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    R.i.p.

    Fallen Allies

    Do souls live on when 21 grams escape?
    a chill to freeze ya up like if blood coagulate,
    no bad debate, when we reminisce the lost,
    to reach an empty shell peaceful,with what cost,
    the frosted stare, so appropiately painted,
    at a wake it sinks in but the tears remain hid,
    a lump of pride goes down hard, but we never forget,
    hard lessons on why life is not lived to be forfeit,
    its solemn and morbid as his final cell gets carried,
    glimpses of vengeance as we recall who murdered Terry,
    but its not up to you so the mourning continues,
    goddamn brother all the fucking shit weve been through,
    i begin to muse on what steel i'll choose to use,
    the eulogy goes on on about how the loser's do lose,
    wtf who let the asshole speak havin to be sparkin shit,
    too confused with pain, i start the argument,
    "It wasnt his fault , he grew up with yall!"
    "My friend did fall, but he didnt deserve it at all!"
    "My apologies everyone," im already exploding,
    a week later i cant stop starin at the mili im holding,
    tellin myself boldly its worth the judgement,
    would T want me to jus check in to a prison covenant,
    life should be coveted,i put the weapon away,
    the bitch who did this, got a life bein bent over in wait,
    with that as his fate, ill rest a little easier,
    enjoy what i remember , to motivate this achiever,
    proceed to peer through the darkness with these cat's eyes,
    because my life is guided by the spirits of fallen allies

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    y0 i really really like this p0em..l0ve the situati0n and l0ve the language/v0cab.
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