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    The Greater of the Two

    The Greater of the Two


    What is a life lost in unyeilding living
    Of giving many hours to the survival of
    A delightful feeling of final biding
    leaving knowing that you died for none
    A brush of faramones, a touch, fulfilling
    A person, emotions disquised in lust
    To whom do i owe my secrets so chilling
    No, i refuse to die for this ignorance called
    love

    What is love but mans fleshless anchor
    To bring the strongest to their knees
    princibles of he in the starlit manjor
    And to the mother of the Garden, Eve
    life without bliss wisked away from danger
    but unshown are the lifes touched with glee
    leave us our love lost lifes to wagor
    we'll leave you your life so tamed and yet unfree

    -Onus

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    leave feed. please and thank you.

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    this is OK. its far to similar like all the other POEMS written but nice. i see great potential man. your emotion is there but be more descriptive and detailed. you metaz are there but its not being used properly and the mutlies need more work

    RTF on the poem in link called

    she is my pain

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