Contendors - ..Randomized.. (16) vs. Meta5 (6)

[Mariah]

Due times:
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Line limits:
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[®andom]

check, goin 16 bro.

[Mack.]

Check...

[®andom]

psh, come on Mariah....


Its funny thinking you'll win, the shit i'm droppin with'll speak for itself
but hey, at least Jesus saves...just not the document he'd need for himself
you can't do anything right, but then again its true he deserves some credit
cuz practice makes perfect, and that whack shit couldn't get worse if ya let it
by the looks your barely hangin, admit it...i can't be the only one who saw this
that once you checked in, you'd fall off early this season like leaves in August
you've been here for a while, but now even noobs can easily choke this fuck
so how can you be better then ever, when even ya bitchslaps note you suck
I'm hittin it right on the head, this loss'll show how you failed at your plan
cuz tho the stakes are high, dont worry.......you'll get it nailed to your hands
Its ok being emotional, but what happened this morning is a sorry love affair
Not only did he wake on the wrong side, poor bastard saw his mother there
And thats pretty sick to imagine, but soon that fat whore'll know her place
shes been encoded with so many cracks googling torrents'll show her face
Just give it a rest, every concept this bitch writes is below par when in zone
Its no wonder ya get slept on, a style that soft could earn 5 stars on its own
I'll wreck his crew with no effort, along with a chorus of laughter from mine
cuz beating you's no biggie....but after this it'll be safe to say that you died

oh well, 18.

[Mack.]

18.



Watch me kill dis fat lard n smack him wit wire dats barbed
Cuz This fat bitch cudnt burn me, if i cooked my shit in carbs
You ugly poor bastard nobody likes you, or ur ugly ass reflection
Cuz bitch wudnt be called the winner if you had dial-up connection
I seen u get pissed once, but since den i been wonderin where u been
dis bitch is known to have fits, that he gotta stretch to get in
Metas known to gamble like im in Vegas dats why i stay rich
so il jus play my cards right here, n spade this bitch
he recycles, so even doe he in my crew im not his friend
Fag dont drop fresh shit he jus eats it n drops it again
Your a wack little prick n ur shit will never sell son
Hell id toss you on Ebay, but id much rather throw you in one
Everyone thinks you drop dope but u aint da best u fat lard
Randoms known to stay cocked n loaded, jus try not 2 suck so hard
Your known for playd punches and ur proly da worst by far
Cunt should be a olympic gymnist da way he flippin the bars
You need to get off riahs nuts cuz u suck n shes fatigued
u been down lately, but dats da only way u can suck thru dis league


There ya go sucka!

[.Bullet.]

Its funny thinking you'll win, the shit i'm droppin with'll speak for itself
but hey, at least Jesus saves...just not the document he'd need for himself
meh, ok i guess.

you can't do anything right, but then again its true he deserves some credit
cuz practice makes perfect, and that whack shit couldn't get worse if ya let it
nice.

by the looks your barely hangin, admit it...i can't be the only one who saw this
that once you checked in, you'd fall off early this season like leaves in August
dope.

you've been here for a while, but now even noobs can easily choke this fuck
so how can you be better then ever, when even ya bitchslaps note you suck
meh.

I'm hittin it right on the head, this loss'll show how you failed at your plan
cuz tho the stakes are high, dont worry.......you'll get it nailed to your hands
lol nice.

Its ok being emotional, but what happened this morning is a sorry love affair
Not only did he wake on the wrong side, poor bastard saw his mother there
ROFL.

And thats pretty sick to imagine, but soon that fat whore'll know her place
shes been encoded with so many cracks googling torrents'll show her face
aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahahahahahaahha ahahahha

Just give it a rest, every concept this bitch writes is below par when in zone
Its no wonder ya get slept on, a style that soft could earn 5 stars on its own
nice.

I'll wreck his crew with no effort, along with a chorus of laughter from mine
cuz beating you's no biggie....but after this it'll be safe to say that you died
kewl ending.

...........................VS..................... ...........

Watch me kill dis fat lard n smack him wit wire dats barbed
Cuz This fat bitch cudnt burn me, if i cooked my shit in carbs
kewl, used a fat line twice in this bar though.

You ugly poor bastard nobody likes you, or ur ugly ass reflection
Cuz bitch wudnt be called the winner if you had dial-up connection
meh.


I seen u get pissed once, but since den i been wonderin where u been
dis bitch is known to have fits, that he gotta stretch to get in
huh. cant understand the way you type.

Metas known to gamble like im in Vegas dats why i stay rich
so il jus play my cards right here, n spade this bitch
nah.

he recycles, so even doe he in my crew im not his friend
Fag dont drop fresh shit he jus eats it n drops it again
meh.

Your a wack little prick n ur shit will never sell son
Hell id toss you on Ebay, but id much rather throw you in one
nope.

Everyone thinks you drop dope but u aint da best u fat lard
Randoms known to stay cocked n loaded, jus try not 2 suck so hard
nah.

Your known for playd punches and ur proly da worst by far
Cunt should be a olympic gymnist da way he flippin the bars
ok, but good worded it alot better.

You need to get off riahs nuts cuz u suck n shes fatigued
u been down lately, but dats da only way u can suck thru dis league
nah.



OVERALL

Random- iunno this week i thought you went kinda soft in some bars, im use to reading your verse as a solid one, but just like 1-2 bars were soft for me, no homo, but solid drop for the rest and nice personals.

Meta- you need to type your words properly, like what i said to username, just makes "text" look like 4 years old are writing your verses, but some of your ish was iight, your lines can be stretched more i think some of them were left short.


v-random.

[Wordz AhGod.]

Its funny thinking you'll win, the shit i'm droppin with'll speak for itself
but hey, at least Jesus saves...just not the document he'd need for himself
Blah, I know where your going but its wak.
you can't do anything right, but then again its true he deserves some credit
cuz practice makes perfect, and that whack shit couldn't get worse if ya let it
ok, wordings off but the shit itself worked.
by the looks your barely hangin, admit it...i can't be the only one who saw this
that once you checked in, you'd fall off early this season like leaves in August
Lazy and wak
you've been here for a while, but now even noobs can easily choke this fuck
so how can you be better then ever, when even ya bitchslaps note you suck
meh, I have no proof of this but its ok.
I'm hittin it right on the head, this loss'll show how you failed at your plan
cuz tho the stakes are high, dont worry.......you'll get it nailed to your hands
Might be played, I dont know but its a cool punch.
Its ok being emotional, but what happened this morning is a sorry love affair
Not only did he wake on the wrong side, poor bastard saw his mother there
blah, could have ended way better.
And thats pretty sick to imagine, but soon that fat whore'll know her place
shes been encoded with so many cracks googling torrents'll show her face
Ive seen this torrent punch done way better. this was wak. It whent something like:

Niggas plant enough seeds in her to put er' on a torrent site.

some shit like that but with more thought I guess.
Just give it a rest, every concept this bitch writes is below par when in zone
Its no wonder ya get slept on, a style that soft could earn 5 stars on its own
dont get the 5 stars, Im assuming you mean like Hotels or some shit but it doesn't make sense if it is.
I'll wreck his crew with no effort, along with a chorus of laughter from mine
cuz beating you's no biggie....but after this it'll be safe to say that you died
First time I read it, I thought it was predictable but dope. now that I read it again I realize the execution was way off. Setup was fine though.

vs

Watch me kill dis fat lard n smack him wit wire dats barbed
Cuz This fat bitch cudnt burn me, if i cooked my shit in carbs
not really a punch.
You ugly poor bastard nobody likes you, or ur ugly ass reflection
Cuz bitch wudnt be called the winner if you had dial-up connection
???
I seen u get pissed once, but since den i been wonderin where u been
dis bitch is known to have fits, that he gotta stretch to get in
set up was stupid and errelavent Meta, should have said something about him being fat I guess.
Metas known to gamble like im in Vegas dats why i stay rich
so il jus play my cards right here, n spade this bitch
nah
he recycles, so even doe he in my crew im not his friend
Fag dont drop fresh shit he jus eats it n drops it again
trash
Your a wack little prick n ur shit will never sell son
Hell id toss you on Ebay, but id much rather throw you in one
Poor wording and a bad use of a wordplay.
Everyone thinks you drop dope but u aint da best u fat lard
Randoms known to stay cocked n loaded, jus try not 2 suck so hard
Wordings bad again
Your known for playd punches and ur proly da worst by far
Cunt should be a olympic gymnist da way he flippin the bars
not really witty at all.
You need to get off riahs nuts cuz u suck n shes fatigued
u been down lately, but dats da only way u can suck thru dis league
sorry, I didn't like this one. Felt a bit lazy.

Conclusion.
This battle was average on both sides. Randomized came light and didn't really toss anything amazing out there. He had a few played lines and a few week ones. Meta had poor wording and forced wordplay and a few lazy looking punches that were just tossed out there. I expected more from meta this week because of his verse last week. Random gets my vote for having a little bit more of a solid verse.

V/ Randomized

[one way]

by the looks your barely hangin, admit it...i can't be the only one who saw this
that once you checked in, you'd fall off early this season like leaves in August
this was pretty good

vs

nothing really

wasn't feeling either one too much, august leaves line was cool though2nd dude came pretty weak, basic writing style with soft punches and disses, wordplay and multis would have helped.

vote 1st guy

[Marv.]

*contenders

[Law.]

Its funny thinking you'll win, the shit i'm droppin with'll speak for itself
but hey, at least Jesus saves...just not the document he'd need for himself
Not feeling.

you can't do anything right, but then again its true he deserves some credit
cuz practice makes perfect, and that whack shit couldn't get worse if ya let it
OK, pretty basic.

by the looks your barely hangin, admit it...i can't be the only one who saw this
that once you checked in, you'd fall off early this season like leaves in August
Not liking

you've been here for a while, but now even noobs can easily choke this fuck
so how can you be better then ever, when even ya bitchslaps note you suck
OK

I'm hittin it right on the head, this loss'll show how you failed at your plan
cuz tho the stakes are high, dont worry.......you'll get it nailed to your hands
played

Its ok being emotional, but what happened this morning is a sorry love affair
Not only did he wake on the wrong side, poor bastard saw his mother there
Funny, but it weren't set up well at all.

And thats pretty sick to imagine, but soon that fat whore'll know her place
shes been encoded with so many cracks googling torrents'll show her face
what?

Just give it a rest, every concept this bitch writes is below par when in zone
Its no wonder ya get slept on, a style that soft could earn 5 stars on its own
OK

I'll wreck his crew with no effort, along with a chorus of laughter from mine
cuz beating you's no biggie....but after this it'll be safe to say that you died
Weak

How the fuck Random can you say my line using a mother concept was played when you use a basic mother line like this:

Its ok being emotional, but what happened this morning is a sorry love affair
Not only did he wake on the wrong side, poor bastard saw his mother there
Funny, but it weren't set up well at all.

I'm a little curious where you think your concepts are fresh when they are not at all.

[QUOTE = Meta5]Watch me kill dis fat lard n smack him wit wire dats barbed
Cuz This fat bitch cudnt burn me, if i cooked my shit in carbs
Kinda liked.

You ugly poor bastard nobody likes you, or ur ugly ass reflection
Cuz bitch wudnt be called the winner if you had dial-up connection
NO

I seen u get pissed once, but since den i been wonderin where u been
dis bitch is known to have fits, that he gotta stretch to get in
Nah

Metas known to gamble like im in Vegas dats why i stay rich
so il jus play my cards right here, n spade this bitch
get the WP but its not good

he recycles, so even doe he in my crew im not his friend
Fag dont drop fresh shit he jus eats it n drops it again
basic

Your a wack little prick n ur shit will never sell son
Hell id toss you on Ebay, but id much rather throw you in one
Gay

Everyone thinks you drop dope but u aint da best u fat lard
Randoms known to stay cocked n loaded, jus try not 2 suck so hard
No

Your known for playd punches and ur proly da worst by far
Cunt should be a olympic gymnist da way he flippin the bars
I'm sure this played .. either way it is weak

You need to get off riahs nuts cuz u suck n shes fatigued
u been down lately, but dats da only way u can suck thru dis league
Shit closer [/QUOTE]

How has this battle got more feedback than mine & Nem's? I'm guessing the two kings of AIM are getting people to vote.

I predicted this battle as to be pretty decent. This was mpre than disapointing. Meta can come nice & I was expecting to see a few highlights here but you looked like you didn't even try & Ran's weak shit topped yours.

Vote Ran.

[Spekz.]

Its funny thinking you'll win, the shit i'm droppin with'll speak for itself
but hey, at least Jesus saves...just not the document he'd need for himself
^^good stuff

you can't do anything right, but then again its true he deserves some credit
cuz practice makes perfect, and that whack shit couldn't get worse if ya let it
^^okish

by the looks your barely hangin, admit it...i can't be the only one who saw this
that once you checked in, you'd fall off early this season like leaves in August
^^not feelin it..

you've been here for a while, but now even noobs can easily choke this fuck
so how can you be better then ever, when even ya bitchslaps note you suck
^^good good

I'm hittin it right on the head, this loss'll show how you failed at your plan
cuz tho the stakes are high, dont worry.......you'll get it nailed to your hands
^^dang, good!

Its ok being emotional, but what happened this morning is a sorry love affair
Not only did he wake on the wrong side, poor bastard saw his mother there
^^lmao

And thats pretty sick to imagine, but soon that fat whore'll know her place
shes been encoded with so many cracks googling torrents'll show her face
^^meh, not 4 me

Just give it a rest, every concept this bitch writes is below par when in zone
Its no wonder ya get slept on, a style that soft could earn 5 stars on its own
^^not bad

I'll wreck his crew with no effort, along with a chorus of laughter from mine
cuz beating you's no biggie....but after this it'll be safe to say that you died
^^okish


vs

Watch me kill dis fat lard n smack him wit wire dats barbed
Cuz This fat bitch cudnt burn me, if i cooked my shit in carbs
^^pretty good

You ugly poor bastard nobody likes you, or ur ugly ass reflection
Cuz bitch wudnt be called the winner if you had dial-up connection
^^naa

I seen u get pissed once, but since den i been wonderin where u been
dis bitch is known to have fits, that he gotta stretch to get in
^^alright alright

Metas known to gamble like im in Vegas dats why i stay rich
so il jus play my cards right here, n spade this bitch
^^seen it

he recycles, so even doe he in my crew im not his friend
Fag dont drop fresh shit he jus eats it n drops it again
^^pretty good

Your a wack little prick n ur shit will never sell son
Hell id toss you on Ebay, but id much rather throw you in one
^^ok

Everyone thinks you drop dope but u aint da best u fat lard
Randoms known to stay cocked n loaded, jus try not 2 suck so hard
^^ok

Your known for playd punches and ur proly da worst by far
Cunt should be a olympic gymnist da way he flippin the bars
^^ok

You need to get off riahs nuts cuz u suck n shes fatigued
u been down lately, but dats da only way u can suck thru dis league
^^haha


overall - good battle, meta you where consistent but nothing over the top...random nice verse took this with some nices punches


vote/random!

[Nemesis.]

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Fuck breakin this down, this was weak. Random you came half assed completely..you shouldn had slacked.. you shoulda came hard so you could keep the momentum for next week. You had some played concepts, you wording was on at some points an off at others. Your concepts were kinda lacking but a few connected an were pretty cool while others were not so fresh, an weren't to harsh. Meta.. you came weak, your wordin was meh thats your biggest problem, you seem to grasp some okay concepts at times then just let em down with your wording,..you didn't flip anything to well an nothin to harsh, overall Random took this with ease with an overall more polished verse an harder punches

v/random

[Wordz AhGod.]

^^ Chuuuch

This battle got more then any other battle I think. Its also offically a K.O. I think. Sorry Meta, maybe dropping so much in FL got to you or something. Worry about here more and just come back harder next week fam. Rand. your obviously going to the Champ match but your probably gonna get stomped like I did you come like this my dude. He might even use some this against you.

[®andom]

ha.

[DGK]

random by a long shot, his bars don't rhyme that much, could use more inner rhyming, but the concepts r dope, and stay consistent. Had a ton of personals, overall it was enuff to take the win. Meta, ur verse had 1 decent punch, the 1st one, not super hard but it was a punch. The rest was pretty weak. Overall, 1 sided battle.

V/R