Islam: My Perspective

[Judge Judy]

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=119904
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...072#post1266072

Islam: My Perspective

This jurisdiction in which I place, doesnt ommit but one race
Will always leave the appeal open, to plead for certain case
As you see by my face, my words, I think there for I am
That if a religion is most hated upon..it be the talk of Islam

The Western Tabloid View..My Own
These races are make-shift..set up only to make shit
Happen..leavin other countries among there own deficit
Another jelous hit..BANG..innocence taken in one swoop
BBC, ITN, SKY..each & all point to one group
Standing in line in the terrorists suit..cock & then shoot
An evil leader making them follow..w/out playing a flute
Or is it the book of explanation? The Koran that infests?
Its the talk of Martyres that can put a hole in your chest
Bewildered at best..confused to the bombing in Baghdad
A black hearted leader captured..now pleads become facts
New pictures pointing out that..Islam preaches Death
While these bastards sit at large..we grit & hold our breath

This jurisdiction in which I place, doesnt ommit but one race
Will always leave the appeal open, to plead for certain case
As you see by my face, my words, I think there for I am
That if a religion is most hated upon..it be the talk of Islam

The Open Minded
A bamboozled refusal..to listen to biggots and war catalysts
To listen to a bush defusal..is damn near slitting my wrists
What about the Islamic women & kids..even innocent men?
The writing of hate against Islam..is from a powerfull pen
Reiterated again & again..but they avoid the good..its missing
Instead of focussing on bad emphasis..explain the fuckin religion
You gotta be kidding?!!? Be independant..create ya own views!!
Investigate your own queries.. & avoid the westenized news
See..you've got nothing to lose..the whole world is waiting
Ease off and look before you dive..defer from anticipating
The Unions debating..of what to do w/ peeps in prison camps
Your opinions shed light like lamps..
..to be not bias against Islam

So beyond foul mouth
and gutterless trenches
I hope the truth will come out
from the views in which you mention

[f-gee]

pretty good piece
i reckon would be decent in audio..
flow was pretty good all round...chorus was good
gave both sides of the story/views which was good to see..
nothing to pick out that was bad...
just a solid verse on an interesting subject
pax

fin

[Judge Judy]

Cheers. Feedbk plz!
Leave a GOOD feedbk,
THEN leave a link.
I'll hit it up then

[FormulaMC]

Real nice piece here. Haven't seen much from you, but this is a good way to get my attention. Nice topic choice and great prespectives. Verses were ill, lines stood out. Chorus was good. Flow was on-point, that's what I notice about pieces. If I couldn't read this piece without finding a flow, I wouldn't be replying. Nothing bad to say about this, overall it was a well-rounded and nicely executed piece. Keep dropping and i'll try and catch them and leave feed. Pz.

BTW, for your Islam rhymes (like in the chorus, end word is "am"). . I suppose you say it "Is-lamb" and not "Is-lomb". . In school that say it as "Is-lomb". . just wondering, i'm sure you say it as "Is-lamb" for rhyming purposes.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=120170
^ ^ Feedback appreciated , Thanks.

[Endeva.]

whack...lmao... nah, nice,,, i would have given decent feed, if you hadn't said give decent feed back.... later,, at the min im pissed as a twat... so...

[Trahedy Siphon]

Good piece..flow was on point & Ur views
were displayed well...Vocab was on point
& I agree, this would be good as an audio
piece so stop being a lazy twat & get sum
done...Bladow?..How?..I don't own a cow?..
Particularly liked the media approach...
Look at my new open mic wit the 1
& only GAZANOVA!!!!!!

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=119936

The Link^^^^^^^^^^^

AUDIO NEEDS DOIN SOON U PRUNE!!!!!

[Judge Judy]

Up^^^^^

[deacon]

yeah nice piece Brix believe this would be my first piece to read of yours....i also pictured it on a beat like Fgee said...The topic was pretty typical for this time but you held it nicely. The interludes worked well with the piece as well...nice work

[Bare Knuckles]

can you spell dope?

Or is it the book of explanation? The Karan that infests?
Its the talk of Martyres that can put a hole in your chest
Bewildered at best..confused to the bombing in Baghdad
A black hearted leader captured..now pleads become facts
New pictures pointing out that..Islam preaches Death
While these bastards sit at large..we grit & hold our breath

THAT`S how you spell it.

Loved this work, Brix, and to be honest, this is my first time peeping you. But don`t be afraid cause with work like this, it definately won`t be the last time.

Keep up the nice shit, B.

[Judge Judy]

Thanx for the feedbk.
Uppin
pz

[Key Tone]

WOW!! make me think in this piece a religion vs People i mean u covered both prospectives i liked it

Or is it the book of explanation? The Karan that infests?
Its the talk of Martyres that can put a hole in your chest

^^^Koran is against War and violence like any other religion.

New pictures pointing out that..Islam preaches Death
While these bastards sit at large..we grit & hold our breath

^^they saying that because people are afraid a misconception from the news Al qeyda bombed the twin towers it should be Al qeyda vs whoever not Religion vs People na'mean.

but nice Check mine BORN sOLD AND lOST OPEN MIC PIECE

[Prince Adem]

Beautiful... I'm Muslim so this touched me.... excellent lyrics, very dope vocabulary... very intelligent open mic

It was heaps creative to make it on two different points of view... nice job.... Chorus and outro were well done too.. .all in all very dope.... my favourite part was:

The writing of hate against Islam..is from a powerfull pen
Reiterated again & again..but they avoid the good..its missing
Instead of focussing on bad emphasis..explain the fuckin religion
You gotta be kidding?!!? Be independant..create ya own views!!

^^^ excellent message.... congrats and keep up the good work

Return the favour by voting on my topical VS Freeman in elevated front lines...

ps. Formula, its pronounced "Is-lamb"

[BPINCfreelance]

this is nice to see someone very open minded who can see and WRITE good lyrics from both sides of the spectrum but very nice drop
would be tight in audio if there was a beat change inbetween the two speakings
like forceful beat, then a more chill beat
i dont know, just my opinion
but very nice drop, very nice explanation of it all
just all out nice and would be nice in the correctly constructed and edited audio
hit me up to talk about that stuff haha i love audio stuff
aite
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[Judge Judy]

I'll hit ya when I've got time mate. May be put in audio.
It'll be in a waiting list though. Thanx for the feedbk
pz

[Ism]

Topic - 8/10 ---> Good and original... Something thats actually goin on right now...
Vocab - 9/10 ---> Very nice vocab.. Used some complex words while still keepin it simple...
Flow - 9/10
Structure - 9/10 ---> Couldnt really be better..
Overall Enjoyment - 9/10 ---> It was interesting and made me want to read the whole thing, instead of having to force myself to read it...

Very dope piece here brix.. The concept was pretty original and it was actuall interesting, and had to do wit something actually going on in our world today.. I really liked the hook especially --> I think therefore I am <--...

There was some nice imagery and metaphorical use in this piece.. I liked how you tell it from both points of views.. Kinda puts in in 'perspective'.. lol.. It all added up together for one dope piece..

My favourite lines :

Standing in line in the terrorists suit..cock & then shoot
An evil leader making them follow..w/out playing a flute

You gotta be kidding?!!? Be independant..create ya own views!!
Investigate your own queries.. & avoid the westenized news

Good riddance..

Nice drop bro.. Keep at it..

If you could view the piece in my signature it'd be much appreciated.. Thanks..

Peace.