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Thread: If you Like Sad Deep Poems read this one

  1. #1
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    Exclamation If you Like Sad Deep Poems read this one

    some days
    I sit and hear the yells
    fears loseing my pride
    robbed of
    grandmother screaming
    Brother crying
    I sit there and pretend
    to not care
    But inside it truely wares
    ripping and tearing at my heart
    I know i don't have it that bad but
    It is pretty bad
    and it makes me so sad
    i wish i could just be glad
    the smiles and laughs went away
    as soon as I came here
    Sometimes i just want to cry like now
    just writeing this poem of life
    When I was with my mom it was so much better
    we might not have had everything but
    I liked it better there
    I feel like here no one loves me
    so I look to my friends for love
    and they give so much
    There more of my family than anything
    So I am closeing this poem with a goodbye
    farewell I will be back to write you'll see
    Hey guys Kool-Aids Out PeAcE!

  2. #2
    TeraRhymes
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    hey grl nice poem im feelin it its sad as fuck sepciall not helpoin readin it wen ur already sad but aht was deep keep doing stay up

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