10 lines...
30 mins...
go!
blind.
10 lines...
30 mins...
go!
blind.
check.............................................
this guy lost it when he steped in and fell upon devine
told him to look for inspiration...
..................................and he check if he was online
it's a crime the way im killing you, beyond you
a half way crook wouldent know my murders true
who woulda ask you? your worthless... really
and i don't need half a brain to slap you silly
you belong in frontlines absolutely no skill to view
i came back and found dissapointment... you
step back yah threw... shoulda never really tried
yah falling faster into whackness...
...................................... but well let that slide
You better than me
Smokin Shrooms, You must be high...30 mins for U to spit a written is wack --
Twixn's rep's the oldest crew on rapbattles.com, and has LYRICS to match --
Skim through ur entire verse...onlY exceptions u'll make is passin the line rule --
After seein Camron beat twixn - 5 - 0...would probablY have me spittin blind too --
Twixn never mind u...these barz likeLY to leave u in a coma for weeks --
And u'll still win for the simple fact that, You've been on this site longer than me --
Ya' Barz aren't stonger than me, should treat Your text to powdered weight gainer --
Your punches are plaYEd like Fight Night 2, I'm hittin em' with fatal haYmakers --
Twixn I'll straight rape Ya...and that's posssible with u havin penis and clit --
Proceedin spits, Got Audioslave wantin his name out cha sig....cuz You weaker than piss --
-1-
<--- had to pick mah girl up from work
uppin ^
much luv to Twixn
Vote Here Please:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...51#post2428551
this guy lost it when he steped in and fell upon devine
told him to look for inspiration...
..................................and he check if he was online
Ok
it's a crime the way im killing you, beyond you
a half way crook wouldent know my murders true
Nah
who woulda ask you? your worthless... really
and i don't need half a brain to slap you silly
No
you belong in frontlines absolutely no skill to view
i came back and found dissapointment... you
Meh
step back yah threw... shoulda never really tried
yah falling faster into whackness...
...................................... but well let that slide
Nice Closer
Meh verse.
vs.
Smokin Shrooms, You must be high...30 mins for U to spit a written is wack --
Twixn's rep's the oldest crew on rapbattles.com, and has LYRICS to match --
Nice
Skim through ur entire verse...onlY exceptions u'll make is passin the line rule --
After seein Camron beat twixn - 5 - 0...would probablY have me spittin blind too --
nah
Twixn never mind u...these barz likeLY to leave u in a coma for weeks --
And u'll still win for the simple fact that, You've been on this site longer than me --
Ok
Ya' Barz aren't stonger than me, should treat Your text to powdered weight gainer --
Your punches are plaYEd like Fight Night 2, I'm hittin em' with fatal haYmakers --
Ok
Twixn I'll straight rape Ya...and that's posssible with u havin penis and clit --
Proceedin spits, Got Audioslave wantin his name out cha sig....cuz You weaker than piss --
Nah.
Close One man.....But 1/2 crook pulled it off with witty punches...
v/ 1/2
No Hate, And RTF please
bleh... up...........................................
Check out the Scourge 1 vs. Siar battle and drop a vote.
vote here plz and ill poll the vote: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=193573
this guy lost it when he steped in and fell upon devine
told him to look for inspiration...
..................................and he check if he was online
ok
it's a crime the way im killing you, beyond you
a half way crook wouldent know my murders true
lol funny but not real hard
who woulda ask you? your worthless... really
and i don't need half a brain to slap you silly
lol
you belong in frontlines absolutely no skill to view
i came back and found dissapointment... you
nice
step back yah threw... shoulda never really tried
yah falling faster into whackness...
...................................... but well let that slide
coo closer
Smokin Shrooms, You must be high...30 mins for U to spit a written is wack --
Twixn's rep's the oldest crew on rapbattles.com, and has LYRICS to match --
heh alright
Skim through ur entire verse...onlY exceptions u'll make is passin the line rule --
After seein Camron beat twixn - 5 - 0...would probablY have me spittin blind too --
doesnt rhyme and no
Twixn never mind u...these barz likeLY to leave u in a coma for weeks --
And u'll still win for the simple fact that, You've been on this site longer than me --
no
Ya' Barz aren't stonger than me, should treat Your text to powdered weight gainer --
Your punches are plaYEd like Fight Night 2, I'm hittin em' with fatal haYmakers --
ok
Twixn I'll straight rape Ya...and that's posssible with u havin penis and clit --
Proceedin spits, Got Audioslave wantin his name out cha sig....cuz You weaker than piss --
ok
half of ur shit doesnt rhyme ^ and is wack..
vote: twixn , remember hit that batt and ill poll the vote
v/1/2
dat nigga just did his shyt tru. keep shyt strong, ya effort keep ya rollz goin
return da favor
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...3&page=1&pp=15
this guy lost it when he steped in and fell upon devine
told him to look for inspiration...
..................................and he check if he was online
uhh weak opener. I think u could of done it differently and made it sound bettter
it's a crime the way im killing you, beyond you
a half way crook wouldent know my murders true
weak your word play is elementary
who woulda ask you? your worthless... really
and i don't need half a brain to slap you silly
okay but not really though of well
you belong in frontlines absolutely no skill to view
i came back and found dissapointment... you
weak rhyming again. (it's rookie rhymin)
step back yah threw... shoulda never really tried
yah falling faster into whackness...
...................................... but well let that slide
crappy closer. It stood out to far amoung the rest of your verse.
Vs.
Smokin Shrooms, You must be high...30 mins for U to spit a written is wack --Twixn's rep's the oldest crew on rapbattles.com, and has LYRICS to match --
decent opener considering "He did come whack"
Skim through ur entire verse...onlY exceptions u'll make is passin the line rule --
After seein Camron beat twixn - 5 - 0...would probablY have me spittin blind too --
nice I like that line good personal
Twixn never mind u...these barz likeLY to leave u in a coma for weeks --
And u'll still win for the simple fact that, You've been on this site longer than me --
doesnt rhyme (unless u were spittin it in real life) we on the internet though so it dont rhyme. I dont know your accent for rappin
Ya' Barz aren't stonger than me, should treat Your text to powdered weight gainer --
Your punches are plaYEd like Fight Night 2, I'm hittin em' with fatal haYmakers --
nice atempt of a metaphore but wasnt that great
Twixn I'll straight rape Ya...and that's posssible with u havin penis and clit --
Proceedin spits, Got Audioslave wantin his name out cha sig....cuz You weaker than piss --
really weak closer. Not felin this line at all.
Over all I'm gonna have to vote for...1/2 Crook he came off a little better than Twixn. But both u guys had a shitty battle here. I dont know how u feel about your verses but I thought they were both whack. But sombody gotta win and 1/2 Crook did that.
V/ 1/2 Crook
TO ALL VOTERS...... Please fully explain your pulls "I want real feedback".
Thats why I'm here. I wanna know what u LIKE and what u DONT like so I can better addapt to the vibe of the people "U feel me". I'm trying to perfect my lyrics and graduate to higher level "So I would appreaciate a FULLY EXPLAINED VOTE". Explain both opponents not just mine niether it's not just about me.
THANKYOU
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You battle me then bitch....uppinOriginally Posted by KoKaiN
Smokin Shrooms, You must be high...30 mins for U to spit a written is wack -
Twixn's rep's the oldest crew on rapbattles.com, and has LYRICS to match --
=ok opener, decent punch.=
Skim through ur entire verse...onlY exceptions u'll make is passin the line rule --
After seein Camron beat twixn - 5 - 0...would probablY have me spittin blind too --
=ok=
Twixn never mind u...these barz likeLY to leave u in a coma for weeks --
And u'll still win for the simple fact that, You've been on this site longer than me --
=not feeling this bar.=
Ya' Barz aren't stonger than me, should treat Your text to powdered weight gainer --
Your punches are plaYEd like Fight Night 2, I'm hittin em' with fatal haYmakers --
=meh ok, punch concept is basic though=
Twixn I'll straight rape Ya...and that's posssible with u havin penis and clit --
Proceedin spits, Got Audioslave wantin his name out cha sig....cuz You weaker than piss --
=aight closer.=
vs
this guy lost it when he steped in and fell upon devine
told him to look for inspiration...
..................................and he check if he was online
=not great opener, punch isnt clear enough=
it's a crime the way im killing you, beyond you
a half way crook wouldent know my murders true
=ok, not great though punch isnt worded effectively=
who woulda ask you? your worthless... really
and i don't need half a brain to slap you silly
=simple idea usin the 1/2 play, weak=
you belong in frontlines absolutely no skill to view
i came back and found dissapointment... you
=ok, just a simple metaphor no wit behind it=
step back yah threw... shoulda never really tried
yah falling faster into whackness...
...................................... but well let that slide
=nope not feeling this closer, not sure if you intended some wordplay with the 'let that slide' or if its just a statement. either way it doesnt help the impact of the punch.=
Read both verses again, I think 1/2crook pulled off an upset here. Twix you must'v underestimated him and not tried to come hard, your stuff was really basic. 1/2 crook put some effort into his punches and they hit harder than Twixes did. Not a ton of wordplay/metaphors in either verse, both of you had flaws in flow too..so judging on punches alone I gotta give this to crook.
no hate.
I vote honest.
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MondoThugs
damn..............
1/2 Crook took handz down!!!
Nice shyt hommie......!
Do ya thing, sonn!
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n1gga A$k About M3.........................!
want 2 battle me crook go ahead herb.. i wouldnt mind another W for my rec..
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