LLL Week 2
Checkin due Wed 23.59 EST (late/no checkin = -2 votes)
Verses due Fri 23.59 EST
Line limit: 16 MIN, 30 MAX
Good luck.
LLL Week 2
Checkin due Wed 23.59 EST (late/no checkin = -2 votes)
Verses due Fri 23.59 EST
Line limit: 16 MIN, 30 MAX
Good luck.
AI
Any thing over 20 works for me nulb.
Good luck.
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doesnt work for me. i have 2 big ass exams this week. one thurs one on friday so im gonna be really hard pressed to get this in even. im going 16. drop 2nd if u like.
16 works.
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yah my bad, college works in waves. all the work piles on top at once.
Hmm change of heart I see?
This kid is always shit talkin, but wont put his neck on the line wat the hell,
Cus he got in his right mind, acted like a turtle n put that shit back in his shell!!
You’re a whore b n a homo with shit stains on his penis…. this mans dirty,
Reflex always on top of guys, like the hour hand over the minute at six thirty!!
Reminds me of Barcotic beefing in every thread, im gonna drown him instead,
im not letting this dirty kid in a shower, but water is gonna be over your head!!
I’ll let you punch me 10,000 times n not one hit will ever hurt,
Voters always feel awe/fila after readin ur verses…..n stomp em in the dirt!!
1000 posts in 3 months? This kid is some sort of a net phene,
But im gonna make Re Treat, like going to the same crib twice on Halloween!!
You stand no hope, when my razor spits come for your throat,
Face it last week you lost, only if Burden had extra sized his right to vote!!
Yah burd beat this pussy bad, lemme know if that cunt hurt,
Cus he got KNOCKED the fuck out 8-0 resembling Jerry Rices Number!!
Give it a rest n understand you’ll never think up a hot bar,
Mentioning the best? Everybody forgets about R,
…………..Like when New Englanders talk about pacing they caa!!
Last edited by Hexzen; February 9th, 2009 at 11:39 PM
Ted Nulb
He joined as a 14 year old but still an ill punch from you we’ve yet to see,
Cus in all his years here on RB only thing Sobe was able to hit is puberty!!Sobe
i'ma lyrical genius so screw it. against me with that shit u blew it
jesus, that verse was more pathetic then the research u put into it
Sobe destroyed him, look at these quotes.. he's past dead
I haven't seen two bars conflicting this bad, since the week 1 chat thread
For every opponent I've faced, he's by far the biggest time waste..
Seeing as how Ted's idea of a solid punch begins with kool aid & Ice trays
If it was true people are the sum of their parts, you should bail dog
because I would be an average human being - you'd be a fail blog..
I'm better with flow let it be known, the female tendencies ya sticking to
& the sound of ya leaving on a high note, well that's just the bitch in you
I'm humble, but he'll throw play punches like we're boys or something
If I'm ever throwing bows at ted, than it's strictly for the noise reduction
I'm not annoyed or nothing, if he was really a performer he'd show me
but you still wouldn't be in sync with your idols after signing up for karaoke
you're inconsistent & you lose matches, so try finishing a bit stronger
But I doubt you'd close the deal, even with help from Billy Mays & Vince offer
just don't be mad yo, no one's after you for battles ass hole..
cause your only following seems to be ya own five o'clock shadow
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Don't vote if you're unsure, just ask for clarification.
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coool. VOTES!
nothing
vs
Sobe destroyed him, look at these quotes.. he's past dead
I haven't seen two bars conflicting this bad, since the week 1 chat thread
For every opponent I've faced, he's by far the biggest time waste..
Seeing as how Ted's idea of a solid punch begins with kool aid & Ice trays
I'm humble, but he'll throw play punches like we're boys or something
If I'm ever throwing bows at ted, than it's strictly for the noise reduction
really one-sided match up here, Reflex came out better then last week as to were ted seemed to come out worst. I didn't see anything in Teds verse besides poorly worded punches and terrible concepts. Not saying you suck, but you probably wont be in LLL for much longer if you dont elevate soon man. Reflex gets this for a cool verse and good consistancy.
V/Reflex
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Ted
This kid is always shit talkin, but wont put his neck on the line wat the hell,
Cus he got in his right mind, acted like a turtle n put that shit back in his shell!!
Nah, wording is off n it's a simple concept..
You’re a whore b n a homo with shit stains on his penis…. this mans dirty,
Reflex always on top of guys, like the hour hand over the minute at six thirty!!
Wtf, no..
Reminds me of Barcotic beefing in every thread, im gonna drown him instead,
im not letting this dirty kid in a shower, but water is gonna be over your head!!
1st line shouldn't have been used, cuz unlike what you were TRYING to say, I backed up my words in my battle with $pit.. didn't like the 2nd line either..
I’ll let you punch me 10,000 times n not one hit will ever hurt,
Voters always feel awe/fila after readin ur verses…..n stomp em in the dirt!!
Weak wordplay here..
1000 posts in 3 months? This kid is some sort of a net phene,
But im gonna make Re Treat, like going to the same crib twice on Halloween!!
Weak n forced wordplay again, sorry.. it looks like you shouldn't be trying wordplay..
You stand no hope, when my razor spits come for your throat,
Face it last week you lost, only if Burden had extra sized his right to vote!!
Decent personal, kinda simple tho.. also, the 1st line had NOTHING to do with the 2nd so bad setup here..
Yah burd beat this pussy bad, lemme know if that cunt hurt,
Cus he got KNOCKED the fuck out 8-0 resembling Jerry Rices Number!!
Meh, decent only cuz it's a personal..
Give it a rest n understand you’ll never think up a hot bar,
Mentioning the best? Everybody forgets about R,
…………..Like when New Englanders talk about pacing they caa!!
Weak finish.. overall this verse wasn't good at all bruh.. you had maybe 2 decent personals, n they were only decent cuz they were personals.. you lacked hard punches, you lacked wordplay that works, n you this verse was just lacking period, sorry..
Re
Sobe destroyed him, look at these quotes.. he's past dead
I haven't seen two bars conflicting this bad, since the week 1 chat thread
Decent..
For every opponent I've faced, he's by far the biggest time waste..
Seeing as how Ted's idea of a solid punch begins with kool aid & Ice trays
Way too played.. punch/juice/kool aid shit?! come on, lol..
If it was true people are the sum of their parts, you should bail dog
because I would be an average human being - you'd be a fail blog..
Wtf, no..
I'm better with flow let it be known, the female tendencies ya sticking to
& the sound of ya leaving on a high note, well that's just the bitch in you
LOL, this was cool, I liked it..
I'm humble, but he'll throw play punches like we're boys or something
If I'm ever throwing bows at ted, than it's strictly for the noise reduction
Nah, not feelin..
I'm not annoyed or nothing, if he was really a performer he'd show me
but you still wouldn't be in sync with your idols after signing up for karaoke
Decent wordplay..
you're inconsistent & you lose matches, so try finishing a bit stronger
But I doubt you'd close the deal, even with help from Billy Mays & Vince offer
No, simple n weak..
just don't be mad yo, no one's after you for battles ass hole..
cause your only following seems to be ya own five o'clock shadow
Shadow shit is played.. overall this verse wasn't very good either bruh.. but a couple decent lines n a pretty nice one will get you the win here..
Punches: Re
Wordplay: Re
Personals: Ted
Structure: Both
Creativity: Ted
Consistency: Re (barely)
Flow & Multies: Re (barely)
\\//ote: Reflex. Not a good battle here..........
^kind of think u WANTED to vote against me after the beef thread line. but lets not turn this into a beef thread.
2-0 reflex.
Thanks for the votes; bumping for constructive feed back, or at the very least, honesty.
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^Shut up bitch.
Its the league, you aint gotta bump this man.
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1000 posts in 3 months? This kid is some sort of a net phene,
But im gonna make Re Treat, like going to the same crib twice on Halloween!!
....vs
I'm better with flow let it be known, the female tendencies ya sticking to
& the sound of ya leaving on a high note, well that's just the bitch in you
Very weak battle...Ted I have to agress ya verse was pretty weak you dropped waaayyyy better last week I don't know if you was rushing or sum shit but damn dawg you could've gone way harder ...next week put more time into your verse
reflex ya verse was kinda weak as well
none of ya had nothing that was real creative or real good more of a FL battle than a LLL battle both nned to step it up I dropped sumthing weak last week so I gotta go better this week...but kepp at it
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