Round 2 - 4. Plethora vs 6. Phalanx - Pleth wins
Rules
Due Dates:
Verses are due Saturday and will be open until Monday.
Battles that lack votes may close later.
One sided battles may get closed early.
Extensions are 24 hours
Line Limit:
Minimum of 10, maximum of 16 (unless higher limit agreed upon)
If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first.
Check ins are mandatory. Also, swaying/biting/recycling is a DQ.
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Re: Round 2 - 4. Plethora vs 6. Phalanx
Re: Round 2 - 4. Plethora vs 6. Phalanx
Quote:
Originally Posted by
Phalanx
You dropped the ball running the league...I picked it up & finished w/ a steady resolve
Chain saw til ya leg is just mauled so this time when I provide your replacement? Prosthetics involved
who dropped the ball in masquerade tourney? & twice as fast
let it slip thru ur fingers like toilet paper everytime u wipe ur ass
no time to cap.. speak outta character let the shit blast
get a 55 to the face for talking funny.. that's Crip Mac
this cat step on my toes, I'll act like nothing & leave it
ain't no BigE, til you get that neck broke on some wwe shit
dude got diseases. gay friends get std's from his pole
all u give ur Palisades.. stick the Wooden Barriers deep in the hole
3 in the dome for dissing my girl last battle without remorse
Phal Odor an apology last time, this time its his rotting corpse
act a fool, be knocking on heaven's door when the blade poke him
got outta line then took cuts.. u'll be first in soon as the gates open
if jakes notice body parts & question me, im keeping it real
i Ankle Lie.. cuz eventually cops'll find urs in a scenic field
still on a losing streak vs. me in LLL, so why kid cocky?
won't see Phal Slump Over til coroners remove his lifeless body
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Re: Round 2 - 4. Plethora vs 6. Phalanx
Welp I guess you win by no show. Time to slap Phalanx’s face on the milk cartons. Anyways here’s some feedback:
Quote:
Originally Posted by
plethora
who dropped the ball in masquerade tourney? & twice as fast
let it slip thru ur fingers like toilet paper everytime u wipe ur ass
lol ok. Creative. ‘Slip through your fingers’ could’ve just been a generic line, it’s good you gave it the personal edge
no time to cap.. speak outta character let the shit blast
get a 55 to the face for talking funny.. that's Crip Mac
Not familiar, had to google, is cool. Even better if Crip Mac talks funny
this cat step on my toes, I'll act like nothing & leave it
ain't no BigE, til you get that neck broke on some wwe shit
ehh it’s OK
dude got diseases. gay friends get std's from his pole
all u give ur Palisades.. stick the Wooden Barriers deep in the hole
almost fire. Just ‘barrier’ I’m not liking as part of the wp. I think it’d be better as just “stick the wood deep in the hole”. Still pretty good though, Palisades is fresh to me
3 in the dome for dissing my girl last battle without remorse
Phal Odor an apology last time, this time its his rotting corpse
ehhh don’t like this one so much. A couple reasons - Phalanx is apparently pronounced Fay Links, and I saw Rican do a Phal Odor line few week ago, albeit not as well as you did here.
act a fool, be knocking on heaven's door when the blade poke him
got outta line then took cuts.. u'll be first in soon as the gates open
nice, that’s good
if jakes notice body parts & question me, im keeping it real
i Ankle Lie.. cuz eventually cops'll find urs in a scenic field
lol but nah. Phonetically the wp works OK for me - ain’t gon lie/ankle lie - but it’s forced in the sense of having to say something kinda weird - cops finding an ankle - to get it to work.
still on a losing streak vs. me in LLL, so why kid cocky?
won't see Phal Slump Over til coroners remove his lifeless body
pretty good close. Haven’t the wp before and you tied it in nicely with a personal edge
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