new...tryin to get some feed back

Standin still alone for some reason still thinking of you
Minds full of many memories, when I’m blinkin their true
She unlocked, unlatched my heart, playin the keys like Ray Charles
All those emotions she played with, a gift, she’ll pay for those
We start in the end then again its just as much my fault
For trusting bitches, McEnroe on the line yellin, bunch of thoughts
Seein stright through the lies by the truth hidden in your eyes
Same way man saw the sun solvin the riddle of the rise
Bid then on the tides, how they shift, a gift, automatic
Dj turned the tables, for her it became problematic

not bad at all for a first post, keep em coming

simple concepts... easy rhyming

come up with a topic, then write about it..

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but you need to get 2 links of feed back b4 this gets closed.