Avalon [1-0] vs Phrantik [0-1]*

[Sand]

Check In By.... Friday
Post By.... Sunday
Vote By....Tuesday


Topic

living in the shadows

[fastforwords]

haha.
ok lets go.

[Brandon Heat]

A yo... there is no possible way I'll be able to post by Sunday...



as I type I'm at the airport on my laptop waitin to board a plane to NJ... *shrugs shoulders* If I get time... I'll post... if not... Can I get an extention..? If so... It'll be here... Monday... by 2 pm... eastern...


That's the only way I can drop... If not... Phrant... me and you will just do this on front lines...




by the way... the topic is gay...





Thanks...


Honorably yours...


The afro-newmerican kid...
Avalon...

[Brandon Heat]

nevermind... let me drop for 15 mins... wrong plane... gotta wait...



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Good evening...


Pleased to have you share this...


I have a... how should I put this... I have... the thoughts... of... well...

Picture this... Destiny... a 22 year old woman... about 5'7 in height... beautiful face... lovely body... dating Avalon... walking talking to Av on her cell... (in the middle of the call)


Avalon: Yea babe...

Destiny: Yea... *sigh* I don't know what's wrong... I'll be home soon...

Avalon: Ok Des... Love you...


Destiny: Mmmm I love you too... bye...


*click*
all of a sudden... a familiar yet scary voice from her past speaks to her out of the darkness... it whispers at first...

pssst... Destiny...


Destiny... your destiny is us...


psst...


Yesterday with eyes open,
Destiny... saw your reflection and I... at the same time died focused whilest showin=...
pain and sickness... Janes addiction patiently waitin-
debatin and creatin.. stops and goes often shown tainted...
painted as I walk and merk... next time its you I hurt,
one door with two exits... first stay and first to desert...
flow into worse times... designed so simple,
plague women and girls alike... blood from innocense... so gentle...
mental and physical... control over thou I have,
fetal positioned in bed... cramped your style to make you mad...
happy and sad... frustrated with trust of men,
in one months time one's week thrusts... and truth thus is gone again...
whore-moan-all imbalance... this is talent,
walk with me, hand in hand, deconstruct ovaries w/ no sign of challenge...
AIDS and rain... ages range...
from roughly 42 years of pain down to 12 and younger... not much change...



HELLO DESTINY..! REMEMBER ME..?!



Been through needles and viles, greed, smiles and all things,
holdin me in... keepin me down Always. can't without wings...
It's your time... HI DESTINY, I'm comin for you,
if your life was on the line... would you know it as truth..?
sleepin with freaks and hoes,
staining the sheets, pray and hopefully I just let go...
You're mine now... cry and try to get out of my grasp,
you're in my dark now... I'll lay and stay this won't be over to fast...
OPEN UP SLUT..! I'm here for you..! don't panic,
FUCK THE CUNT..! you can move... in pussy I'll manage...
Dentiny broken down nine in the evening,
sensitivity, instability than cramps and heavy breathing...
heavy or soft... flow... you run from me,
gettin me off... hard as can be you see, period...
fakin the move, not in the mood to please,
Im in it! now bleed... Get it yet..? I'm Destiny's period...



Get it... a woman's period starts inside of the vagina... it... LIVES IN THE DARK... it's her destiny cause... they all get it... get it..?





Good luck Phrant...


I'm out...





Avalon...

[The End]

I think you are the first male I have ever seen write about a womans period. I'll check back later and vote on this.

[Criminal Intent]

that makes u look very gay but it was also mad creative. That wa some good shit. (i was just jokin bout gay)

waitin on phrantiks verse

[Brandon Heat]

Thanks for not showin Phrant... You just keep losin more and more and more and more respect... not like you had any...



as a matter of fact... I'll personally give you a 1 day extention... Do something with it...