Red Hooks vs Key.

[NawkOut]

key you're a known bully & you're attitude cant get worse
but its time i put my foot down -stomping the shit outta ya verse
good, theses idioma punchs never stop
Hooks'll cause knockouts,ill turn ya head into a crowded place
& i'd ask for some elbow room-but my foot took up alot of ya face
ehh aiight, better then others

vs

I hate cursin, but this shit is gonna worsen
He asked 100 people if he was dope..
..and only got a yes out of 3rd person
Really feelin this, fresh concept.
I beat you, respect it...but you just can't seem to accept it
LLL is callin your name...under the list of rejected
haha nice, shits just mean

this was a good battle, both came alot differently, i have to go with key, his 2 quoteables where better, and came alot more direct alot of the punchs Hooks threw coulda been at anyone.

vote Key.

[Key.]

^Thanks for the feedback. Upp #3..

[Mystery~Murdera]

you guys both have stepped it up. Red Hooks.
If you can get rid of those fall off line you'll be
right on point. But anyways... I'm adding you to the
LLL barely. This put you over the hump but you need
to keep coming up. If all things are relative... you've
only been here a few months and already LLL. Nice job.
But be weary becayse there are probation matches in
LLL this season. Some will be cut. But I think you deserve
a chance if you can keep it up like this.

[Mystery~Murdera]

This is probably the best battle I've read from both of you.
This was a def worth reading. At first I thought Key had bitched
out because red hooks actually posted a real quality verse but
when key did drop that shit was fire. Here's how I have it.

Red
The elbow line was good
and the line about pepper spray was brilliant, lol
the rest was mehhh but your wording and the way
you carry off your punches have gotten alot better.

Key
Very nice. You're making this rookie of the year
thing a battle next season. I had already written
in bobberic lyric's name, lol, but you and ...?...
are making this a battle. Your first 3 punches were
gold and the last two were solid. Very nice wording
and flow as well.

One of the best FL battles I've read in a while.

v/ Key

[Summit Ave.]

Red Hooks

key you're a known bully & you're attitude cant get worse
but its time i put my foot down -stomping the shit outta ya verse
Not Really
i mean this kid is horrible he runs his mouth @ 20 miles per min
you know he has to much of a big mouth-WHEN both my fists are in it
Played
Hooks'll cause knockouts,ill turn ya head into a crowded place
& i'd ask for some elbow room-but my foot took up alot of ya face
Almost.
you FORCE you're way on text like you do you're bitch,how gay
i mean you do so much filler,^ back fires with the pepper spray
Decent.
fucka key he sucks ass & supernatural danced all over him
& yea i believe its WRITERS BLOCK-every word you throw @ them
No

Blah. Your concept's were fresh, which caused you to miss most of your punches. You need to re-word thing's to, get rid of the fillers. The Structure was good. Personal's were blah. Writer's block is'nt that big of a deal. Everyone get's it weather you like it or not.

v.

Key.

I hate cursin, but this shit is gonna worsen
He asked 100 people if he was dope..
..and only got a yes out of 3rd person
Good
I'ma hurt you, make you cry and I BARELY care
You're crafty <--so I'll prolly leave a mess everywhere
No, wrong concept
Shit kids the scytso mascot, hes an advertising prowess
You WOULD prefix this battle...but your grammer can't allow it
This one is played
I beat you, respect it...but you just can't seem to accept it
LLL is callin your name...under the list of rejected
Good wordplay, nice punch
Thats all thats expected...average? you're under sir
And sorry, I was born late...er than your punches were
Meh

Decent verse. The structure was alright. You had a good idea of concept's. There was, i think 2 that should have been replaced. Other then that your wordplay game is up to par. Personal's were fresh. Good drop.

v/ Key.

[Red.]

you guys both have stepped it up. Red Hooks.
If you can get rid of those fall off line you'll be
right on point. But anyways... I'm adding you to the
LLL barely. This put you over the hump but you need
to keep coming up. If all things are relative... you've
only been here a few months and already LLL. Nice job.
But be weary becayse there are probation matches in
LLL this season. Some will be cut. But I think you deserve
a chance if you can keep it up like this.

word

and gd battle key

[Red.]

Red Hooks



Blah. Your concept's were fresh, which caused you to miss most of your punches. You need to re-word thing's to, get rid of the fillers. The Structure was good. Personal's were blah. Writer's block is'nt that big of a deal. Everyone get's it weather you like it or not.

and this guy is so slow he missed the writers block line by a mile

wow i hate when ppl who dont know what thier talking about vote
but w/e

[NawkOut]

thats dope you made it red, for real.

[Key.]

Word good battle as well Red. Upp #4..

[Cody Nash]

Hooks'll cause knockouts,ill turn ya head into a crowded place
& i'd ask for some elbow room-but my foot took up alot of ya face
fucka key he sucks ass & supernatural danced all over him
& yea i believe its WRITERS BLOCK-every word you throw @ them

vs.

I hate cursin, but this shit is gonna worsen
He asked 100 people if he was dope..
..and only got a yes out of 3rd person
could've been worded a bit better. but cool.
I beat you, respect it...but you just can't seem to accept it
LLL is callin your name...under the list of rejected
Thats all thats expected...average? you're under sir
And sorry, I was born late...er than your punches were

red, i may underestimate you before, but this battle seemed like you were at a loss for concepts from the start. you had a couple decent/average punches but that was pretty much it. i think you can do better than this, i KNOW you can do better. Key, you can also do better, but it looks to me like you're getting your brainpower back. so keep thinking, and keep being dope.

both did good. key did better.

v. Key

[kid sick.]

Hooks'll cause knockouts,ill turn ya head into a crowded place
& i'd ask for some elbow room-but my foot took up alot of ya face
you FORCE you're way on text like you do you're bitch,how gay
i mean you do so much filler,^ back fires with the pepper spray
Ok^


vs


I hate cursin, but this shit is gonna worsen
He asked 100 people if he was dope..
..and only got a yes out of 3rd person
I beat you, respect it...but you just can't seem to accept it
LLL is callin your name...under the list of rejected
ok^

v/key

He had harder and more direct punche's. Red you had some good stuff as well just thought key was a little more harsher with his. This was a good battle.