While You Lay Sleeping

[Dan Dare]

This song is pretty good - You obviously love your partner/girlfriend/whatever very much. I disagree with the first guy this wasn't 'real deep' to me or probably to other people but it meant a lot to you. It's format was quite simple, but as you said, it's a song not a poem, and someone's going to have to sing it. In fact, I should ask: are you going to get on the mic and post it here? or are you just going to sing it to your girl?

So anyway, I don't really like reading song lyrics much, but this is the only board on the site that would probably have it, so good job putting it here. peace.

return the favour please
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=149172

[Smooth JT]

A lot of can relate to this and you've put it in words which is hard for a lot of people to do. When you let it flow from the heart and onto paper or the puter. it becomes greater yet. Much respect from me to you. Thanks for the Read, Spect, JT

[Ace of Aces]

thanks peepz, yea ima actually record for our anniversary and give the cd to my girl. dun think i'll post it here though. i'll hit your piece up Jekyll when i get back. thanks.

peACE