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Big_Terror_8:13
s3oul
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My flow crushin s3oul like a mole beneath a mallet,
this hoe'll get felled thats the truth and i tell it...even if you got a little talent
in my spell you just dwell...quelled now and hell sent
i swell then...wreck your smiles...when my flow blow like chrome pro-jectiles....
your so tweq i'll ...leave this fag in a bag toe-tag filed
DECEACED...since at least .....8:13....your brain i fuckin ate cuz you aint that worthy
hurry .....cuz times steady tickin toward your end....
burn this dirty trick when i stick him with my pen....stiffin with venom..i quit your bitch livin
you peice of shit...just rip*(R.I.P.)you twit
condemned
got two minutes homie
I had you so stressed, even before this was laid, you were beat son ..
I gave you fourhead lines so big, XXL Mag paid you for each one ..
Have ya crew you jumpin me? pshh who'd even go in it?
Because terror squad's so small.... even with Fat Joe in it ..
Dude's no challenge like trying to keep balance on a life boat
I'll stay afloat .. while this bitch falls off carrying steel over tight rope
A regular at gay pubs, a queen bitch, now wear ya crown
His verse's a bad clown, 'cause like 'SpaceBars' all it gets are 'Thumbs Down'
Shit, your lines tend to stretch more than a fat boy's jeans ..
Wonder why he still up, ain't his bedtime eight thirteen?
WHATEVER ..
10
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lets keep goin a second round so to say and everybody votin can vote on the whole thing ....lol or is that against the "rules"
My flow crushin s3oul like a mole beneath a mallet,
this hoe'll get felled thats the truth and i tell it...even if you got a little talent
in my spell you just dwell...quelled now and hell sent
i swell then...wreck your smiles...when my flow blow like chrome pro-jectiles....
your so tweq i'll ...leave this fag in a bag toe-tag filed
DECEACED...since at least .....8:13....your brain i fuckin ate cuz you aint that worthy
hurry .....cuz times steady tickin toward your end....
burn this dirty trick when i stick him with my pen....stiffin with venom..i quit your bitch livin
you peice of shit...just rip*(R.I.P.)you twit
condemned
^ Your bars are so messy it's hard to read, I don't think you even threw a punch...
VS
I had you so stressed, even before this was laid, you were beat son ..
I gave you fourhead lines so big, XXL Mag paid you for each one ..
Lol nice
Have ya crew you jumpin me? pshh who'd even go in it?
Because terror squad's so small.... even with Fat Joe in it ..
Meh ok...
Dude's no challenge like trying to keep balance on a life boat
I'll stay afloat .. while this bitch falls off carrying steel over tight rope
Ok...
A regular at gay pubs, a queen bitch, now wear ya crown
His verse's a bad clown, 'cause like 'SpaceBars' all it gets are 'Thumbs Down'
Meh ok..
Shit, your lines tend to stretch more than a fat boy's jeans ..
Wonder why he still up, ain't his bedtime eight thirteen?
Cool nameplay weak punch
V/S3oul easily. Big terror you need to structre your bars neater and work on better punchlines
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...085/index.html
Have ya crew you jumpin me? pshh who'd even go in it?
Because terror squad's so small.... even with Fat Joe in it ..
A regular at gay pubs, a queen bitch, now wear ya crown
His verse's a bad clown, 'cause like 'SpaceBars' all it gets are 'Thumbs Down'
Shit, your lines tend to stretch more than a fat boy's jeans ..
Wonder why he still up, ain't his bedtime eight thirteen?
vs
Confusion
Big T started off the first line okay but then flowed no where after that. no punches, name play, word play, structure was all over the place. Had some multi's but they ended up to be apart of nothin...
s3oul had some nice name play and the Space Bar line had some creativity to it...
v/ s3
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S3OUL RETURN THE VOTE.
yea.. terror you gotta work on your structure, man. it's messy. too hard to read. try mimic other styles that appear clean. i think that could help you. hmm, ur punches weren't really all that. try adding a little more wit, man. don't worry. u'll get it. s3oul.. u done enough to win, man. lmao @ the terror squad line. niice. you didn't need anything else.
v/s3oul.
My flow crushin s3oul like a mole beneath a mallet,
this hoe'll get felled thats the truth and i tell it...even if you got a little talent
in my spell you just dwell...quelled now and hell sent
i swell then...wreck your smiles...when my flow blow like chrome pro-jectiles....
your so tweq i'll ...leave this fag in a bag toe-tag filed
huh? its hard to understand, had to read it twice
vs
I had you so stressed, even before this was laid, you were beat son ..
I gave you fourhead lines so big, XXL Mag paid you for each one ..
Have ya crew you jumpin me? pshh who'd even go in it?
Because terror squad's so small.... even with Fat Joe in it ..
good game, no re, the oopener ended it
v-s3oul
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