Life, Death, Life After Death-Vylint & Nique

[Nique.]

Vylint

Midnight screams, eyes roll back in your skull..
polite dreams, because they're relaxing the thought
that seconds away, weapons displayed become actual factors
only put away by the footsteps of a natural dissaster
We're all sinners, heaven doesn't reserve us well...
when u say life sucks, remember it's worse in hell
we deserve to tell, the real difference between
devils dance and the angels incidents interveined
we're tempted with cabbage, nobody remebers the sabath
i tried to end all the madness, and broke all ten commandments
befriended savage apes that mistaked friends for panthers
that suck blood untill you loose every distant advantage
listen bastid, sayin god dont exist when people dispair some
is like saying barbers dont exist, cuz people need haircuts
i'm a spiritual man, but im not religious, forget it mayne
i never asked god for forgivness, just fortune and fame

Nique

go backwards..
when things weren't seen so passionately
back to rib distribution between Adam and Eve
miraculously, through intimacy and brief seduction
proceeds to loving, God created, and reproduction
now we bleed destruction...and go with no option
hoping to stop it, but death tolls with our soul on the coffin
exposing a toxin, wanting to die like a rebel
eyes on the prize as we all confide in the Devil
so we're here as measily beings, just barely averages
with a lapse between civil and barbaric savages
so i'll scare in passages, writing the truth through a pen
while you stay useless so foolish making excuses to the end
satan's the fuel to the sin, and we follow his paths
a bottle full of misconception and we swallow his acts
until tomorrow we have, 24 hours of breath,
so i'll consume the air until i touch the power of death


http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=247643
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=248455

[David Lama]

vlynt linked me to this so I checked it out.

umm vlynt was cool, short and to the point and shit, nique was cool too, had a nice flow and the verse was pretty smooth, pretty much a cool collab, not really much to say and I'm too under the weather to give any better feed lol. fuck the flu. anyways yea pz.

[Daz]

Vylint linked me too..

we're tempted with cabbage, nobody remebers the sabath
i tried to end all the madness, and broke all ten commandments
befriended savage apes that mistaked friends for panthers
that suck blood untill you loose every distant advantage
listen bastid, sayin god dont exist when people dispair some
is like saying barbers dont exist, cuz people need haircuts

Ill

go backwards..
when things weren't seen so passionately
back to rib distribution between Adam and Eve
miraculously, through intimacy and brief seduction
proceeds to loving, God created, and reproduction
now we bleed destruction...and go with no option
hoping to stop it, but death tolls with our soul on the coffin

also Ill.


Nice collab. Dope and shit w/e

keep droppin.

[Vylint]

linking people RAWKS

[God's Deciple]

Vylint
You had a good drop.I enjoyed your piece and it had me wondering as well about the topic,and you kept it very intresting.I liked the emotion and i saw some imagery in there which was nice.These parts of your piece was the best in my opinion:
"we're tempted with cabbage, nobody remebers the sabath
i tried to end all the madness, and broke all ten commandments
befriended savage apes that mistaked friends for panthers
that suck blood untill you loose every distant advantage
listen bastid, sayin god dont exist when people dispair some
is like saying barbers dont exist, cuz people need haircuts
i'm a spiritual man, but im not religious, forget it mayne
i never asked god for forgivness, just fortune and fame"

.Nique.
The emotion is yours was incredible .I loved how you described the emotion carefully and took the time to word it good.The vocab. in yours was very good.The Imagery was nice as well,cuz i really did could imagine it.This part of your piece was very nice:
"go backwards..
when things weren't seen so passionately
back to rib distribution between Adam and Eve
miraculously, through intimacy and brief seduction
proceeds to loving, God created, and reproduction
now we bleed destruction...and go with no option
hoping to stop it, but death tolls with our soul on the coffin
exposing a toxin, wanting to die like a rebel
eyes on the prize as we all confide in the Devil
so we're here as measily beings, just barely averages
with a lapse between civil and barbaric savages
so i'll scare in passages, writing the truth through a pen
while you stay useless so foolish making excuses to the end"

Nice drop.
~1~

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[Brandon Heat]

I thought you hated each other..?

[Vylint]

I thought people replyed with feedback, not stuff that can be handled thru aim and pm, biter prick.

[TheKing]

Vylint
"we're tempted with cabbage, nobody remebers the sabath
i tried to end all the madness, and broke all ten commandments
befriended savage apes that mistaked friends for panthers
that suck blood untill you loose every distant advantage
listen bastid, sayin god dont exist when people dispair some
is like saying barbers dont exist, cuz people need haircuts

that nwas the best parts.

this was dope vy, i liked the way you twisted the topic

Nique
Tons of emotion, vocab was on point, as well as flow, the imagery in yours was also dope, aswell as vylints

back to rib distribution between Adam and Eve
miraculously, through intimacy and brief seduction
proceeds to loving, God created, and reproduction
now we bleed destruction...and go with no option
hoping to stop it, but death tolls with our soul on the coffin
exposing a toxin, wanting to die like a rebel
eyes on the prize as we all confide in the Devil
so we're here as measily beings, just barely averages

best parts^^^

hit the link in my sig

gods of destruction

linking people RAWKS

f'real

[EyeBite]

This had an excellent source of emotion in diss....rhymes and multies were good and complex...nuthin too simple...flow was smooth through out the whole peice both of you...strcuutre was good..even ffom both of you......vocab was good...topic was cool...interesting and creatve..overall this was great..keep it up both of you..peace

[nolonger]

open for you 2 sexy heads.

[Vylint]

my nigg :-)