I thought this was a good drop
I was imagining the scenery, which made it creepy
for some reason I think it should be actions but your probably right I suck at words haha
"I about lost it, couldn't control my action,
lifted a fist and took a stroll with passion."
but the flow was straight and overall content was cool
I actually lol'd at this line for some reason
"A falcon punch with no delivery?"
stay up man
Peace.
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