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Thread: Lil Thug

  1. #1
    Soule
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    Lil Thug

    Once opon a time when NewYork was young-N-slow.
    There was a boy that would not grow.
    And as he got older he became wise.
    But in the battles the votes would not rise.
    He got mad and became a bad thug.
    But he izn't as slow as a slug.
    His parents cried as he got shot.
    But they were happy... He never sold pot.
    Or crack or meth he was smarter then your average MC.
    But he could not see that he was not a G he was a enemy.
    And as he was resurected from the dead.
    He remembered something some one said.
    "I rather die a man then live a cowerd".
    And the lil boy thought and said Word.
    8-Mile was down the west side road.
    And to get there he hade to pop the code.
    And he cried as his dad got really sick.
    And then was shot and revenge was certain to kill rick.
    But death was not the answer no revenge most be much more painfull.
    So he mett this babe named beautiful.
    And she told him a bad ass plan.
    First he had to kill dirty dan.
    The end was near death was ready.
    But the boy said keep your shit steady.
    One night the boy lost it and put 13 bullets in the faggot.
    the dirty dan slit the boy in the back and stuffed him wit pot.
    Not the boy is a ghost.
    Still out killin the Evil Host.
    Last edited by Soule; November 6th, 2005 at 01:28 PM

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  3. #3
    Soule
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    Number 2.
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...=1#post3412232
    Lets get em feedback please.

  4. #4
    Soule
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    Uppin.

  5. #5
    Soule
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    Hit me up.

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    this was okay...i like the structure but the content was kind of basic and pre-school...this would have been a nice peice if you had put more vocabulary in it (not to much as it would then also ruin it) but enough to see your intellegance and thought in the peice.

    also please dont put your writting that small some of us with blured vision find it hard to read!

    keep at it though man.
    AI


    “ˇViva la Revolución!”

  7. #7
    Soule
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    thanx homie.

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    trust me i wasn't putting you down it was only constructive man okay...much love.
    AI


    “ˇViva la Revolución!”

  9. #9
    Soule
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    I know.
    Uppin.

  10. #10
    Soule
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    Uppin.

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    OMG!

    THIS WAS SO WACK!

    ahhhhhhhh

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    ^^^wow...im astonished at how giood at feeding back you are...nice vocab...deep shit man!
    AI


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  13. #13
    Soule
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    lol.
    He just sayin dat shit cuz he hates me.
    Don't know why.

  14. #14
    Thug Passion
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    you settin it up man?

  15. #15
    Soule
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    I did go to it.

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