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  1. August 8th, 2005, 04:24 PM #1
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    When The Sky Falls

    When the Sky Fell i was in captivity,limited memory
    infinite similies,and my mind confines my sensorys
    this small cell,thats littered with filth and desolation
    were built for seperation,while i wilt with hesitation
    never paitent,the news displays senseless violence
    my vocals never mention silence,consent my guidance
    tha way tha skys fallin isnt the way we anticipated
    when our race is faced with death were this creative
    peace is a neccesity,no complexity in life effectivly
    these rhymes directin me,suspect but not arrestin me
    clouds shroud tha sky like a crowd of dark figures
    lightnin swells,excitin my cells,bright as hell,but bigger
    these flames released from beneath my feet prints
    complete with crease thatll cease to defeat scents
    no sulfuric wave,tha purest blade as hes curin graves
    devils rise,embezzleds rebels pride,to ensure its place
    there in the book of life but gods not givin assistance
    ashamed of what we become our demise still is persistent
    so the day the sky fell we all must have remembered
    if it wasnt wiped from our memory and recollections disembered.


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  2. August 8th, 2005, 04:28 PM #2
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    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=219891


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  3. August 8th, 2005, 04:31 PM #3
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  4. August 8th, 2005, 04:33 PM #4
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    When the Sky Fell i was in captivity,limited memory
    infinite similies,and my mind confines my sensorys
    was the best part liked it better than your last this had much better flow my head was boucnin like marisupalpouches lol
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  5. August 8th, 2005, 04:38 PM #5
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    lol..thanks up.


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  6. August 9th, 2005, 12:19 AM #6
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  7. August 9th, 2005, 12:25 AM #7
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    dawg u did ur thing on this for real vocab nice, structure perfect, and just a really dope peice......... keep droppin...
    im dope.
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  8. August 9th, 2005, 12:34 AM #8
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    Keep It Going Man, That Was a Straight Real Piece.
    -Vocabulary, Flow, Structure, Basically It Was All Good.
    I Like The Opening Line, Holla, Keep Doing Ya'Thang Boy.


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  9. August 9th, 2005, 12:46 AM #9
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    the imagery in this was brilliant. i don't know why you used such a large font size, but other than that, this was a real nice read man. especially with the mature vocab, nyce flow, real smooth in my opinion. but once again, the description of your words was the strongest part in your piece. this was a good read, unique topic also. keep it up man.

    plz return some feedback on this piece.
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=220503

    thanks man.

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  10. August 9th, 2005, 01:10 AM #10
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    thanks for tha feed back...up.


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  11. August 9th, 2005, 09:10 AM #11
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    I really liked readin diz piece. Nice imagery n real good structre. Nice flow n errything. Shit was dope. Keep em comin. 1
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    nice piece yo had some complex vocabulary going, and some home truths to boot

    shit time out pz
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  13. August 9th, 2005, 01:56 PM #13
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    thnks....up.


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