The Fourth Horseman

[Lurid]

eh homie this piece is fire. great flow great rhyme tons of imagery and wordplay. i really felt this piece and i was i surprised by it. nice work

[verbalweaponz]

this was pretty damn good. as far as the fourth horseman being played...i have heard it before, in fact construct is droppin a collab called the four horsemen....that being said im a fan of this shit too. I love apocalyptic themed tracks. I think you had decent insights on this one.stayed on point, it reads nice.

good work

[Sting3r]

Thanks to all for the feed... @ reflex... the fourth horseman is touched on a lot? or just the idea of destroying the Earth? I sort of get what you mean, but then I don't. and to me the first bar was the best, you just gotta read it right i suppose. but i agree i stretched some lines a little, but its not necessarily meant to go with a beat, it just sounds good when its spit. i really gotta get a mic because I've noticed my flow is hard to catch in some of my shit, its just my style i guess.

thanks 2 all for feed, stay up. ill feed back on any drops if possible

I've seen this concept done up quite a few times, having been on so many forums..

but this really isn't half bad.. like i said, didn;t mind the read at all.