absolutly nothingness darkened

[¢øS]

sitting back some tight shit bumped, its gangsta music!
lose it & get ya strap, then plan out ya drive by fusion
cuz we are nothing but some delinquents that dont care
this rare, we legendary & the legacy is a legion unvailed
we prevail, when hell comes holla out fuck the unrailed
wait, just stop cuz it all crumbles like dominoe blocks
1 stupid fuck starts it, but it takes down the whole flock
its like being over dosed, but knowing you might die soon
or like poping acid & reality is twisted, you think yur a toon
but fuck this whack meaningless whackness of a drop
why are you even reading this, are you high on fat cock!



lmmfao, idk wtf this is, im like half dead right now, lol

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=124924
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=124835

[¢øS]

uppin...like i kare...

[RapidFire]

ehhh...

vocab was ok...word usage was decent..but other than that, this piece sucked...simple rhymes and small multis...nothing made sense..and the fact that "gansta music" was in your first line just made it bad...

not as bad as "death of my cock" though...

4/10

peace

[Miss_Jess]

Didn't really liked this one, wasn't feelin what you were talkin 'bout,... Vocab was pretty good, might use more complicated rhymes (multis,...)
But keep it up!

Jess -xxx-