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    Rap Battle Genius

    The first part the mind state i enter before i battle
    the second part is a battle i used last week completely freestyle just going off of memory......

    part 1

    this feeling is so sick i'm gonna spit it wicked and make sure he gets it.
    lyrical weapons in check like mic check the mind set of a battle MC.
    plenty words to come with in this next verse, listenin to him spit.
    shit i might lose this but i can't have that in my brain....
    i have me winnin on this sick beat constantly replayin in my head.
    so instead i boost my confidents cause whether i'm ready or not
    it's on with the show, so i show what i've got.....

    (X-RT it's your turn give it to im)

    (the battle)
    yo yo, i'm a lyrical don mega i'm comin out like the new 360 you still on sega.
    genesis you more like a wanna be emcee enemy not my equal villian nemesis.
    enter this battle you better come prepared cuz you would never think it's fair.
    when i spit more crunches than bone crusher in i ain't ever scared.
    i spit out vicious punchlines that crush rhymes so sick that i throw up.
    rap on stage you might blow up...go to iraq i say you might blow up....
    X-RT an expert you still an intermediate......
    yo, watch your mouth, cuz i spit with this shit so sick.
    you might get a dick in it, you finished deminished i am replinished.
    ready to go another round while your out and down for the count.
    to step to me you have to wreck emcees with each verse.
    and you so served you're like cheque please.....

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    Re: Rap Battle Genius

    Your structers weak wich throws off the reader completely to a general flow and a basic rhyme scheme. Also your keystyle in the first part was lacking... rhyme? You need alot of work, if i were you i'd stick to slow and steady... u seem to have a good eye for wordplay you just can't follow threw with set ups and steps. Stay up but keep practising

    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...nk-399845.html

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    Re: Rap Battle Genius

    wasn't really feeling that first part. I get what your trying to do... but it wasn't really a good read.

    i liked this line...

    i spit out vicious punchlines that crush rhymes so sick that i throw up.

    but wished you coulda done somethin different with it afterwards. good shit though. I'll keep an eye on your posts for sure.

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    Re: Rap Battle Genius

    closed. no links. leave feedback and pm me the 2 links and this will be reopened.

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