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Thread: "AIDS NEVER DIES"~Deep track~Drop Links~

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    Tha_Produca
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    "AIDS NEVER DIES"~Deep track~Drop Links~

    Yo aids something tru and serious
    it'll turn the toughest people to babies and delerious
    how can you rap about gold
    when millions can't grow old
    it came from a monkey
    or did it?
    maybe the government did it?
    and they just to pussy to admit it
    i'm afraid they scared grave diggin'
    now you gotta wrap it up when you dick stickin'
    then you hear the news that your brotha got it
    it was like some thug just shot em'
    but a little worst
    cause when he walks the street he was belittled and cursed
    he might as well have been in da hurst
    no, its not fair its got you like murder its out there
    now young females are out scared
    that if they kiss a dude they'll get it too
    so little facts about a diesease
    a billion will die before they find out these things
    Still only the family cries for they god son
    and no one gave a fuck before magic johnson
    so who will give a fuck when comes to you
    will you accept and die
    or pass it on like hot soup
    Then they kill Saddam and drop bombs on him
    when they should be fixing condoms
    if they would educate the kids today
    maybe in twenty years we won't live this way
    and they said it was just for the gays why don't you ask N.W.A.
    but ever since the sixties poeple have suffered
    suffered just like in Nam and just like my brotha
    lying in a concerete room full of screams
    life isn't always what it seems
    maybe not to you in front of screens
    but out there on the scence
    up down and up again of "shit it broke"
    and those were the final words he spoke
    Aids are worse then the crack you smoke
    or fat people havin' heart attack and strokes
    its a different thing with a different feelin'
    casue billions of peopel its still killin'



    TRYIN' TO RAISE AWARENESS

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    this drop was aight , i was kind of feelin it , , return tha favour and give me some feedback on my first drop here http://63.219.149.14/forum/showthrea...threadid=41388

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    Rock you in the Face Sir Skiddz SoPhrenic's Avatar
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    i liked this piece, it was a topic I could feel, but my suggestion is you need a lil more work on wordplay and you need to paint more of an image
    check out my pieces
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    NONCENTZ AKA WORD~PERFECT noncentz's Avatar
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    i liked this needs some work but what doesnt tight drop
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    Av1r3x
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    good meaddage but ya needa expand ya bars or sumthin.I feel where u comin from tho.Check my piece "Notha Day in Tha Life." Stay ^
    -Avi

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