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10-20 lines.. now agree on it..
battles due friday 11:59 eastern time.
check in by wednesday...good luck
10-20 lines.. now agree on it..
in. i`m probably going 20.
^Straight....Check
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i have 20 written. Whenever you're ready. lets make this legendary.
Joker, i knew ya wack, cuz i was fed the truth,
but i was in the wrong. . cuz i stepped in the same thread as you. .
i'll end this truce, make him take the L, & beat this wack fake,
the term sore loser. . just means smoka with back pain. . .
fuck young p punches, my text steez is fluent,
you can't be the first bitch in legends. . dagyrl remarqabyl beat u to it. .
you ain't respected in text, how can you injure me?
you're like too little information. . FYI put you in this league. .
in my eyes im the dopest, heck, watch as i toast a vet,
wackness: seeing is believing. . . but you ain't posted yet
he sucks as smoka, thats why this bitch knows,
he only made his alias fuexion hoping he'd get dick rode. .
only win this or gain respect, if vote wise the thing was panneled
cuz your right of passage. . is as narrow as the english channel
fuck spitting, i've won so many battles here, you'll fall in the league
and get ate up like enzymes. . if this is 'saliva achieved. .
shiiit, we know you prewrote, sucked & rehearsed it. .
and i'll show u the equation's opposite when ya fucked up inverses...
aye yo how do u enter a battle
*BITCHSLAPS LoYaL_kNiGhT*....send a hint??
Hello Feeble!! did you know im partially Indian?..sorry pal
^Cuz that language defines you beating me in this battle..HOW?
If votes were your self image.....you'd have low self esteem
And when Feebs is placed up beside me.....
...your always the next best thing!
^I woulda kept that off the record...like your battle last weekOriginally Posted by Jacent
....But I couldnt help the resemblence to Young Pee!
A cheapskate...you cant get wheels...but i'll give you the boot
Bet you thought this line was a punch..huh? HA! Got you!
And me tossing you from 1-2 Tourney...well..its another story
I strip you of everything...cuz with clothes like those......
You'll never be indecent categories!
Kids sig is worse than mine....with wack braggin rights...
Top 5 in LLL??...sorry...i think i've already topped Phive!
Lucky if I win?...this isnt lottery...i just snatched your purse
Prewriter huh? you gave that away the post before your verse
Respect you.. Bitch your takin Algebra 1 and still in school....
But I had to right back...to prove you'll never BRB material
.............................................*tumb leweed*.......
.............................................*cric ket chirps*.....
^I gave you a chance to win...with two lines of harming hints..
Cuz that wasnt my dickryders...it was your fucking audience!
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Joker, i knew ya wack, cuz i was fed the truth,
but i was in the wrong. . cuz i stepped in the same thread as you. .
Funny, a touch played was the concept, but good nonetheless...7.0
i'll end this truce, make him take the L, & beat this wack fake,
the term sore loser. . just means smoka with back pain. . .
This woulda been funnier against old ass me, but nice wordplay and clowning...7.5
fuck young p punches, my text steez is fluent,
you can't be the first bitch in legends. . dagyrl remarqabyl beat u to it. .
Ya kinda hit Gurl as well, but great line right here...witty/funny...8.0
you ain't respected in text, how can you injure me?
you're like too little information. . FYI put you in this league. .
Eh...kinda a hit and miss, liked the wordplay, kinda saw it as semi effective though, Joka's good enough to be here...6.5
in my eyes im the dopest, heck, watch as i toast a vet,
wackness: seeing is believing. . . but you ain't posted yet
Real funny, wit was there, kinda eh was the set up, but I liked the punch...7.5
he sucks as smoka, thats why this bitch knows,
he only made his alias fuexion hoping he'd get dick rode. .
Clever, nice personal, flow was off some, still effective though...7.0
only win this or gain respect, if vote wise the thing was panneled
cuz your right of passage. . is as narrow as the english channel
Coulda and shoulda been worded better, clever concept, but stretched lines kinda dampened this for me...6.5
fuck spitting, i've won so many battles here, you'll fall in the league
and get ate up like enzymes. . if this is 'saliva achieved. .
Worst line for you so far, not really a punch, this was a prediction sprinkled with wordplay, pretty weak...5.0
shiiit, we know you prewrote, sucked & rehearsed it. .
and i'll show u the equation's opposite when ya fucked up inverses...
Nice closer, tricky wordplay, don't know if everyone will catch it...but nice and solid...quite dope...9.0
Hello Feeble!! did you know im partially Indian?..sorry pal
^Cuz that language defines you beating me in this battle..HOW?
Not the best opener, funny, effective wordplay that didn't relate to a punch very well...6.5
If votes were your self image.....you'd have low self esteem
And when Feebs is placed up beside me.....
...your always the next best thing!
Nice, real nice...clever and funny...7.5
Quote:
Feeble got a small peepee yo! The 15 year old kid. . .
^I woulda kept that off the record...like your battle last week
....But I couldnt help the resemblence to Young Pee!
Really drawn out and stretched, quote punches are pretty much out, not a real good line here (even though I'm the reason for that battle being drawn last week (self-prop!)...6.0
A cheapskate...you cant get wheels...but i'll give you the boot
Bet you thought this line was a punch..huh? HA! Got you!
Good wordplay, very witty, too bad it pretty much lacked a punch...6.5
And me tossing you from 1-2 Tourney...well..its another story
I strip you of everything...cuz with clothes like those......
You'll never be indecent categories!
Damn! Shorten ya lines, man, they're forever...still, real nice wit, good wordplay, nice, effective punch, the personal set up helped...8.5
Kids sig is worse than mine....with wack braggin rights...
Top 5 in LLL??...sorry...i think i've already topped Phive!
Eh...you said "5" before you used it as your rhyming word, wasn't thrilled with that...This was more of a hit on Aisle, shoulda been worded better...6.0
Lucky if I win?...this isnt lottery...i just snatched your purse
Prewriter huh? you gave that away the post before your verse
Verse/Purse?Someone should hit you with something...bad, bad, bad! And not even an effective line, fucka prewrite, there's a due date...5.0
Respect you.. Bitch your takin Algebra 1 and still in school....
But I had to right back...to prove you'll never BRB material
Decent personal, forced rhyme...very eh...6.0
.............................................*tumb leweed*.......
.............................................*cric ket chirps*.....
^I gave you a chance to win...with two lines of harming hints..
Cuz that wasnt my dickryders...it was your fucking audience!
Best line you had, man...Bwahahaha! 9.0!
Lets see...64.0 to 61.0
I kinda thought Feebs had the edge.
There ya go, nice battle, peeps.
Feeble Minded Wins
Peace
Last edited by Born To Kill; April 22nd, 2004 at 03:52 PM
Cot damn. I'm a popular little boy
I think Feeble won.
But I don't feel like giving a long explanation now.
Maybe later though.
wanna battle me
wanna battle
Joker, i knew ya wack, cuz i was fed the truth,
but i was in the wrong. . cuz i stepped in the same thread as you. .
eh...not feelin this one right chea
i'll end this truce, make him take the L, & beat this wack fake,
the term sore loser. . just means smoka with back pain. . .
hehe..nice one
fuck young p punches, my text steez is fluent,
you can't be the first bitch in legends. . dagyrl remarqabyl beat u to it. .
eh...not too hard hitting..
you ain't respected in text, how can you injure me?
you're like too little information. . FYI put you in this league. .
i liked this one...dope
in my eyes im the dopest, heck, watch as i toast a vet,
wackness: seeing is believing. . . but you ain't posted yet
eh..not much
he sucks as smoka, thats why this bitch knows,
he only made his alias fuexion hoping he'd get dick rode. .
nope
only win this or gain respect, if vote wise the thing was panneled
cuz your right of passage. . is as narrow as the english channel
ok
fuck spitting, i've won so many battles here, you'll fall in the league
and get ate up like enzymes. . if this is 'saliva achieved. .
very very nice
shiiit, we know you prewrote, sucked & rehearsed it. .
and i'll show u the equation's opposite when ya fucked up inverses...
ok, not too hard though, but good w/p
Hello Feeble!! did you know im partially Indian?..sorry pal
^Cuz that language defines you beating me in this battle..HOW?
not feelin this as a punch
If votes were your self image.....you'd have low self esteem
And when Feebs is placed up beside me.....
...your always the next best thing!
ok, pretty good
Quote:
Originally Posted by Jacent
Feeble got a small peepee yo! The 15 year old kid. . .
^I woulda kept that off the record...like your battle last week
....But I couldnt help the resemblence to Young Pee!
nope
A cheapskate...you cant get wheels...but i'll give you the boot
Bet you thought this line was a punch..huh? HA! Got you!
eh..not feeling this one
And me tossing you from 1-2 Tourney...well..its another story
I strip you of everything...cuz with clothes like those......
You'll never be indecent categories!
pretty good right chea
Kids sig is worse than mine....with wack braggin rights...
Top 5 in LLL??...sorry...i think i've already topped Phive!
not really a punch
Lucky if I win?...this isnt lottery...i just snatched your purse
Prewriter huh? you gave that away the post before your verse
eh...seem desperate for personals
Respect you.. Bitch your takin Algebra 1 and still in school....
But I had to right back...to prove you'll never BRB material
heh...ok
.............................................*tumb leweed*.......
.............................................*cric ket chirps*.....
^I gave you a chance to win...with two lines of harming hints..
Cuz that wasnt my dickryders...it was your fucking audience!
pretty ok
this was a close battle i think.......both had a few nice lines
and a few lines thta pissed me off...i'll vote later after i decide
which one i liked better..it'll be edited in.
I'm back...v/Feeble..just barely..very close..i just think he edged it.
Last edited by Savir; April 23rd, 2004 at 05:30 PM
Last edited by Richard Parker; April 25th, 2004 at 07:42 PM
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