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    a dream or death


    The streets covered in gold the devil has missed
    my soul the land of milk and honey Gods people
    behold. The war of heaven and hell is it finally over
    no more gang banging no more being sober. or is
    this a dream that i've been wishing for cause
    my heart cant take any pain no more.
    Waking up and smellin the stinch of weed and cocaine. Hearing gun shots and people cursing Gods name.Sometimes what i do is go in my room and shut the door. load my nine quickly and point
    the barrel at the floor. Trying to aim at satans head
    cause he is evil and a liar and plus he keep tellin me that im got to burn in the lake of fire. but the only
    thing i see now is the gates of heaven I have no body but my spirit is dwellin.
    I love rappin it eases my soul just when im on the verge of hurtin someone God lets me gain control.
    I know life may not be what it seems just look
    at satan he thought he was special cause he could sing. and when we get punished we have the nerve to ask God what have we done we have betrayed him and his only begotten son. I want yall to know that my lyricall passion is everlastin but the last thing i remember is a
    gun blasting.
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    anybody recruiting for there crew or if your not just rate it please and tell me what you think

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    Lil Drew "The Prequel"

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    we have rules, read them...

    Tell me what you want to name the OM, and please don't do that gay ass shit with your rhyme scheme, no one needs to put their rhymes in all caps, we are skilled enough to see a simple rhyme scheme ( and I mean simple) when we read. that is just lame..
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    im not good at makin titles but the "thoughts of a non-livin angel"

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    okay okay...that was a 2 minute freestyle..i thought this site was not that good but okay ill drop something foreal

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    ^ How you going to think this site is not that good? Go look up any of my verses here and compare them to anything of yours. then tell me whats not good...

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    you can do that t my verses as well..matter fact...read God has a Gun...its alot shorter and alot better..than this....you should elevate...i dont know how many people i told to read tha rules before they drop...its a repetitive thing...elevate your piece...doesnt really fit tha topic to me..what ever...keep elevatin.~1`


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