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Regular Battle
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10-lines MAX Regular Battle
16-lines MAX Contendership and Championship Battle
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@Art.
@Fresh
Check. I'm good with any amount 16 and up
16 works
Fresh is good to go. He sent 16 in.
got a girl u call ur wife, yall have similar interests, both not very bright
plus she even has that troll in her, but its Zunto fuckin her every night
fix ya wording or get dropped, slow down, take ur time or get clocked
i dont mean to make ya rushmore, I'm just here to leave your head rocked
seen ya pic , u just a white ass bitch, anorexic AF, polish? irish? a damn mix
Frail as fuck! we can see ya McRibs, someone get him a mcdonalds sandwich
u live on RB! every second u write, take some time off have sex w/ ur wife
it seems like u need a vacation, & hopefully soule bans u 4 the rest of ur life
youre the biggest fag here, u and your but buddy "DS Sicness" I swear
its like whenever you speak Amen follows like when you finish a prayer
i wrote a mag, u wrote one lol fuckin clone, but honestly i should have known
dude tried to give a Maga new look, corny old af and full of racist undertones
I'll leave ur insides out its simple, murder scene clean, w/ no details or info
only thing left was fresh prince at the door , got um thinkin of that will smith intro
stop bitching Im sick of hearin this man cry, im on my grizzly shit u cant hide
if i have to hear any Morants then im pullin a piece and killin u on instagram live
@Wuxia @Fresh yall can open it up.
I heard you was tiny, be cool or you’ll end up with a hematoma
Let’s see how this impact when I hold back… and still he’s flicked into a coma
He’s not the most pitiful member, but he isn’t too far
We’ve all seen Solaras dirty laundry… but Art’s the one who lives in his car
You HOFed audio lol great way for the award to be diminished
Funny, you got the nod from Soule… but those that matter nodded off before we finished
We took different paths to get here… it isn’t fair, honestly
I did my part to cull Spit, you just had to deal with some poor air quality
Thought you would help with the league, but that mag was trash, kid
Pretended to have Lay on the Line, but he’s the one who almost made your ass quit
It’s the part where I call his gf fat, it’ll have him ragin’ fast
I don’t know how much that Broadway, but it’s up there with the entire stage n cast
Your girl is a monster, each step leaves behind a giant crater
Crazy that its hard to imagine scale… but not the bitch climbing the side of a skyscraper
It ain’t the wild west, but I draw fast when the clock is set in motion
I’ll be the one surrounded by shells, meanwhile it's you who's at the bottom of the ocean
got a girl u call ur wife, yall have similar interests, both not very bright
plus she even has that troll in her, but its Zunto fuckin her every night
Lmao. Great opener.
fix ya wording or get dropped, slow down, take ur time or get clocked
i dont mean to make ya rushmore, I'm just here to leave your head rocked
Dope. Cool personal.
seen ya pic , u just a white ass bitch, anorexic AF, polish? irish? a damn mix
Frail as fuck! we can see ya McRibs, someone get him a mcdonalds sandwich
A little wordy, the two AF's could have been removed for better impact.
u live on RB! every second u write, take some time off have sex w/ ur wife
it seems like u need a vacation, & hopefully soule bans u 4 the rest of ur life
Lmao.
youre the biggest fag here, u and your but buddy "DS Sicness" I swear
its like whenever you speak Amen follows like when you finish a prayer
Lmao. Nice personal.
i wrote a mag, u wrote one lol fuckin clone, but honestly i should have known
dude tried to give a Maga new look, corny old af and full of racist undertones
Another solid personal.
I'll leave ur insides out its simple, murder scene clean, w/ no details or info
only thing left was fresh prince at the door , got um thinkin of that will smith intro
Wasn't feeling this.
stop bitching Im sick of hearin this man cry, im on my grizzly shit u cant hide
if i have to hear any Morants then im pullin a piece and killin u on instagram live
Fire.
I heard you was tiny, be cool or you’ll end up with a hematoma
Let’s see how this impact when I hold back… and still he’s flicked into a coma
Cool wordplay. The setup was nice and direct, but I didn't like the indirect execution of the punchline itself.
He’s not the most pitiful member, but he isn’t too far
We’ve all seen Solaras dirty laundry… but Art’s the one who lives in his car
Dope. Much different than the opener, you went indirect the entire way through, so the pay off was clutch.
You HOFed audio lol great way for the award to be diminished
Funny, you got the nod from Soule… but those that matter nodded off before we finished
Nice personal.
We took different paths to get here… it isn’t fair, honestly
I did my part to cull Spit, you just had to deal with some poor air quality
Dope personal.
Thought you would help with the league, but that mag was trash, kid
Pretended to have Lay on the Line, but he’s the one who almost made your ass quit
Lmao. Okay this was a fake personal. At no time did I ever witness Art threaten to leave because of Lay Doubt's emotionals. I can't give this bar any credit.
It’s the part where I call his gf fat, it’ll have him ragin’ fast
I don’t know how much that Broadway, but it’s up there with the entire stage n cast
Fire.
Your girl is a monster, each step leaves behind a giant crater
Crazy that its hard to imagine scale… but not the bitch climbing the side of a skyscraper
Wasn't feeling this.
It ain’t the wild west, but I draw fast when the clock is set in motion
I’ll be the one surrounded by shells, meanwhile it's you who's at the bottom of the ocean
Wasn't feeling this.
I have Art taking this 6-4, but even then I enjoyed his personals much more. Fresh last personal was fake to me, then he shifted toward the generics, with the exception of the Broadway bar, he ended the verse poorly. He finished it 1-4 while Art finished 3-4. Art closed strong. Fresh didn't.
v-Art
troll, rushmore, mc rib, morants all nice
lives in car, nod from soul broardway good
4bars against 3bars, dope battle
winner art
[QUOTE=Art.;8978530]got a girl u call ur wife, yall have similar interests, both not very bright
plus she even has that troll in her, but its Zunto fuckin her every night
Lmfaoo ouch
fix ya wording or get dropped, slow down, take ur time or get clocked
i dont mean to make ya rushmore, I'm just here to leave your head rocked
Absolutely not
seen ya pic , u just a white ass bitch, anorexic AF, polish? irish? a damn mix
Frail as fuck! we can see ya McRibs, someone get him a mcdonalds sandwich
Not a fan
u live on RB! every second u write, take some time off have sex w/ ur wife
it seems like u need a vacation, & hopefully soule bans u 4 the rest of ur life
Lmfao
youre the biggest fag here, u and your but buddy "DS Sicness" I swear
its like whenever you speak Amen follows like when you finish a prayer
Decent
i wrote a mag, u wrote one lol fuckin clone, but honestly i should have known
dude tried to give a Maga new look, corny old af and full of racist undertones
Shut the fuck up u liberal pussy
I'll leave ur insides out its simple, murder scene clean, w/ no details or info
only thing left was fresh prince at the door , got um thinkin of that will smith intro
This was dope but fresh prints are so fucking played on fresh dude
stop bitching Im sick of hearin this man cry, im on my grizzly shit u cant hide
if i have to hear any Morants then im pullin a piece and killin u on instagram live
Cool closer
vs
I heard you was tiny, be cool or you’ll end up with a hematoma
Let’s see how this impact when I hold back… and still he’s flicked into a coma
Wasn’t feeling this decent attempt tho
He’s not the most pitiful member, but he isn’t too far
We’ve all seen Solaras dirty laundry… but Art’s the one who lives in his car
Pretty good wp here
You HOFed audio lol great way for the award to be diminished
Funny, you got the nod from Soule… but those that matter nodded off before we finished
This was hot
We took different paths to get here… it isn’t fair, honestly
I did my part to cull Spit, you just had to deal with some poor air quality
Nice coulda flipped it harsher tho
Thought you would help with the league, but that mag was trash, kid
Pretended to have Lay on the Line, but he’s the one who almost made your ass quit
Nice
It’s the part where I call his gf fat, it’ll have him ragin’ fast
I don’t know how much that Broadway, but it’s up there with the entire stage n cast
is broadway played? Idk if it is but this was funny
Your girl is a monster, each step leaves behind a giant crater
Crazy that its hard to imagine scale… but not the bitch climbing the side of a skyscraper
Decent
It ain’t the wild west, but I draw fast when the clock is set in motion
I’ll be the one surrounded by shells, meanwhile it's you who's at the bottom of the ocean
Nah
Ngl thought art was surprisingly weak. Not sure why he thought fresh prints was a good idea on him the McRib line wasn’t feeling either. His opener was dope tho. No hate art u know I fuck with u I just thought you’d come harder against fresh and edge it out but I didn’t think you did that. Fresh wasn’t too crazy here either but he had a few really nice personals and some stuff that I thought were soft and could have been flipped harsher
v/ Fresh
Art had Rushmore which I thought was pretty good, amen was alright
Maga was also just alright.. fresh prince was a nice bar, liked the build up too
Instagram line was ok.. overall not a bad verse, I’ve seen ya drop better but this was still cool
Consistent pretty much the whole way thru
Fresh had Solaris was cool.. opener was a miss.. nodded off was nice
Lay on the line was alright.. broadway seems to easy.. I can’t recall seeing it just seems like a bar that’s played
Last two were a miss..
this is actually crazy close.. I think fresh had the line of the battle with nodded off
But art was more consistent with his jabs.. overall his misses didn’t miss as much as freshes
VOTE ART
Art
Opener dope
Rushmore a played wp but the personal made it fire with a dope tie in
McRibs was too choppy kinda fucked it up
Ban joint was ok. Set up doper
The double like fucks up the amen bar a little. Cool personal tho
Maga was ok. lol funny
Fresh prince was ehh to played
Closer was fire
Vs
Fresh
Didn’t like opener
Solaras was dope
Nod from soul was dope
Cull spit was dope
On the line was ehh
Broadway was fire
Didn’t like imagine scale
Closer was weak too
This close af actually, art uses some played concepts but turns um into dope personals. Makes it fresh af with cool flips. Fresh seemed like he was gonna run his Im whole verse hard Af but fell off and strayed away from the personal attack which I feel if he stayed with it he’d a won. Dope shit all thru both verse but I’m edging art here. Great read fellas
Vote Art
got a girl u call ur wife, yall have similar interests, both not very bright
plus she even has that troll in her, but its Zunto fuckin her every night
fix ya wording or get dropped, slow down, take ur time or get clocked
i dont mean to make ya rushmore, I'm just here to leave your head rocked
u live on RB! every second u write, take some time off have sex w/ ur wife
it seems like u need a vacation, & hopefully soule bans u 4 the rest of ur life
stop bitching Im sick of hearin this man cry, im on my grizzly shit u cant hide
if i have to hear any Morants then im pullin a piece and killin u on instagram live
Mcrib was terrible and the Amen personal could have been waaaay better
Vs
He’s not the most pitiful member, but he isn’t too far
We’ve all seen Solaras dirty laundry… but Art’s the one who lives in his car
You HOFed audio lol great way for the award to be diminished
Funny, you got the nod from Soule… but those that matter nodded off before we finished
We took different paths to get here… it isn’t fair, honestly
I did my part to cull Spit, you just had to deal with some poor air quality
Broadway was ok…
You last two bars were absolute trash and back in the day you would have been laughed off the site.
Its close. Fresh had the harsher three bars i quoted and noce personals but Art had a more consistent verse, more quotes and gis misses werent as bad as Fresh’s
V Art
art wins 5-1