...Are You As Ill As Me...Wanna Find Out...

[Esc0BosS]

Aint no way of living life right in a religious light
Too much conducted corruption, shootin n bussin

Currency is funny, currently its money that make a dunny
Leave anutha brother bloody or buried

Racist’s? Sickening , but why create tha division?
Man made to precision in gods image? I guess hate was within him

Faggots grasping weapons with mass agression,
techz blasting wettin bastards, left gasping sweatin,
I leak em speakin freedom cuz ur path is destined,
wit backed direction due to a passed vast oppression,
unknowing how hopless our minds, there’s holes in the lies
open your eyes…its just a suggestion,
concealed beings breathing in a past confession
but being honest beckons a godless message stressing
im asking for answers im lacking to constant wreckage,
im lost so I stop n ask directions to relapse this session
a contrast to blessing is that what’s cancers message?

Existence permitted to tha minds of tha illest…
In my eyes a child abuser uses tha same mind as mine…
I find that some sick shit

For real is we seeing the department of love?
becoming just a farce from above?
Nah I seen it living…dead in an apartment of drugs

A knowing all being soulda been knowing and for seeing
Of whores kneeling for cream, distort preaching to teens,
Kids getting caught stealing for feeds…
Kids getting caught steel wielding dealing to fiends
And I know there’s a meaning somewhere…
But guns spare theres someone scheming unfair
So muthafuking war’s breathing in dreams???
And damn the poor’s needy! But tha man with all greedy
…and ya’l all see it…keep telling me its all reasoned…one




Im jus fuckin with tha title...obviously you aint lol nah J/P... aint fucked to write nothin up today, this jus some shit i done a minute back...

now...time to get no feed lol

[Isaiah Thomas]

haha I thought this was cool, flow was real smooth, the multi's were good too.

[Esc0BosS]

haha I thought this was cool, flow was real smooth, the multi's were good too.

^^ how u gonna say that and not comment on the content with a piece like this? smh @ the ignorance

regardless thanx for tha looks son #1

[Isaiah Thomas]

Sorry man, is this what you wanted?


Aint no way of living life right in a religious light
Too much conducted corruption, shootin n bussin
Currency is funny, currently its money that make a dunny
Leave anutha brother bloody or buried
-flow was good, good usage of multis, good way to open up, made me feel it more my 2nd time reading it

Racist’s? Sickening , but why create tha division?
Man made to precision in gods image? I guess hate was within him
Faggots grasping weapons with mass agression,
techz blasting wettin bastards, left gasping sweatin,
I leak em speakin freedom cuz ur path is destined,
wit backed direction due to a passed vast oppression,
-again flow is strong, drawn in more to your topic

unknowing how hopless our minds, there’s holes in the lies
open your eyes…its just a suggestion,
concealed beings breathing in a past confession
but being honest beckons a godless message stressing
im asking for answers im lacking to constant wreckage,
im lost so I stop n ask directions to relapse this session
a contrast to blessing is that what’s cancers message?
-I like the last line but I wasn't really feeling this section

Existence permitted to tha minds of tha illest…
In my eyes a child abuser uses tha same mind as mine…
I find that some sick shit
-yeah i liked this, if that's true then that is really sick -_- ha

For real is we seeing the department of love?
becoming just a farce from above?
Nah I seen it living…dead in an apartment of drugs
-dope

A knowing all being "soulda" (shoulda?) been knowing and for seeing
Of whores kneeling for cream, distort preaching to teens,
Kids getting caught stealing for feeds…
Kids getting caught steel wielding dealing to fiends
And I know there’s a meaning somewhere…
But guns spare theres someone scheming unfair
So muthafuking war’s breathing in dreams???
And damn the poor’s needy! But tha man with all greedy
…and ya’l all see it…keep telling me its all reasoned…one
- this was cool, i thought you could of put a couple more lines to end it better but this was still cool and I can't end anything good so im a bad judge

I liked the piece, to me its hard to pick a favorite line in a topic themed rhyme but I will say the whole thing was dope. if theres anything I missed I'll reply back, it's all love man.

Peace.

[Esc0BosS]

no need fam, appreciate tha 1&2nd look lol but i dont think you really got what im saying

e.g.

Existence permitted to tha minds of tha illest…
In my eyes a child abuser uses tha same mind as mine…
I find that some sick shit

^ im not saying i abuse children, im sayin we all holding tha same tool in our heads capable of doing fucked up shit...cant really be fucked to ellaborate (fuck tha spelling) its kind of got a dis-proving god element to it tho, feel me?...

ironic how its harder to look inbetween the lines when your reading aint it?...lol

anyway no offence, i dont expect ppl to fully understand my shit, not saying its too complex, its just tha way i write...anyway, thanx for tha feed fam, i'd b lookin out for mo of ya shit..#1

[Crookshank]

Good shit.... feelin the flow on this one for sure. Just out of curiosity, what's with some of the words bold n other aren't? anyway, I liked the vocab this one, really contributed to the flow in a very nice way. Keep it up man, content was on, flow was on, rhyming was on. stay up. 8.5/10

[Isaiah Thomas]

oh okay, no one really can understand what you write unless you give an explanation but that takes away all the fun of reading haha thanks.

Bump this thread it's dope dont sleep people!

[Esc0BosS]

dont worry, i dont be doin shit bold so it looks pretty lol tha shits that aint in bold is meant to flow nice, slow and laid back, and i just pick up tha speed in tha parts that are bold...

appreciate tha feed, #1

[Esc0BosS]

bump

[PIMA]

your not that hard to get.... you just fit rhyme scheme and over self indulge into abstract thought...


nice read tho

[Esc0BosS]

i disagree, im not dickriding myself, its just i word things quite bluntly so it'd require some thought and most definately in this piece sum backround knowledge on what im speaking on to get what im really saying...

I leak em speakin freedom cuz ur path is destined,
wit backed direction due to a passed vast oppression,
unknowing how hopless our minds, there’s holes in the lies
open your eyes…its just a suggestion,
concealed beings breathing in a past confession
but being honest beckons a godless message stressing

^ like that shit makes sense, but i doubt niggaz know what im really saying, cuz if i was to read it i doubt i would... personally i think its something i should work on...

buh wdeva, if you think so and you understood it, shit im glad... appreciate tha loox #1

[Esc0BosS]

^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

[PIMA]

check out this

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...pe-388380.html

[fazeT]

A knowing all being soulda been knowing and for seeing
Of whores kneeling for cream, distort preaching to teens,
Kids getting caught stealing for feeds…
Kids getting caught steel wielding dealing to fiends
And I know there’s a meaning somewhere…
But guns spare theres someone scheming unfair
So muthafuking war’s breathing in dreams???
And damn the poor’s needy! But tha man with all greedy
…and ya’l all see it…keep telling me its all reasoned…one
^^
this part was cool
the whole thing had a cool message
had many multies
pretty cool shit
stay up

[Rosetti Frost]

For real is we seeing the department of love?
becoming just a farce from above?
Nah I seen it living…dead in an apartment of drugs

^

nice use of multis and i enjoyed this piece.......short read which was nice as it did'nt take but 5 minutes........it was worth it.............decent drop...........BTW i got the whole we all got the same tools shit..........which is really true when you think about it.................