Virgin loser, i will see he can’t win a battle so he don’t phase me
0-2 and we’re done coz I don’t need a 3 kill spree to prove that UAV
he passed out before n didn’t drop, this cunt couldn’t hold it together
My punches will rain down on you n then you’ll feel under the weather
Sprees a fake gangster, let’s go to war n I’ll fill you in casually
So stop crying to the reff u g and flee, before you become a civilian casualty
@Spree due tonight
Aka Purity
Quote:
Originally Posted by Slayerr.
Quote:
Originally Posted by slayerr.
Lmao fag, look…
Gettin tickets from me ain’t a nightmare when I let the cali rally
Slay’ll ‘watch live darts’…. enter his body & not @ the Ally Pally!
Its violin singin when rippin the drums on ya, I ain’t scared to pull it
We know Pure Minor, & got no Degree of heat wen hittin’m w/a Band of bullets
& that NS? I was ‘bored to box’ cos ur whole career is gettin beat by Spree
Rusty hinges on your casket faggot the only time you’ll ever squeak by me
My god are you trash, all the wacks give this pal hope
You lost soon as you knew you battling me, at least you can rely on gettin a Mal vote
I’ll choke a bitch w/my dick, spit in her face & punch her boobs off
Vs Mass Slay pussy & those bitches ain’t been beat more than you dawg
Damn, is Spree saying that he’s gonna quit the site if he loses? If so that could be construed as swaying. Dude’s a credit to the community and it would seriously suck to see him leave, so I nearly didn’t post my vote, but out of respect for Slayerr I gotta keep it real.Quote:
Originally Posted by Spree
Both had some great lines. I preferred Slayerr in this one, seemed to me that he had higher density of wordplay and better lines overall. That said I feel like there was some wordplay in Spree’s which went over my head.
Vote- Slayerr
Shadow of a doubt was pretty dope, good shit nice way to open…mass no where was alright
Uav was cool, I seen where u were going under the weather it just didn’t pack sting.. refugee was alright but calling him a g isn’t really a diss lol.. but overall it works.. u def stepped it up with ya battling since the last time I was active.. keep at it dude.. this was a cool verse
Kill- opener was alright I like it could of went harder.. pure minor ok… squeak by me was dope.. Mal vote was mehh… as for ur closer, feels a little swaying to me… like he calls you mass in his bar then you call urself mass in ur bar.. I’ve literally never seen u call urself that.. idk.. plus virb thinks ur swaying to lol…the overall bar was just ok tho.. honestly u done better, this was still a cool verse but u could of..
This is actually close as fuck n hard to vote for.. I guess it comes down to on your caskets vs shadow of a doubt… let me go back n read them again pick a winner…
U know what I actually like both equally n still cant choose.. I thought Slayerr was real creative with the laydoubt quote cuz I seen when he said that perfect tie in.. but squeaks by me was a dope throw that was also hitting… could kinda be a sway to lol slay mentioned u no showing then u mention it hmm
Nevermind all that
I gotta go with kill spree.. comes down to the misses and under weather n ref u g were less up to par
i liked this battle fellaz
u both did a good job
best lines in the battle was slayers open & sprees casket
all the other lines was good
only shit i aint like was rain on u & sprees open
but all the other stuff from u guys was connectin
i like sprees choice of words
sounds tough
i got2 go with slayer he took this 4me
it really is hard 2 pick
but after i read it over i just liked him a little more
winner: slayer
Previously u no showed so ghost writing is known to help
N Its the only chance spree has to beat me beyond a shadow of a doubt
okay pun
My past rhymes left u shook n scared to rebuttle, I’m never discrete see
Last time mass nowhere to be seen just proves there’s not a planet u can beat me
your wording is a bit off
Virgin loser, i will see he can’t win a battle so he don’t phase me
0-2 and we’re done coz I don’t need a 3 kill spree to prove that UAV
stop with the double negatives ...and i dont like this pun
he passed out before n didn’t drop, this cunt couldn’t hold it together
My punches will rain down on you n then you’ll feel under the weather
okay
Sprees a fake gangster, let’s go to war n I’ll fill you in casually
So stop crying to the reff u g and flee, before you become a civilian casualty
work on your wording
vs
Gettin tickets from me ain’t a nightmare when I let the cali rally
Slay’ll ‘watch live darts’…. enter his body & not @ the Ally Pally!
Its violin singin when rippin the drums on ya, I ain’t scared to pull it
We know Pure Minor, & got no Degree of heat wen hittin’m w/a Band of bullets
this isnt like you spree
& that NS? I was ‘bored to box’ cos ur whole career is gettin beat by Spree
Rusty hinges on your casket faggot the only time you’ll ever squeak by me
this is bad
My god are you trash, all the wacks give this pal hope
You lost soon as you knew you battling me, at least you can rely on gettin a Mal vote
true(in this battle so far).. but not a real punch
I’ll choke a bitch w/my dick, spit in her face & punch her boobs off
Vs Mass Slay pussy & those bitches ain’t been beat more than you dawg
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this battle comes down to preference... slayerr having two okay lands.. and spree with steady jabs that appear to only hit air or didnt really connect.
if this were a live freestyle battle spree would win
v- spree
2-2
Next vote wins
Slayrr
Previously u no showed so ghost writing is known to help
N Its the only chance spree has to beat me beyond a shadow of a doubt
My past rhymes left u shook n scared to rebuttle, I’m never discrete see
Last time mass nowhere to be seen just proves there’s not a planet u can beat me
Virgin loser, i will see he can’t win a battle so he don’t phase me
0-2 and we’re done coz I don’t need a 3 kill spree to prove that UAV
vs
Spree
& that NS? I was ‘bored to box’ cos ur whole career is gettin beat by Spree
Rusty hinges on your casket faggot the only time you’ll ever squeak by me
My god are you trash, all the wacks give this pal hope
You lost soon as you knew you battling me, at least you can rely on gettin a Mal vote
i think Spree had the LoTB with the premeditated rebuttal, squeak by me. but overall i feel like i have to go with slayrr UAV and shadow of a doubt were both nice. I have an extra point because i felt of the 2 Massaker bars yours was the better. i cant keep track of all these Alt names
v/Slayrr
SLAY wins