Talk away... Battles are up
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Talk away... Battles are up
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mag coming soon
Good job holding down the league bro. You been putting in work. This shit is looking promising again. Respect.
Yooooooooooo.
Wassup L.E, the man who is hard to tag....Mag is up
I'm going to drop today. Didn't realize it was the third today haha.
@143 what was the voting rubric again? I know a few, but not entirely sure on all categories.
@L.E nicely written. I can envision Elysium.
@Revelation 18:3 143's my brutha so i have no qualm about you voting for him but um...."Flow" was a tie?? REEALLLYYY? lol. regardless, good verse @143, good luck, bro.
@Revelation 18:3 there is no standard scoring system that I require. I want you to give positive and negative points in your voting for each but you can use technical specifics to choose your person who you will vote for, but you don't have to post those specifics. I just don't want any 1 or 2 line post about each verses. This is not only a competition but a tool to elevated.
@Sammy @143
I'm a little busy ATM. But I'll be back soon enough to breakdown your battle.
@Witty how much more time do you need as to not no show? you know i was looking forward to this shit.
Nice work everyone so far. Nice drops @trajik and @SELF ACTIVATE . Hopefully your opponents show up.
@L.E good verse as I mentioned beforehand. I'll try to stray off the government novels for a bit and stretch out my clever storytelling device. Nonetheless good pieces to everyone who dropped and so forth.
@Sammy @L.E @Revelation 18:3
Okay, so thanks to reading Sammy's breakdown of your battle I was able to pick up on some things that went over my head.
For instance, in L's verse I was equating the 'Bastard' to an actual person or living thing instead of a personification of a concept or trait. So he kinda cleared that up for me.
Also, in Rev's verse I completely missed the 'oder'/'owe her' play on words. So my bad for harping on you about the grammar there.
Another thing...I actually googled Mavis Beacon and now better understand the stereotype line.
So, yeah...lol
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@143
Is it possible me and Tajik can get some feed on our verses? I mean, the free dub is nice and all and I'll happily accept it, but I did take time out to write something up and would like to see what other people think about it, you feel me?
Lol@Google. Yeah Mavis beacon been around for ages. My first typing teacher lol..but yeah I'll try to feed some soon.
Man, at my school we started typing like in the 2nd grade. We had a computer lab and all the computers in there had keyboards with a black rubber like cover over them so you couldn't see the keys. Long story short: I have no clue what program we used from way back then, but I do know that by the end of that year we all knew how to type like adults. Hence probably why I never heard of MB I'm guessing. Just never had any use for It. Then again, maybe that what we were using...but I was 7 or 8...I have no clue lol
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OAN: minus the no shows...it was a pretty good opening week. Everyone that drop put up some interesting content.
I was thinking next week. Doing something graphic such as Horrorcore. Get descriptive and eerie lol
I don't think anyone's done anything like that in a long ass time. It would be dope to see.
What's good y'all?
Nothing much...we need some horrorcore drops because this site already on necrophilia....
Hey who is keeping track of the battle records? I'd like to see what my official tally is between last season and this one.
Wassup peeps As far as the records go. It will start fresh with this league this week. I also thank those who dropped and I will get to everyone verse especially trajik and self. @trajik you will have a worthy opponent next week, stay in my brethren.
@Emily
@Revelation 18:3
@143
Thanks for the feed peoples. You know how I feel about you guys and respect your opinion. I wasn't sure if anyone was going to truly get it since I'm no master of the abstract style, but it was cool to find out that you guys resonated with it. It was a fun verse to write and even better reading the replies.
@OG Maestro ... What happen bro? You don't usual no show. Everything cool on your end?
@SELF ACTIVATE , no worries, it was a great read.
I'll go in and feed the other links soon.
Battles closed..will post new battles and standings with books on Wednesday...
sorry 143, I didn't get time to vote.
If you put 'Open for Votes' in the link when you guys are ready for votes,
I think that will make it easier visually for us to see when you guys are ready for votes.
: )
Ok I will do that...Just to let you guys know, "books" are in effect and will be listed in the standings....
If there is more than one no show battle it will be combined for competition only. Both will still get the win..
sounds like a good idea. i think it will also avoid the no-show throwaway verse too.
@Nahlidge was no showed and I was going off of trajik's post in the last chat thread to keep him active so I didn't see he actually signed out. So I will add his verse to my battle and sub myself out so that he can still compete. @TheIllyricist you will be going against nahlidge's verse from his thread instead of having a three way battle. I will give myself a loss for the error and both competitors will get a win. Check the new battle thread....My apologies
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No worried 143, all good by me!