Round 1 - 8. Plot vs 9. KnowP (Plot wins)
Rules
Due Dates:
Verses are due Saturday and will be open until Monday.
Battles that lack votes may close later.
One sided battles may get closed early.
Extensions are 24 hours
Line Limit:
Minimum of 10, maximum of 16 (unless higher limit agreed upon)
If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first.
Check ins are mandatory. Also, swaying/biting/recycling is a DQ.
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@Plot
@KnowP
Re: Round 1 - 8. Plot vs 9. KnowP
Ayyyoooo!!!!
Ten piece comin up.
Re: Round 1 - 8. Plot vs 9. KnowP
Re: Round 1 - 8. Plot vs 9. KnowP
Re: Round 1 - 8. Plot vs 9. KnowP
:uptight:
ten sent to phal btw...
Re: Round 1 - 8. Plot vs 9. KnowP
Newton said:
We stand on the shoulders of giants.
And this braggarts claiming Legend status?
Anyone standing on KnowP
Is crushing his windpipe to end this faggot.
Been trying to take over the LLL since 2008
But cant put up anything insane or amazing.
So many red flags went up when he returned
Thought China joined the Ukraine invasion.
Guys a nerd thats glass is always half full
While Plots is just constantly empty dude,
When I Told him I was keen for Morbius
Fucking geek was like: Yay! I love the MCU.
And that wife thing is just hideous as fuck
Do you honestly think shes hot partner?
When KnowP takes that horse-head to bed
It resembles that scene from the Godfather.
But guys street, came from a broken home
He never had that constant rock.
Now he trying to start that nuclear family
Plot'll help him out with a bomb to his block.
Re: Round 1 - 8. Plot vs 9. KnowP
KnowP's verse
Quote:
Originally Posted by KnowP
brain meet heat, ya girl in the passenger scrambling to leave
isnt she sweet: first bitch act like she dont see P drippin all over the seat
Nerve of this geek, feast in front of me, Im loaded with plenty
clear ya table cause only time my banquet is when the magazine gets emptied
Nigga dont tempt me, Imma marksman when i pull it
Like Lebron driving, IF K see P alone we all know he catchin a bullet
u champin is foolish. i'll scortch RB before u see more clout
Biden your economy will be fuked like he put sanctions on your account
Assassin by trade, catchin this fade, Taken one for the team, goofy
Then watch me leave Plot future more dryer than Liam Neeson Movies
Re: Round 1 - 8. Plot vs 9. KnowP (Open for Votes)
Quote:
Originally Posted by
Plot
Newton said:
We stand on the shoulders of giants.
And this braggarts claiming Legend status?
Anyone standing on KnowP
Is crushing his windpipe to end this faggot.
Light jab.
Been trying to take over the LLL since 2008
But cant put up anything insane or amazing.
So many red flags went up when he returned
Thought China joined the Ukraine invasion.
Wordy bar good punch though.
Guys a nerd thats glass is always half full
While Plots is just constantly empty dude,
When I Told him I was keen for Morbius
Fucking geek was like: Yay! I love the MCU.
This was funny. Cool jab.
And that wife thing is just hideous as fuck
Do you honestly think shes hot partner?
When KnowP takes that horse-head to bed
It resembles that scene from the Godfather.
Solid concept, excessively wordy though.
But guys street, came from a broken home
He never had that constant rock.
Now he trying to start that nuclear family
Plot'll help him out with a bomb to his block.
This waa good. Still kinda wordy though.
Quote:
Originally Posted by KnowP
brain meet heat, ya girl in the passenger scrambling to leave
isnt she sweet: first bitch act like she dont see P drippin all over the seat
Not super big on letter flips. Light jab at best.
Nerve of this geek, feast in front of me, Im loaded with plenty
clear ya table cause only time my banquet is when the magazine gets emptied
Solid. jab.
Nigga dont tempt me, Imma marksman when i pull it
Like Lebron driving, IF K see P alone we all know he catchin a bullet
Pretty dope.
u champin is foolish. i'll scortch RB before u see more clout
Biden your economy will be fuked like he put sanctions on your account
Decent jab.
Assassin by trade, catchin this fade, Taken one for the team, goofy
Then watch me leave Plot future more dryer than Liam Neeson Movies
Decebt jab.
Close battle. Plot had better concepts, but knowp executed better & hit harder as a result. Slight edge.
Vote - KnowP
Re: Round 1 - 8. Plot vs 9. KnowP (Open for Votes)
Plot had red flags, morbius, and godfather. Didn't enjoy the rest.
Knowp had banquet, biden sanction. Didn't get the k see p.
Pretty close but I got plot edging it
Re: Round 1 - 8. Plot vs 9. KnowP (Open for Votes)
Not gonna lie, I saw Plot’s structure and was gonna count him out until I started reading. Windpipe bar didn’t hit that hard. Ukraine invasion was ok. The next two, Morbius and godfather were good to me. Didn’t really like the closer. Much better verse than I expected from the presentation of it lol
KP, not feeling the opener. Banquet wordplay supposed to be bang quit? Not sure but that’s alright I guess. KCP was creative. Not really feeling the Biden bar. Closer was good.
This a close battle. I really gotta go based off misses because I think they both had 2 good bars and 1 ok bar I quoted. It actually comes down to the openers, which I think KP’s is a miss, where as Plot’s isn’t actually a miss, it just didn’t hit that hard so it ended up being more of a jab. Gotta go with Plot by a hair.
v/Plot
Re: Round 1 - 8. Plot vs 9. KnowP (Open for Votes)
And this braggarts claiming Legend status?
Anyone standing on KnowP
Is crushing his windpipe to end this faggot.
-decent opener
Been trying to take over the LLL since 2008
But cant put up anything insane or amazing.
So many red flags went up when he returned
Thought China joined the Ukraine invasion.
-lol nice
Guys a nerd thats glass is always half full
While Plots is just constantly empty dude,
When I Told him I was keen for Morbius
Fucking geek was like: Yay! I love the MCU.
-haha cool
And that wife thing is just hideous as fuck
Do you honestly think shes hot partner?
When KnowP takes that horse-head to bed
It resembles that scene from the Godfather.
-decent
But guys street, came from a broken home
He never had that constant rock.
Now he trying to start that nuclear family
Plot'll help him out with a bomb to his block.
-no
Vs.
brain meet heat, ya girl in the passenger scrambling to leave
isnt she sweet: first bitch act like she dont see P drippin all over the seat
-lol decent opener
Nerve of this geek, feast in front of me, Im loaded with plenty
clear ya table cause only time my banquet is when the magazine gets emptied
-okish
Nigga dont tempt me, Imma marksman when i pull it
Like Lebron driving, IF K see P alone we all know he catchin a bullet
-lotb
u champin is foolish. i'll scortch RB before u see more clout
Biden your economy will be fuked like he put sanctions on your account
-by then/Biden is played
Assassin by trade, catchin this fade, Taken one for the team, goofy
Then watch me leave Plot future more dryer than Liam Neeson Movies
-ok
Plot had crisp wording & was more consistent
V-plot
Re: Round 1 - 8. Plot vs 9. KnowP (Open for Votes)
And this braggarts claiming Legend status?
Anyone standing on KnowP
Is crushing his windpipe to end this faggot.
Been trying to take over the LLL since 2008
But cant put up anything insane or amazing.
So many red flags went up when he returned
Thought China joined the Ukraine invasion.
Vs
Nerve of this geek, feast in front of me, Im loaded with plenty
clear ya table cause only time my banquet is when the magazine gets emptied
Nigga dont tempt me, Imma marksman when i pull it
Like Lebron driving, IF K see P alone we all know he catchin a bullet
Not a great battle I got it tied in quotes I liked knowp’s misses better and he more personals
Re: Round 1 - 8. Plot vs 9. KnowP (Open for Votes)
Re: Round 1 - 8. Plot vs 9. KnowP (Open for Votes)
Quote:
Originally Posted by
Plot
Newton said:
We stand on the shoulders of giants.
And this braggarts claiming Legend status?
Anyone standing on KnowP
Is crushing his windpipe to end this faggot.
Cool. Flipping that quote is a creative idea. You set it up well with questioning his legend status. Rather than 'anyone' I might've gone with "If I'm standing on KnowP" to make it more of a direct attack bar, but that's a nitpick
Been trying to take over the LLL since 2008
But cant put up anything insane or amazing.
So many red flags went up when he returned
Thought China joined the Ukraine invasion.
Cool. I like the wp, and the current event flip is good
Guys a nerd thats glass is always half full
While Plots is just constantly empty dude,
When I Told him I was keen for Morbius
Fucking geek was like: Yay! I love the MCU.
Ehh. I like Morbius/more BS as a wp, and it's relevant as a recently released movie... but I have to say I hate how you flipped it - you're saying 1. you're a pessimist and 2. he's a geek for liking MCU... the first is a diss on yourself IMO and the second I just don't agree with - MCU is mainstream as hell, it's not a geeky thing to like.
And that wife thing is just hideous as fuck
Do you honestly think shes hot partner?
When KnowP takes that horse-head to bed
It resembles that scene from the Godfather.
Lol OK. Good wording
But guys street, came from a broken home
He never had that constant rock.
Now he trying to start that nuclear family
Plot'll help him out with a bomb to his block.
Cool, haven't seen that flipped before that I recall
Quote:
Originally Posted by KnowP
brain meet heat, ya girl in the passenger scrambling to leave
isnt she sweet: first bitch act like she dont see P drippin all over the seat
Not bad. P/pee as a wp I wanna hate but the flip is cool
Nerve of this geek, feast in front of me, Im loaded with plenty
clear ya table cause only time my banquet is when the magazine gets emptied
This one's the opposite. I like the wp well enough but the food/table angle to tie it in was a bit tenuous to me
Nigga dont tempt me, Imma marksman when i pull it
Like Lebron driving, IF K see P alone we all know he catchin a bullet
Had to google bc not American. LOL @ Kentavious Caldwell Pope as a name. OK so I like the idea of K see P/KCP as a double np with a bball flip, but unless I'm missing something the driving/catching a bullet parts were confusing - they read like they should be part of the wp, but I don't think they are
u champin is foolish. i'll scortch RB before u see more clout
Biden your economy will be fuked like he put sanctions on your account
Nah. Biden flips are played and "economy" as a word for clout on the board is a stretch
Assassin by trade, catchin this fade, Taken one for the team, goofy
Then watch me leave Plot future more dryer than Liam Neeson Movies
Ehhhh... pretty much everyone does some variation of a 'plot'/movie flip so it needs to be pretty good to be any good at all. I'm gonna give this the benefit of the doubt and assume you're referring to some Neeson movie where there's literally a dry future like a dessert or something. Nothing comes to mind for me but I'm not gonna look through dude's IMDB to figure it out
I got Plot here. A mostly very solid verse with just that one bar I thought was a miss. Thought the broken line format was a little gimmicky but w/e, no biggie. I liked most of KnowP's concepts but the wording just wasn't as clean
v/ Plot
Re: Round 1 - 8. Plot vs 9. KnowP (Open for Votes)
and this braggarts claiming Legend status?
Anyone standing on KnowP
Is crushing his windpipe to end this faggot.
Been trying to take over the LLL since 2008
But cant put up anything insane or amazing.
So many red flags went up when he returned
Thought China joined the Ukraine invasion.
And that wife thing is just hideous as fuck
Do you honestly think shes hot partner?
When KnowP takes that horse-head to bed
It resembles that scene from the Godfather.
this one goooold
vs.
Nerve of this geek, feast in front of me, Im loaded with plenty
clear ya table cause only time my banquet is when the magazine gets emptied
Nigga dont tempt me, Imma marksman when i pull it
Like Lebron driving, IF K see P alone we all know he catchin a bullet
I got plot here.. idk his verse was pretty weirdly put together but he had some good punches there.. godfather was gold.. I love you knowp thanks for coming back