Mr W.rite (0-0) vs. Noodle (1-0)

[Token]

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Current Champion: Token


Good luck

[Noodle]

holla. 16 is fine.

[Mr W.Rite]

sounds good homie

[Mr W.Rite]

we have both agreed to drop in the morning,
well....
i have to work during the day tomorrow, but i will drop in the morning first thing..
hope thats ok Token

[Noodle]

word, I'll edit my shit here tomorrow.

[Noodle]

Game...Set...

we have both agreed to drop in the morning,
well....
i have to work during the day tomorrow, but i will drop in the morning first thing..
hope thats ok Token

Working on a Saturday too? Damn, I respect it, but I'd never beg for the cash
Cause while you're busy bringing home the bacon...the world's bringing slavery back
W.rite's always been known as the bitch, so he's in a hurry to change it homies
But when it comes time for him to hold his horses...he'd rather think they're ponies
Don't be blaming the rust for your mishaps, you lack the skills for getting a laugh
Cause if your verses were anymore care-free they'd be on a Canadian medical staff
I'm gorgeous and I'm arrogant, while you're ugly as fuck...and lonely of course
But I'll allow you to eat your heart out, while I just sit back and show my support
And if we were to become vehicles, I'd kill you in a race and laugh, but I'm sorry
Since nobody would ever want to BMW when they could easily just have a Ferrari
Like I said before, you're a bitch and there's no way that I'm "just getting over it"
Dude, your secret's not safe with me...I'm not the one wearing woman's deodorant
You're a dinosaur in this shit with a wack style or you became dense rapidly
Cause while I'm the new cat, W.rite was the original...reason for cavemen battling
Stop rocking them BTK clothes, if you wanna get laid then be smarter, you homo
Otherwise, you'll end up posing like a thug...while holding your V card in the photo

...Match.

[Mr W.Rite]

Fuck it

lets go...



Schoolin these fools, I teach lessons…you beating W.Rite, this geek beckons
If this the NBA, you’d get a tech, holdin that ^ goal more than three seconds
You’re never amongst the best kid, while I’m still in a vengeance
I mention dopeness…can’t say the N word, without people feeling offended
Look what I found in the rummage,the fuck’s a Noodle? this clown’ll be done with
I’ll say on a scale, this bitch is a perfect ten…out of a hundred
You’re the weakest, in rare stance, and thought he’d get a fair chance
When Noodles the hardest, I’ll easily break this bitch, w/my bare hands
I won’t lose, my reps to win...don’t count on being the best of friends
Text hit a recession too…the moment the league decided to, let you in
Too late to save face, W.Rite’ll kill you, don’t let the losses mount up
Must be an alias…too ashamed to post under a name you’re proud of
Feel sorry for dukes…bastard child, we’ll let you in the league, so fuck it
Shit, even his family ties…his ass to trees so he won’t be seen in public
You’ve been trapped in wackness, why bother, im rapin this hooligan
I’d shake the rust dawg, then remembered im only facin you again





-W.Rite

[24 Karat]

Don't be blaming the rust for your mishaps, you lack the skills for getting a laugh
Cause if your verses were anymore care-free they'd be on a Canadian medical staff
I'm gorgeous and I'm arrogant, while you're ugly as fuck...and lonely of course
But I'll allow you to eat your heart out, while I just sit back and show my support


vs.


Schoolin these fools, I teach lessons…you beating W.Rite, this geek beckons
If this the NBA, you’d get a tech, holdin that ^ goal more than three seconds
You’re never amongst the best kid, while I’m still in a vengeance
I mention dopeness…can’t say the N word, without people feeling offended
You’re the weakest, in rare stance, and thought he’d get a fair chance
When Noodles the hardest, I’ll easily break this bitch, w/my bare hands
Too late to save face, W.Rite’ll kill you, don’t let the losses mount up
Must be an alias…too ashamed to post under a name you’re proud of
Feel sorry for dukes…bastard child, we’ll let you in the league, so fuck it
Shit, even his family ties…his ass to trees so he won’t be seen in public


w.rite killed it.

[Hexzen]

Don't be blaming the rust for your mishaps, you lack the skills for getting a laugh
Cause if your verses were anymore care-free they'd be on a Canadian medical staff
Stop rocking them BTK clothes, if you wanna get laid then be smarter, you homo
Otherwise, you'll end up posing like a thug...while holding your V card in the photo


vs


Schoolin these fools, I teach lessons…you beating W.Rite, this geek beckons
If this the NBA, you’d get a tech, holdin that ^ goal more than three seconds
Look what I found in the rummage,the fuck’s a Noodle? this clown’ll be done with
I’ll say on a scale, this bitch is a perfect ten…out of a hundred
You’re the weakest, in rare stance, and thought he’d get a fair chance
When Noodles the hardest, I’ll easily break this bitch, w/my bare hands
You’ve been trapped in wackness, why bother, im rapin this hooligan
I’d shake the rust dawg, then remembered im only facin you again



Overall - Noodle had some potential in a couple of his bars but lacked execution. W.rite has that rare style his bars arent extremely wittie or complex but flow really well n are worded to perfection that he makes em out to be hard hitting. which is ill. i got w.rite winnning this by a decent amount.



Vote - W.rite

[Sting3r]

W.rite's always been known as the bitch, so he's in a hurry to change it homies
But when it comes time for him to hold his horses...he'd rather think they're ponies
I'm gorgeous and I'm arrogant, while you're ugly as fuck...and lonely of course
But I'll allow you to eat your heart out, while I just sit back and show my support
Like I said before, you're a bitch and there's no way that I'm "just getting over it"
Dude, your secret's not safe with me...I'm not the one wearing woman's deodorant

Vs.



You’re never amongst the best kid, while I’m still in a vengeance
I mention dopeness…can’t say the N word, without people feeling offended
I won’t lose, my reps to win...don’t count on being the best of friends
Text hit a recession too…the moment the league decided to, let you in
Too late to save face, W.Rite’ll kill you, don’t let the losses mount up
Must be an alias…too ashamed to post under a name you’re proud of
Feel sorry for dukes…bastard child, we’ll let you in the league, so fuck it
Shit, even his family ties…his ass to trees so he won’t be seen in public
You’ve been trapped in wackness, why bother, im rapin this hooligan
I’d shake the rust dawg, then remembered im only facin you again


I've got write with a few more quotables. Good verse noodles. I just didn't find enjoyment in some of the wording. G/L good battle.

v/ write

[Jackie Moon]

And if we were to become vehicles, I'd kill you in a race and laugh, but I'm sorry
Since nobody would ever want to BMW when they could easily just have a Ferrari
Like I said before, you're a bitch and there's no way that I'm "just getting over it"
Dude, your secret's not safe with me...I'm not the one wearing woman's deodorant
ONLY THING I LIKED IN HIS VERSE EVERYTHIGNS ELSE WAS LESS THAN DECENT TO DECENT N' PLAYED,

VS.

You’re never amongst the best kid, while I’m still in a vengeance
I mention dopeness…can’t say the N word, without people feeling offended
Feel sorry for dukes…bastard child, we’ll let you in the league, so fuck it
Shit, even his family ties…his ass to trees so he won’t be seen in public
ONLY BARS QUOTABLE, EVERYTHIGN I SAID TO NOODLE GOES FOR YOU THE SAME
BUT THAT FUCKIN FAMILY TIES BAR WAS NICE AS FUCK

V/WRITE STRONGER VERSE REALLY CLOSE BATTLE THOUGH.

[2triple0]

Working on a Saturday too? Damn, I respect it, but I'd never beg for the cash
Cause while you're busy bringing home the bacon...the world's bringing slavery back
nah
W.rite's always been known as the bitch, so he's in a hurry to change it homies
But when it comes time for him to hold his horses...he'd rather think they're ponies
woow... no
Don't be blaming the rust for your mishaps, you lack the skills for getting a laugh
Cause if your verses were anymore care-free they'd be on a Canadian medical staff
alright not the best wordplay wasn't very hard hitting
I'm gorgeous and I'm arrogant, while you're ugly as fuck...and lonely of course
But I'll allow you to eat your heart out, while I just sit back and show my support
nah... no punch here
And if we were to become vehicles, I'd kill you in a race and laugh, but I'm sorry
Since nobody would ever want to BMW when they could easily just have a Ferrari
huh? didn't get hte reference here
Like I said before, you're a bitch and there's no way that I'm "just getting over it"
Dude, your secret's not safe with me...I'm not the one wearing woman's deodorant
ok... this was the first bar i liked and it wasn't all that great
You're a dinosaur in this shit with a wack style or you became dense rapidly
Cause while I'm the new cat, W.rite was the original...reason for cavemen battling
this was just ok, nothing too special here
Stop rocking them BTK clothes, if you wanna get laid then be smarter, you homo
Otherwise, you'll end up posing like a thug...while holding your V card in the photo
still just decent stuff here, nothing amazing

vs

Schoolin these fools, I teach lessons…you beating W.Rite, this geek beckons
If this the NBA, you’d get a tech, holdin that ^ goal more than three seconds
i liked the set up here more than the punch
You’re never amongst the best kid, while I’m still in a vengeance
I mention dopeness…can’t say the N word, without people feeling offended
this was good nameplay
Look what I found in the rummage,the fuck’s a Noodle? this clown’ll be done with
I’ll say on a scale, this bitch is a perfect ten…out of a hundred
lol good stuff
You’re the weakest, in rare stance, and thought he’d get a fair chance
When Noodles the hardest, I’ll easily break this bitch, w/my bare hands
this was nice too.. could have been worded a little better, but still thought this was good...
I won’t lose, my reps to win...don’t count on being the best of friends
Text hit a recession too…the moment the league decided to, let you in
nice, haven't seen this concept before.. i like it, very relevant
Too late to save face, W.Rite’ll kill you, don’t let the losses mount up
Must be an alias…too ashamed to post under a name you’re proud of
this was alright... didn't hit too hard, but still relevant
Feel sorry for dukes…bastard child, we’ll let you in the league, so fuck it
Shit, even his family ties…his ass to trees so he won’t be seen in public
i thought this was alright... good flip but the punch wasn't really that hard
You’ve been trapped in wackness, why bother, im rapin this hooligan
I’d shake the rust dawg, then remembered im only facin you again
great ending! good shit write...


overall: i think write came a lot harder than he did last week... he definitely took the win in this battle. i don't know much about noodle, but he needs to work on his structure and punches...


vote: Write

[Barcotic]

Don't be blaming the rust for your mishaps, you lack the skills for getting a laugh
Cause if your verses were anymore care-free they'd be on a Canadian medical staff
I'm gorgeous and I'm arrogant, while you're ugly as fuck...and lonely of course
But I'll allow you to eat your heart out, while I just sit back and show my support

Vs

You’re never amongst the best kid, while I’m still in a vengeance
I mention dopeness…can’t say the N word, without people feeling offended
Feel sorry for dukes…bastard child, we’ll let you in the league, so fuck it
Shit, even his family ties…his ass to trees so he won’t be seen in public

So overall ya'll were tied in quotables but when it comes down to misses, Write wasn't as bad.. there were a COUPLE more bars I thought about quoting but they were just too simple of concepts.. Noodle, I liked last week's verse better tbh, and Write, you need to work on some better setups (not for every bar but for the most part).. \\//ote: Mr W.Rite

[iL3GO]

Don't be blaming the rust for your mishaps, you lack the skills for getting a laugh
Cause if your verses were anymore care-free they'd be on a Canadian medical staff
And if we were to become vehicles, I'd kill you in a race and laugh, but I'm sorry
Since nobody would ever want to BMW when they could easily just have a Ferrari

vs

You’re never amongst the best kid, while I’m still in a vengeance
I mention dopeness…can’t say the N word, without people feeling offended
You’re the weakest, in rare stance, and thought he’d get a fair chance
When Noodles the hardest, I’ll easily break this bitch, w/my bare hands

Pretty even with the quotables but the difference was that i enjoyed writes verse more. He had the consistant verse while Noodle had 3 borings lines followed by a good one and so forth.

v~>Write

[Tony B]

And if we were to become vehicles, I'd kill you in a race and laugh, but I'm sorry
Since nobody would ever want to BMW when they could easily just have a Ferrari
setup was kinda stupid tho imo
You're a dinosaur in this shit with a wack style or you became dense rapidly
Cause while I'm the new cat, W.rite was the original...reason for cavemen battling
Stop rocking them BTK clothes, if you wanna get laid then be smarter, you homo
Otherwise, you'll end up posing like a thug...while holding your V card in the photo

vs

You’re never amongst the best kid, while I’m still in a vengeance
I mention dopeness…can’t say the N word, without people feeling offended
You’re the weakest, in rare stance, and thought he’d get a fair chance
When Noodles the hardest, I’ll easily break this bitch, w/my bare hands
You’ve been trapped in wackness, why bother, im rapin this hooligan
I’d shake the rust dawg, then remembered im only facin you again

noodles came iight but write was way more consistent

v/ Mr. Write