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Rebuttal Option
both competitors must agree to it at time of check-in
format is A, B, B, A (A posts first, B drops next, B posts follow-up, A drops final bar)
You have 24hrs from when battle was set to agree on rebuttal battle
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@Baron Mynd @Ryno
ready when you are
Same here. Rebuttal?
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...4-Cypher/page2
https://youtu.be/Q9C-D1HevQ0
Quote:
Red Flag: wake up, he fake tough, I can't stand this dude.
keep that same energy after i hit you like the black panther suit
rebuttal being a thieving piece of shit like that awful setup means that its yoursQuote:
Ryno Vs. Josh S. Yeah u talk a big game homie, just wait until Ry gets a crack atchu
I’ll keep that same energy & give it back twice fold, black panther suit
only thing i wanna see this crack atchu is the biting faggot left eatin’ through straws
I’m slicing ya faction, machete swingin blunt w/ the action
Cuz after this snippet could be the first time we see Baron cut into fractions
I got Ryno here and I'll explain why:
It's almost reluctant...partially due to geography/accents (I will TRY my best not to factor that in but it's tough)
Reluctant because Lars has literally called out a fairly clear "bite", by ryno in the past.
COULD CERTAINLY BE ACCIDENT/COINCIDENCE? MAYBE HE DIDN'T SEE THIS BATTLE...
But it's "similar enough" that (beyond this 1-2 vote) ,perhaps Ryno owes readers a quick explanation about where he got the line/concept...if it was just coincidence, OR if his creativity and ethics r in question??!!
Moving on to the new lines themselves,
Ryno's, while not the most complex in the world...appeals to my "audio"side with his smooth rhymes...
My one knock would be the term "blunt"(w/the action) right after describing a machete swinging.
A machete is usually sharp right? Not blunt.
Even with that knock, I think he EDGES this
because
Lars/Baron
First off take solace that this is (literally) the 2nd (at MOST 3rd time) in history I've ever voted against your shit in a contest.
And that's going back to 2014, AND, I'm POSITVE I've voted on your contests more than any other writer in my internet history.
So 2-3, out of....nearly 9 years with a couple hiatuses.
All that said let me first talk about the end rhyme.
After the (arguably major)"fail" in my Yankee accent, I did attempt a British accent and yes, the rhyme is fine in Brit.
ME tho?...like there are DECADES of "ore"/"aw" 'stretches' in USA writing/rap...if proper they can be made to "fit" no problem.
But this one here? In my accent just does not fit.
*SO LET'S STILLL TRY NOT TO HOLD THIS AGAINST U (TOO MUCH)*
Ok, lets assume I'm Brit.
I STILL enjoyed ryno's punch a little more -stylistically and substantatively,,
BUT, again
Lars certainly more "personal" here with a bite-accusation and evidence SOoooo
Ryno wins this quick 1-2 battle, but Lars has called him out/arguably hurt his Rep in the long-term
Thanks both for dropping and GL next week.
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edit* 3rd or 4th time against him,
so 3-4; not 2-3...
i mean. it's too late now but i could be really missing something big w/ baron's crack atchu worplay?
Whatever. The damage (my vote is done).
Ry
The wp was ok
But like
What are you SNIPPING? His umbilical? His uncircumcised rod? What exactly?
Bc a machete doesnt snip. Scissors do
So yeah, kind of corny in that aspect. Tho your wording and actual wp in gen was decent enough
Your punch as a whole; not terrible, but not good
Baron
Iunno man im just not feeling it this week
Felt like you couldve handled crack atchu in a much cleaner, better way
Felt like the wording was off, hindering the whole concept
Loved the ammo but the payoff wasnt there + one's gotta have a crazy accent to make 'yours' & 'straws' rhyme
Disappointing champ match
Vgt ryno
So dead at Lars calling one of the few actual black guys in text a cracker.... In a champ match nevertheless lmao
Ry concept was cool and fresh, but very loose... "Snip" is about as least threatening a stab idea I can think of lol , unless you're actually gunna circumcise Lars as a grown man and in that case this bar is gangster as fuck!!!
Vote Ryno
Not gonna lie, I don’t understand barons bar, but I thought he was going somewhere else with the biting fuel. Kind of a let down.
Ryno not too much better but still takes it
Vote Ryno
Ry wins