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    ! Problemed !

    New to site, jst a verse, chek it.


    I rupture a spleen, to hear so much as a scream,
    Decapitate a wack mc where he dreams,
    Its unseen, like the power of one’s mind,
    Coz I’m every high source of energy combined,
    Then refined, into the form of one man,
    Watch me swarm thru the sands,
    And storm thru the lands,
    Injectin a needle into each palm of ur hand,
    Suk all ure blood dry till ur too weak to stand,
    Ima tear open all scars to reclean em with salt,
    Charge 5,000 volts and attack u with bolts,
    Of electric and change the earth’s pressure to wat I plz,
    Squeeze ur body till vessels pop and pores bleed,
    Forcing u to inhale wen I release cyanide gases,
    Veins turning frail and causes time lapses,
    Church mases and different rap classes,
    He crumbles from the pain and shouts till he collapses,
    So I collect all the screams in a jar and seal em closed,
    Squeezing it tight to ur ear and release thru the holes,
    Hold, as it streams in ur skull and ur brain blows,
    Into flowin liquid which then leaks out ur nose.


    Wat u guys fink, lookin for tips on how to elevate

    Peace, feedbak plz

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    ne feedbak guys?

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    Quote Originally Posted by ExPlOsIvE
    Ima tear open all scars to reclean em with salt,
    Charge 5,000 volts and attack u with bolts,
    Of electric and change the earth’s pressure to wat I plz,
    Squeeze ur body till vessels pop and pores bleed,
    Forcing u to inhale wen I release cyanide gases,
    Veins turning frail and causes time lapses,
    Church mases and different rap classes,
    He crumbles from the pain and shouts till he collapses
    tha illest part...you should pica topic and be consistent with it...but this was ill....work on your structure as well..we could collab one day hit me some time.~1~


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    lol kk, diverse thnx for feedbak.

    keep em comin

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    You need post two links, to two OM threads you left decent feedback on, or this gets closed, thanks.
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    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...57#post2829857

    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=215401


    Keep em comin


    I'm not gonna close this, this time - since you're new - but in future, you need to leave better feedback than that, or I will close your threads. Thanks.
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    ne more feed guys

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