10-20 lines
45 minute drop
5 minute check
no hate,crew,dick ride,or unexplained votes
No feeding off.
I'll check in after you.
God's Deciple
Real Thorough
10-20 lines
45 minute drop
5 minute check
no hate,crew,dick ride,or unexplained votes
No feeding off.
I'll check in after you.
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i have a feeling this gon be a one sided battle but i'll vote
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what you mean cuz. You think he gone get me???
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no...deciple been gettin weakerand weaker every verse i c from him.....u beat me b4 so.....i think u might take him 5-3....just a guess tho
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Hell yeah, I accept, but are you going to show up?????
Going to show up?Course,ill be here on time,i even checked in
But out of all your the most eager to give me such an easy win
This guys just a faggot whos covering himself,so fuck dis head
I screwed his girl...
.....only to see him around my way to da otha side of da bed
Im gentleman,i pimp girls ya gay,yous never git women,noway
And ya girls just like a rental car,cuz people use her everyday
But ima lay off her,cuz i dont fuck wit ugly bitches like yours
And anyone could ride her,since she looks just like a damn horse
Some say i throw punches that are played,well its kinda true
Cause youve used em to play it for me,so i have nothing to use
I beat on fruity bitches like you,so ima beat you until ya blue
And give you a little black,trix'll have another flavor to add too
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=248394
hit that up so i kan vote when real spytz
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Damn....Im really losing my touch towards text.But whatever.
slit your throat, let the crimson-blaze, Spit with Venom Rage
cause this fags is "Yellow Bellied", like drinking gallons of Lemon-Ade.
my styles barely-considered, im sicker than Mileria-Nigga
and your textins' fallin off the charts worse than Maria Carey n Glitter.
spittin verbal distortion, ima dog hunchin legs-n-portions
cause ill leave you with "No Thoughts"..like the Headless-Horseman.
I'm inflicting black magic like a midievil Harry Potter-Dawg
my flow runs smoother than broke faucets..it's as if im letting Water-Fall.
i trample-kids, sample-chicks, im basically a cannibal..Die Trick!
cause Real eats his own species for dinner...fuck....im Hannibals Side Kick...
And you your just a trick turned bitchmade, mind as well take this L
Cause the only time you spit hot, is afta suckin a burned dick in hell.
God'd Deciple, mutha fucka I oughta come and knife, or get da crusafix
You's a good nigga turned soft, lost ta touch, feelin numb u use to it.
So next time for the record, you wanna challenge a REAL emcee
Make sure ya textin skills is full of punches if you wanna beat me.
I'm done fuck the structure, read the verse...
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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=248394
yo hit that up real and i'll vote^^^
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Only voters allowed in here is ones wit over 200 post, if not then right now.....you get it right, but yo UPPIN #1, leave links and shit, honest votes.
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metaphors and multies were sick by real...you had sum complex rhymes scheme...flow and strucutre was iight from you amn... a lil off on da struuctre and flow was good....vocab was good and complex form real....punches also were good accaully excellet from real..your verse scrores a 9/10
god- your verse had much better strucute and flow no doubt...but your rhymes were a bit too simple..vocab too..jus too simple....punches by you were good but not strong enough to effect real...
my vote goes to real for a better verse
check out my battle in y sig and vote..thanks
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