the journey from hell.

[Orc]

up?

[_Lyrics]

nice drop burd, I felt the rhymescheme and multis, and the storyline was kind of funny and ironic to me, kind of like enduring the pains of hell just to escape it and to feel the worst of the worst. some bars had some nice metaphors in it that caught my eye, like gripping water line and the thoughts matching the trains speed, i was feeling the whole idea of an adventure back from hell, to regroup with his long lost fiance, and then coming to the horrible realization at the end.. i kind of didnt expect that, anyways, the story was real creative and i can tell you had fun with it. thanks for the read.

hit up planets in my sig whenever..

[Esc0BosS]

Damn... this piece was nice as fuck...
Dope concept, i like how u come at it with a light hearted side to it...

A train full of roars & growls, chest beating & CRUNCH,
Someone took it too far, can't they not act like demons for once?
^^
which most dudes wouldnt think of doing with a piece like this

Vocally this whole piece to me was flowed perfect aswell as the actual flow to the progression of the story

Lyricly this drop was solid too........
The vocab and the use of it was def. on point, the wording and wit gave a unique edge to this piece

Okay, okay, breathe. i'm so stunned i could fall dead..
..But i'd get back up, annoyed with a sore head,

aswell as some dope quotables,

But why would SHE ever marry a monster?
She could play drums on my heart and carry a concert,

Even with the nice vocab, what i liked most was how it was so easy to read

Overall this piece was straight ill to me, except the way shit ended...too obvious lol
real solid drop tho , mad props...stay up #1