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Swaying or feeding = Vote deduction
Last edited by Erupt; December 15th, 2007 at 07:02 AM
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word.
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this is no competition. i'll smash this pretender
and i got an easier job than I Am Legend's casting director
dude's insane to battle. specially someone as stinkin as him
i'm commited to winning. you should be committed thinkin you'll win
checked your archives buddy, & trust me it's a sorry debate
if people sayin' Com rad, i'm willing to snub the soviet states
& the credentials in your sig? this geeks schpiel's cheesy
it's like a really long way of saying 'this league is real easy'
& all your lines are bland. make sure you got 'em right, slim
cuz even if you try to Spice 1.. you'll still get shot up like him.
legendary member my ass. forget it. i'm merkin this pup
want internet buzz? drop your verse, then add 2 girls & a cup.
there's 2 chicks on RapBattles tho, so call me messiah
cuz you won't give me Noelle.. and look alot like Mariah.
i'm on top of the world, that's how this preseason feels
& i'm throwin' salt in ya wounds, cuz i like to preseason meals
you're respected? damn. the league must be in it's dying grave.
i'm the answer to that problem. you're the one Miss Teen South Carolina gave.
dog, i write dope shit that's legendary when i'm lazy and tired.
your rhymes? people forget the lyrics so fast Wayne Brady got fired
20.
lol sorry I got drunk last night didnt even realise it was Saturday until this morning, didnt wanna no show so here you go
Fucking bitch I hate your style, so I'm here to break your stride
But I'm into give and take... so I'll give a beating and take your pride
A fake just died, but I don't care... coz this fucking prick's a wackslut
He wanted a clean bill of health, and I just stomped the bitch bankrupt
So how the fuck are you proud, why is this fool even around?
Now check out my crane style... as I hook KungFu to the ground
I'll leave you burned with my quotes, your chance is gone with the votes
They told me to get a grip on things.. and I got this one on the ropes
Now you wanna shot like they all got, but I'll put a crack in ya bald spot...
...and when I'm finished yanking ya chain.. you can get it back at the pawnshop
You fucking bitch, this is your fault...coz I told you to stay off me
This dudes a man for all seasons, but he'll NEVER make the playoff tree
So I suppose we'll have words..and we'll see who cracks first
Bitch you shoulda bit your tongue... not a fucking wack verse
So I'll see you crack when you're slapped, bitch you're lacking in rap
Bitch only covers a lot of ground... when he's flat on his back
Now I'm attacking this twat, I'll smash ya rhymes till you're stopped
So you gotta try and play fair.. not every line that you dropped
So after this shit remember, the day you were dismembered
Coz if you can't beat em join em... and this fag's our newest member
done deal....
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PS. I dont want Titan or Dunk to vote..
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& the credentials in your sig? this geeks schpiel's cheesy
it's like a really long way of saying 'this league is real easy'
legendary member my ass. forget it. i'm merkin this pup
want internet buzz? drop your verse, then add 2 girls & a cup.
there's 2 chicks on RapBattles tho, so call me messiah
cuz you won't give me Noelle.. and look alot like Mariah.
vs
A fake just died, but I don't care... coz this fucking prick's a wackslut
He wanted a clean bill of health, and I just stomped the bitch bankrupt
So how the fuck are you proud, why is this fool even around?
Now check out my crane style... as I hook KungFu to the ground
So after this shit remember, the day you were dismembered
Coz if you can't beat em join em... and this fag's our newest member
This is a real tough one to call, on the one hand i prefer grips style alot more as it flows off the tounge better, reads alot smoother and seems like the better battle style. Com here came abit cliche after cliche, it's aiight to use it now n again, but that was abit overkill. Com had the crane style line which i thought was dope, caught me off guard too.. the last one too had some real relevance, so that hit nice for me too.. (checked kung is new), nice 8 posts. But then i saw it the other way, grip coming out with the 'this league is easy' shit, which was reeal nice way to clown on him, plus both the mariah line and the 2girls1cup shit had me laughin'.. so just for overall better worded lines,
Vote - Grip
I'm so fly, they sent for a swat team to stop me.
HenceForward.
I might vote later..but wassup grip? longtime no see nigga.
*edit*
be my damn partner next week grip so i can actually try again.
Last edited by Daz; December 15th, 2007 at 09:11 AM
Always Impervious an Axis Power.
Supermod Me.
hmmm....
kung
legendary member my ass. forget it. i'm merkin this pup
want internet buzz? drop your verse, then add 2 girls & a cup.
^this one was the best line imo, creative. but notreally that direct.
noelle line was coolish too, rest of it i just wasnt really feeling, i know you from another site n shit so iono just didnt like ya verse that much overall.
com
A fake just died, but I don't care... coz this fucking prick's a wackslut
He wanted a clean bill of health, and I just stomped the bitch bankrupt
So I'll see you crack when you're slapped, bitch you're lacking in rap
Bitch only covers a lot of ground... when he's flat on his back
^these were the two i really liked, having said that i think on the whole your verse was a higher standard than kungs. and imo opinion the winner was clear
v/com
A.I
Hip Hop Uk Resurrection
this is no competition. i'll smash this pretender
and i got an easier job than I Am Legend's casting director
^^sorry dont get it
dude's insane to battle. specially someone as stinkin as him
i'm commited to winning. you should be committed thinkin you'll win
^^aight, simple but aight
checked your archives buddy, & trust me it's a sorry debate
if people sayin' Com rad, i'm willing to snub the soviet states
^^need better wordplay on com rad, you gotta know almost all possible com-ending wordplays've been done
& the credentials in your sig? this geeks schpiel's cheesy
it's like a really long way of saying 'this league is real easy'
^^nah this's been said to everyone who had their achievements in their sig, mad played
& all your lines are bland. make sure you got 'em right, slim
cuz even if you try to Spice 1.. you'll still get shot up like him.
^^not bad
legendary member my ass. forget it. i'm merkin this pup
want internet buzz? drop your verse, then add 2 girls & a cup.
^^aight
there's 2 chicks on RapBattles tho, so call me messiah
cuz you won't give me Noelle.. and look alot like Mariah.
^^bit corny, but aight
i'm on top of the world, that's how this preseason feels
& i'm throwin' salt in ya wounds, cuz i like to preseason meals
^^dope potential, coulda done more with the preseason wordplay, still wasnt bad though
you're respected? damn. the league must be in it's dying grave.
i'm the answer to that problem. you're the one Miss Teen South Carolina gave.
^^hah, clever but not that harsh
dog, i write dope shit that's legendary when i'm lazy and tired.
your rhymes? people forget the lyrics so fast Wayne Brady got fired
^^eh
vs.
Fucking bitch I hate your style, so I'm here to break your stride
But I'm into give and take... so I'll give a beating and take your pride
^^bit predictable, but aight
A fake just died, but I don't care... coz this fucking prick's a wackslut
He wanted a clean bill of health, and I just stomped the bitch bankrupt
^^aight associative wordplay but coulda made it tighter, like bankrupt aint the opposite of a clean bill, hell I dunno what is, lol
So how the fuck are you proud, why is this fool even around?
Now check out my crane style... as I hook KungFu to the ground
^^not bad
I'll leave you burned with my quotes, your chance is gone with the votes
They told me to get a grip on things.. and I got this one on the ropes
^^not bad
Now you wanna shot like they all got, but I'll put a crack in ya bald spot...
...and when I'm finished yanking ya chain.. you can get it back at the pawnshop
^^aight not too harsh
You fucking bitch, this is your fault...coz I told you to stay off me
This dudes a man for all seasons, but he'll NEVER make the playoff tree
^^wasnt feelin it
So I suppose we'll have words..and we'll see who cracks first
Bitch you shoulda bit your tongue... not a fucking wack verse
^^nice wordplay but not really relevant cos he didnt bite it as far as I'm aware
So I'll see you crack when you're slapped, bitch you're lacking in rap
Bitch only covers a lot of ground... when he's flat on his back
^^lol this was clever, a bit better setup woulda made it dope
Now I'm attacking this twat, I'll smash ya rhymes till you're stopped
So you gotta try and play fair.. not every line that you dropped
^^almost
So after this shit remember, the day you were dismembered
Coz if you can't beat em join em... and this fag's our newest member
^^lol nice flip on an old concept, and good personal
yeah I think Com took this
v/Com
lol.
continue.
this is no competition. i'll smash this pretender
and i got an easier job than I Am Legend's casting director
& the credentials in your sig? this geeks schpiel's cheesy
it's like a really long way of saying 'this league is real easy'
there's 2 chicks on RapBattles tho, so call me messiah
cuz you won't give me Noelle.. and look alot like Mariah.
you're respected? damn. the league must be in it's dying grave.
i'm the answer to that problem. you're the one Miss Teen South Carolina gave.
vs.
I'll leave you burned with my quotes, your chance is gone with the votes
They told me to get a grip on things.. and I got this one on the ropes
Now you wanna shot like they all got, but I'll put a crack in ya bald spot...
...and when I'm finished yanking ya chain.. you can get it back at the pawnshop
Com came played as shit and rushed
Vote - Kungfugrip
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umm i dont mean to freepost and clog your thread up but why cant i vote. wtf..
best battle of the week, no doubt
dude's insane to battle. specially someone as stinkin as him
i'm commited to winning. you should be committed thinkin you'll win
& the credentials in your sig? this geeks schpiel's cheesy
it's like a really long way of saying 'this league is real easy'
there's 2 chicks on RapBattles tho, so call me messiah
cuz you won't give me Noelle.. and look alot like Mariah.
i'm on top of the world, that's how this preseason feels
& i'm throwin' salt in ya wounds, cuz i like to preseason meals
vs
A fake just died, but I don't care... coz this fucking prick's a wackslut
He wanted a clean bill of health, and I just stomped the bitch bankrupt
So how the fuck are you proud, why is this fool even around?
Now check out my crane style... as I hook KungFu to the ground
Now you wanna shot like they all got, but I'll put a crack in ya bald spot...
...and when I'm finished yanking ya chain.. you can get it back at the pawnshop
So I'll see you crack when you're slapped, bitch you're lacking in rap
Bitch only covers a lot of ground... when he's flat on his back
this was a close battle
com included some played stuff (playoff tree, etc..) that detracted from his verse
overall though, his style just resonated with me more as i felt kung took the humurous approach with mixed success while com just came in swinging
v/com
this is no competition. i'll smash this pretender
and i got an easier job than I Am Legend's casting director
i used one this week too. it was after urs thothis was clever, not really attackin him tho
dude's insane to battle. specially someone as stinkin as him
i'm commited to winning. you should be committed thinkin you'll win
alright
checked your archives buddy, & trust me it's a sorry debate
if people sayin' Com rad, i'm willing to snub the soviet states
this was alright
& the credentials in your sig? this geeks schpiel's cheesy
it's like a really long way of saying 'this league is real easy'
kinda funny, but eh
& all your lines are bland. make sure you got 'em right, slim
cuz even if you try to Spice 1.. you'll still get shot up like him.
yea not bad
legendary member my ass. forget it. i'm merkin this pup
want internet buzz? drop your verse, then add 2 girls & a cup.
good wording, kemp used this line on RB last week tho
there's 2 chicks on RapBattles tho, so call me messiah
cuz you won't give me Noelle.. and look alot like Mariah.
seen Noelle lines.
i'm on top of the world, that's how this preseason feels
& i'm throwin' salt in ya wounds, cuz i like to preseason meals
yea this was cool
you're respected? damn. the league must be in it's dying grave.
i'm the answer to that problem. you're the one Miss Teen South Carolina gave.
it's funny but i've seen a couple lines about this since that went down
dog, i write dope shit that's legendary when i'm lazy and tired.
your rhymes? people forget the lyrics so fast Wayne Brady got fired
ok
overall: this wasn't one of ur best verses. i dunno if u tried to change ur writing style for RB or somethin. Anyways, i liked ur preseason line the most probably. Other than that you were a bit up and down, the opener was cool too as far as wit goes. You spent a bit too much time on the current event hings, like south caroline and the 2 girls 1 cup thing. I've seen versions of both of those. But you were consistent with decent lines. woulda liked u to attack him more personally.
vs.
Fucking bitch I hate your style, so I'm here to break your stride
But I'm into give and take... so I'll give a beating and take your pride
i havent seen the give and take cliche used alot. this was ok
A fake just died, but I don't care... coz this fucking prick's a wackslut
He wanted a clean bill of health, and I just stomped the bitch bankrupt
cliche's alright. this was aight.
So how the fuck are you proud, why is this fool even around?
Now check out my crane style... as I hook KungFu to the ground
played on Kung, not that u would know. but i've seen it
I'll leave you burned with my quotes, your chance is gone with the votes
They told me to get a grip on things.. and I got this one on the ropes
kinda the same as above.
Now you wanna shot like they all got, but I'll put a crack in ya bald spot...
...and when I'm finished yanking ya chain.. you can get it back at the pawnshop
alright here, just seems kinda incomplete.
You fucking bitch, this is your fault...coz I told you to stay off me
This dudes a man for all seasons, but he'll NEVER make the playoff tree
i don't know man. not bad.
So I suppose we'll have words..and we'll see who cracks first
Bitch you shoulda bit your tongue... not a fucking wack verse
another cliche, just too simple of a hit here com.
So I'll see you crack when you're slapped, bitch you're lacking in rap
Bitch only covers a lot of ground... when he's flat on his back
lol, simple does hit.
Now I'm attacking this twat, I'll smash ya rhymes till you're stopped
So you gotta try and play fair.. not every line that you dropped
alright
So after this shit remember, the day you were dismembered
Coz if you can't beat em join em... and this fag's our newest member
this was bad.
overall man, i know you must have keyed this. I'm not trying to hate at all, cuz we already dealt with our bullshit back in the day. But this verse was full of too many cliche's or common phrases, and any time i see that it takes some of the originality out of it.
But I'm into give and take
He wanted a clean bill of health
They told me to get a grip on things
...and when I'm finished yanking ya chain
Bitch you shoulda bit your tongue...
Bitch only covers a lot of ground...
So you gotta try and play fair..
Coz if you can't beat em join em...
those r the starts of 16 of ur concepts, and those are all common phrases or cliche's. Granted u flip them decent, but i also woulda liked to see you use more relevant and fresh content. Kung's a new face here, i think u coulda tried to rip him apart with more personals.
Overall, i got Kung winning here. I think either one of you could have won this, and both didn't drop as well as i've seen.
don't tell me the sky's the limit when there are footsteps on the moon
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