Lay Down vs. b_my_guest

[Lay Down]

10 lines
25 min to spit
blind spit
no feedin, bitin etc.
no dickriding,etc.
g/l
may the best mc win

[b_my_guest]

whoa whoa...i said 35-40...yo 30 mins minamum homie i can't write a tight verse in 25..relax......halla back

[Lay Down]

ok ill make it 35-40

[b_my_guest]

iight coo coo...checkity check.....wud wud...good luck homie............................................. ...........

[Lay Down]

chec check

[Lay Down]

my rhymes are flames spitin at you and your burning
lookin at your rhyme book tryin to get ideas but it ain't workin
be my guest and bow down to the real winnin mc in this thread
he tryin to give me punches but he cant give anything but head
makin sure you dont survive from this is an easy task for me
his dream is to get head but for now he cant even lose his virginity
he tryin to get the W but it aint workin to this mc wannabe
looked at his last battle and it looked like he was only the age of 3
he tryin to get votes on his battle but he just gettin whooped with every line
should of just ran for pres. because his rappin skillz are a waste of my time

blah

[Rotwiler]

lol that shit was whack man, i bet that other guy gon win ill drop some feed after

[b_my_guest]

iight iight.....

yo you sayin ta everyone that you waz a gift, but really yo mom wanted a abortion,
spittin wack rhymes, discrace to the rap game, kid you way outta proportion,
ya 13 an, talkin like yous rich as fuck an own sum bents,
well bitch i'm ya new interior decorater,"bang bang" i'll give ya red tints,
yo good luck with ya threesome, cause they won't b fee~males,
cause yesterday, you "grinded" on the wrong thing, like skates on ski~rails,
bitch shut the fuck up, or i'ma for real make you lay~down,
talkin like yous gangsta, even tho u white as fuck, kid this ain't play~brown,
who gives a fuck if you beat N shady, that kid fuckin suck,
but now you stuck, ,juss won a first class ticket to god stop fuck........

[b_my_guest]

hold up i got sum explainations....

n shady.....> his last oppenent
13....> his age
grinded...> like he dance on a guy
play brown....> tryin ta act black....

iight thats it now lets get sum votes in this bitch..................

[Soule]

man kinda weak battle::

flow-b my.
pumches-b my.
metas-b my.
vocab-b my.
multies -b my.
creativeness- b my.
\/- b my guest pretty one sided.......ay-yo vote on da battle in ma sig iight

[b_my_guest]

iight iight.....

yo you sayin ta everyone that you waz a gift, but really yo mom wanted a abortion,
spittin wack rhymes, discrace to the rap game, kid you way outta proportion,
ya 13 an, talkin like yous rich as fuck an own sum bents,
well bitch i'm ya new interior decorater,"bang bang" i'll give ya red tints,
yo good luck with ya threesome, cause they won't b fee~males,
cause yesterday, you "grinded" on the wrong thing, like skates on ski~rails,
bitch shut the fuck up, or i'ma for real make you lay~down,
talkin like yous gangsta, even tho u white as fuck, kid this ain't play~brown,
who gives a fuck if you beat N shady, that kid fuckin suck,
but now you stuck, ,juss won a first class ticket to god stop fuck........

my bad i ment stupid fuck........yo hit up sum votes..uppin numba 1.......

[lady_Desiree]

lay down i've seen better punches from you in other battkles but cass... i dont think it was all really one sided quest needs to elevate on better punches as well and puttin forth some stronger creativity also he needs some better rhymes they came too basic and for lay down you need to work ond roppin some better punches and the vocab was weak as welll but my vote goes to guest for comin with a slightly better verse both need to elevate with punches and vocab and drop somethin more interestin lay down i know you can do better
you came with a better flow than b my guest but i just feel he came stronger slightly with the punches


vote/b my guest

[b_my_guest]

lay down i've seen better punches from you in other battkles but cass... i dont think it was all really one sided quest needs to elevate on better punches as well and puttin forth some stronger creativity also he needs some better rhymes they came too basic and for lay down you need to work ond roppin some better punches and the vocab was weak as welll but my vote goes to guest for comin with a slightly better verse both need to elevate with punches and vocab and drop somethin more interestin lay down i know you can do better
you came with a better flow than b my guest but i just feel he came stronger slightly with the punches


vote/b my guest

iight thanx lady.....good to b honest.......anywayz uppin numba 2 iight lets get sum muhfuckin votes homies....

[DaMicSnatcher]

honestly i think both of your verse had good points, both of your punches were pretty decent in my opinion...but after lookin at ervything i think b my guest gets this one for better punches overall
v/ b my guest

drop an honest vote in my crew battle me vs StevieFresh thanx

[thewatcher]

flow-b my guest
punches-b my guest
metas-b my guest
vocab- tie
multies -b my guest
creativeness- b my guest

Pretty one sided battle no hate V-bmyguest