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    Something clicked

    Beat - http://soundclick.com/share?songid=8867874

    No lie like I said its been two years since ive done anything worth doing so correct me up give me tips on making it better pros for advice

    Somethin clicked in my head, Another voice tellin me to make Rap Dead
    Took me a few years but in a sec, I told that voice to suck my Dick
    Facin therapy give me pills go ahead, School gives a - Throw me in special Ed
    I mutated to a retarded head, I wanna follow in the footsteps of a dead dad
    In his life he just focused on meth, could give a - about his kid Neth
    Someone crushed this family's crest, Jesus ha you left us in a mess
    Catholics to be honest make me sick, all I ever said was fuck this
    I took shits on teachers assignments, like you know me we never ment
    You judge me isnt that pathetic, I gotta find my moment who gives a shit

    Still focusing on it

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    Re: Something clicked

    uppin

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    Re: Something clicked

    record it, people have different styles and speeds in their delivery, we can better understand how you plan to approach it and give feedback on it if we can see how you deliver the lyrics you wrote for this

    as for the lyrics, they are pretty generic, couldnt pick them out of a line up
    work on something a little more profound

    again id say record it and then repost this with that mixed together, if you arent audio capable at the moment then id say work on your lyrical development until that point, and then revisit this when you can record it and can seek advice from there

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